MG-I Luv teasing you! Part6-page9/ apr8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-1
"Geet, u r not coming for the picnic?" one of her friend asked, which earned her a glare from an extreamly annoyed geet. She turned to her other friend asking as to what happen to their geetu to get so irritated & upset? "Ani, kya hua?" ani got the perfect chance to tease her dear geetu..and how can she ever leave that?..so she replied causually.."kuch nahi yaar pooja. Its just that..k she wont be getting permission for our collage picnic..thats why, muh fula ke baithi hai..madam!"..she was successful in her task, as next moment a book came flying her way which she caught in time..before it can hit her. And to add some more fuel to that already burning fire...she again teased.."itna gussa..tch..tch!" and bit her lips to stop her smile. Another book came and this time it hit her head..as she missed it with just a second. "mujhe kyun maar rahi hai..stupid! I am not the one, stoping u from going on this picnic!" she shouted while rubbing her head where the book had hit her...no the book didnt hit her that hard but whats the harm in showing.. that it did! And what she got in reply made her regrat her earlier thought.."Ani ki bachii, kamini..jyada ushal mat! If i didnt got the permission na...toh tu bhi nahi jaane wali..remember that!"...saying this geet twisted her lips at her and left the canteen. "geet sunn na..plz.." shouted ani and ran behind geet to stop her from spoiling her picnic plans!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interestng cont sn ! ll be waitng
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting...maan ne permission nhi di aisa lag rha he...continue soon
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awsome concept
waiting for next😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-2
She rushed in the mansion, shouting "mom...mom.."...she was going towards the kichen when she noticed someones presence in the hall. Going to that person, she greeted, "hi dadima" she hugged her followed by a kiss on her cheeks..."hi beta..how was ur day?" asked dadi cressing her head luvingly. "bilkul bhi achha nahi tha dadi!" she replied. Before dadi could ask her the reason, she asked the question on which her life depend at that moment, "dadi, mom kahan hai?" dadi smild at her "woh apne room me hon..." she didnt even wait for dadi to complete and ran her moms room. Dadi just shook her head at her pagli granddauter.
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Reaching at the door, she started her cribing.."hamesha mere sath hi aesa hota hai...no one luvs me here!" and that caught moms attention, as she has expected. Mom looked at her questionigly..on that she said making complainig face.."mom u also dont luv me..haina?" and looked at her mom with that cute & adorable face..knowing very well that what effect it has on her mom.
And sure enough, next minute, mom was at her side, leaving those saries which she was arrenging in the cupboard. "what happend gudiya? Why are u saying like this?" mom asked worriedly seeing her gudiya so upset. When she didnt got any reply she asked again "gudiya, bol na kya hua?" "Acha pehle yahan baitho!" mom made her sit on the bed n asked, cupping her face "ab bata kya hua iss bar?" and geet told her what happend in collage and how anni was teasing her. "mom, i also want to go for the picnic! Aur agar main nahi gai.. toh..uss anni ko bhi nahi jane dungi..am telling u!" she stated, clearing that anni cant go without her. Mom smiled seeing her angery pouted face..she would do anything to make her gudiya happy. "ofcourse gudiya! Ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai. Agar tu nahi jayegi toh anni bhi nahi jayegi"..asured mom. That consoled geet a little bit.. But this is 2nd option. She didnt want to miss this trip... She really wanted to go. So she should concentrate on that thing first. She tried to convince mom..so that, she supports her and helps her to get the permission. "But mom..i really want to go for this trip...plz..plz..plz mom, aap baat karoge na? Mom plz..mujhe jana hai!"..she literaly cried at the end..requesting her mom. And mom couldnt see her darling daughter crying like that.. she hugged her saying "acha baba..dont cry. Main baat karungi..ok!" But geet wasnt convinced yet.."promise?"..she asked cutely..."promise!"...replied mom, smiling at her cute gudiya. And that brought the smile back on geets face. She hugged her mom really tight.."I luv u.. I luv u.. I luv u..soo much" and kissed her both cheeks making mom chukled at her crazy daughter. A minute before she was so upset...but with just a promise, she is back to her cheerful mode.

Suddenly, remembring something mom asked her "gudiya, where is anni?"..she wanted to deal with that devil who is always behind her gudiya. And today she made her cry..how dare she? "aur kahan hogi mom. Gai hogi meri chugali karne.. Mumma ke paas. Kamini kahin ki" answered geet irritatingly, whispering the last part.

precap:
cat fight!
Edited by Hunartheart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
awesome...
so this is Annie's home?
and Annie has gone to Geet's home?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mom is annie's mom and mumma is geet's mom...i m damn sure maan is one who is not giving permission for the trip...waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
geet in annie's home n annie in geet's home!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO GEET WENT TO ANNIE'S HOUSE AND ANNIE TO GEET'S
SOUNDS INTERESTING
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wow nice interesting looking forward to read this update soon.,.😊

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