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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

😆 loved geet n Annie's Tom & Jerry fight 😆 😆 she prayed moov on Annie's hair
Interestg concept. Loved all d hilarious update

thanks for liking!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

Hehe
This is was amazing update

geet is so naughty
continue soon

glad that u liked geets naughtiness!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Sumi45


Geet is such cute pie,love this fight with annie.wait for next update.thanks to pm me

thanks for comment as well as like!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: 26_chaitra

Datzzz amazing :)

superb concept :) superb updates :) :)

thank u sooo much!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: zmakh

when will the heroo enter want to seee..:(

in next chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: spvd

part 5
nice part...
these 2 are so naughty...
waiting for Maan...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u post the link when u update in this thread?
FF Daily Updates 5

i m doing that from the very begining dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Part6

"mom, ye sab karna zaruri hai kya?"...geet cribed again. "gudiya, do u want to go to that trip or not?"..mom asked ignoring her cribing! Geet noded a yes making a baby face. "than do it properly!"..mom said sternly!
Mom has planed something to get her gudiya permission for her collage trip..but geet wasnt convience with the plan. She knew that its not that easy! But she couldnt say it to mom..as she dont hav any other plan.. so decided to do what mom is saying!
***

He entered the house & directly went to his room. One of the servent ran into the kichan to give the news of his arrival.

...
He has just came outof the washroom after having a shower..when he heard a nock on his room door. "come in"..he said while wiping his wet hair with a towel.
He heard a few mumers before the door open and then his mom entered with his coffee, followed by mom's darling daughter!
He instently knew that they were here for a reason! He looked at them questioningly..while they smiled at him sweetly!
"maan beta, how was ur day?"..mom asked handing him, his coffee. "it was good mom"..he replied taking the coffee mug.
He sattled on the bed sipping his coffee..mom too sat on the bed across him while geet stood near mom. "maan taste this..ur fav choclate cake.." ..mom said while offering him the plate with a peice of cake.. "gudiya ne banaya hai..specially tumhare liye"..mom completed!
Maan who has was about to taste the cake..stoped hearing that geet has made it..that too "specially for him"! "Kuch toh khichdi pakk rahi hai inn dono me"..maan thought looking at both of them... Who were talking to eachother with eyes.
"are sure mom, ye cake isne banaya hai?"..asked maan suspeciously. "han beta. Tum taste toh karo"..mom replied offering a bite to him. "mujhe nahi khana. I luv my life mom.." he said and didnt took that bite. "aisa kyun bol rahe ho beta?"..mom asked puzzeled. Geet too was confused with his talks!
"mom, ek coffee toh isse dhang se banani nahi aati.. Chocolate cake kya banayegi ye!"..maan replied with a smirk.
"mom..!"..geet cribed..pouting at his taunt!
***
note:
i know its too short..but i will update the next part soon & will be regular now!
Edited by Hunartheart - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice update
loved it
geet and mom on a mission
maan teasing geet
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
nnice update
maan teasing geet
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
part 6
awesome...
hahaha that was funny...
cont soon dear...

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