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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Hinal...
i loved the way they r trying to move forward with each other by being friends
Robbie is so shararti...
i think Arman has come for pag phere...dekhte hain
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 8


Hearing this Geet got embarrassed and she was about to say Robie to stop when she saw Armaan coming so she went and hugged him and told in her mind "Thank you Babaji aapne sahi waqt pe Armaan Bhai ko bhej diya warna Robie toh mera band he baja deta"(Thank you Babaji u sent Armaan bro at the right time or else Robie would have embarrassed me only)


Then she asked Armaan "Bhai aap itni subah ya pe koi kaam tha kya?Sab kuch thik toh hai na?"(Bro u are here so early in morning??? Everything is fine right???)


Armaan "Meri jhalli ,thand rakh ,saas tho le le aur ghar mein sab thik hai .Mein tho tujhe pag phere ki rasam ke liye ghar le janne aaya hu" (My crazy sister, calm down, breathe at least n everyone at home is fine. I came to take u home for pag phere ritual)


Then seeing all on the dinning table wishes the, good morning.


Dadi "Aree Armaan beta khade kyun ho bheto aur nastha karo humare saath aur aaj ka nastha Geet ne bhanaya hai" (Arre Armaan why are u standing plz sit n have breakfast today Geet has prepared it)


Hearing this Armaan "Nahi, Dadi main theek hu... Mujhe nastha nahi karna hai...mujhe subah subah hospital mein bharti nahi hona hai" (No Dadi im fine... I dont want to have breakfast as I dont want to be admitted to hospital in the morning itself)


Hearing this Shilpa "Lekin hospital mein kese bharti ho sakte hai bhabhi ke haath ka bana huva kahana khake???" (But how will u be admitted to the hospital by eating Bhabhi's hand made food???)

Geet "Armaan kuch nahi khana hai mat kaho but plzzz ye kheer apki fav hai na tho plzzz taste karke bathao na kesi bani hai" (Armaan if u dont want to have anything fine but plzzz taste ur fav kheer at least n tell how is it)


Armaan seeing her pleading face n then seeing d tempting kheer couldn't tell No.


Armaan "Geet,theek hai de main taste kartha hu par sirf tu kehe rahi thi is liye" (Geet fine give me I'll taste it just bcoz u are telling ok)


Then Geet smiles n serves him the kheer.


Armaan "Geet, iss baar kheer mein shakhar hi dali hai na pichli baar ki tarha namak tho nahi dala. Yaad hai teri uss kheer ko meine pura khaliya tha ,taki koi aur taste na kare aur tera maazak na udaye aur uske next din mujhe hospital mei bharti hona pada tha" (Geet this time u have put sugar only right not salt like last time right. U remember I ate the whole kheer so that no one else would eat it n make fun of u n the next day I had to be admitted to hospital)

Hearing this Geet becomes embarrassed n all of them start laughing hearing Armaan's plight.

Shilpa "Dekh bhai Armaan ne puri namak wali kheer khali taki bhabhi ka koi mazak na uda sake aur ek aap ho meri kheer ki ek bite lekar sari kheer dustbin mein dal di" ( See bro Armaan had the whole salted kheer so that no one would make fun of bhabhi n u took 1 bite n threw the whole kheer in the dustbin)

Veer "Yeh kab huva tha beta, aap ne humare liye tho kabhi kheer nahi banai??" (When did this happen dear,why u never made kheer for us??)


Shil[a "Nahi dad uss din ghar mein koi nahi tha ,aap sab Mumbai gaye the shaadi ki shopping karne aur ghar mein sirf mei aur bhai the" (No dad that day no one was at home, u all had gone to Mumbai for wedding shopping n only I n bro were at home)

Madhuri "Maan, koi aisa kartha hai kya ,ek tho pheli baar tumhari behen ne kheer bani thi aur tumne usse dustbin mei phek diya." (Maan does anyone do like this, first of all ur sister made sweet for the first time n u threw it in the dustbin)

Maan "Nahi mom ,aap Shilpa se pooch lijiye main tho sari kheer leli thi aur apne kamre mei jakar kha lithi" (No mom, u ask Shilpa I had taken the whole kheer n I had gone to my room n finished it fully)

Shilpa takes out the mobile n shows a video to Geet n Robbie. Seeing the video Geet n Robbie starts laughing like mads n Robbie falls down from the chair laughing.


Seeing this all are watching the 3 n wondering y are they laughing all of a sudden.

Then Shilpa shows the video to all except Maan n seeing the video all start laughing.

So Maan pulls Shilpa's mobile n saw the video where after taking the 1st bite Maan finishes the whole water kept in the room in one go n starts pacing around the room making faces n holding his stomach n couldn't stop visiting the washroom every 5 mins.

Maan "Tho main aur kya kartha itni mirchi dali thi aur vo bhi kheer mein" (Then what else was I to do... so much chilly powder n that too in kheer)

Everyone stars laughing n making fun of Shilpa except Geet.


Geet "Ok people silence, so it is decided that after making sooo much fun of our cooked food tmrw breakfast will be made by Dad, Robbie and..."


Hearing this Maam interrupted saying "All the best Dad and Robbie...prepare a nice breakfast jis se in ladkiyo ka muh hamesha ke liye bhand ho jaye" (All the best Dad and Robbie...prepare a nice breakfast which shuts these girls mouths forever)

Hearing this Geet opened her mouth wide n said "Hello Mr.Maan Singh Khurana aapko bhi kal inke saath nasatha bana na hai aur hum ladies aaram se uthege aur aaram se nastha karege aur hum menu raat ko decide karke dedenge. Kal mazaa ayeega hai na Shilpa...badhe aaye the humara mazak udane" (Hello Mr.Maan Singh Khurana even u have to prepare breakfast with them n we ladies will get up late n will have the breakfast n menu we will decide st night n give. Tmrw we will have lots of fun right Shilpa...came off to make fun of us) n hi 5 eachother.

Maan "Par kal tho mujhe jaldi office jana hai ek important meeting hai so I cant join u all" (But tmrw I have to go early to office for an important meeting so I cant join u all)


Robbie "Bhai kal Sunday hai ,Sunday ko office badh hoti hai" (Bro tmrw is sunday n office is closed on sunday)


Veer added "Aur kal koi client meeting bhi nahi hai tho aur kaun si meeting hai beta tumhari ???" (N tmrw there is no client meeting as well so which meeting do u have son???)

Madhuri "So its decided kal ka nasatha aap teeno banayege" (So its decided tmrw's breakfast u three will make)

Shilpa to have more fun added "Aur haan Indian cuisine hi bana na hai Italian nahi. Samjhe bhai n plzzz make ur special chocolate cake also...I love the cake u bake" (And yes u all have to make Indian cuisine only not Italian. Understood bro n plzzz make ur special chocolate cake also...I love the cake u bake)


Meanwhile Armaan enjoyed the kheer n live entertainment 😆.

Dadi to Geet "Beta ja ke tayaar ho jao Armaan tabh se tumari wait kar raha hai" (Dear go n get ready Armaan is waiting from that time)

Geet went to get ready n here Armaam was feeling sorry for the guys as they have to make breakfast tmrw n happy that Geet has easily mixed with them in 1 day n that it looked like she was with this family for many years now.

Armaan "Arre haan dadi ,maa ne aap sabko raat ke dinner ke liye invite kiya hai" (Oh yes dadi, Mom has invited everyone for dinner today)


Dadi "Theek hai beta hum ajayege" (Ok dear we will come)


Geet comes down wearing a red n white sari with puff sleeves blouse n she was looking beautiful .


Robbie "Wowww" n starts whistling n said "Hello beautiful will u be my gf and ur luking sooo hottt"


Hearing this Maan shoots a glare at Robbie but he ignores it n start flirting again

Geet "Robbie ur also looking sooo handsome n I am ready to be ur gf just dont tell

MSK as he is my husband"


All r happy to see Geet having fun with Robbie while Maan was irritated as everyone was making fun of him from morning n Robbie was the main culprit n even now he wasnt stopping.

Then Geet n Armaan left. They soon reached Handa Mansion n Geet was welcomed by her Mama n Papa n when Armaan told them what happened on d breakfast table they both sighed in relief that their daughter was happy though they didnt doubt about the love she would receive from the Khuranas but as parents they were worried for their daughter n after hearing Armaan all their worries were washed away.


Geet talked to her Mama n Papa about her sasural n how they had fun today morning. When she was alone with her Mama she asked how Maan was as a person n Geet told that he was really sweet n caring.


At noon ,Geet was surprised to see her friends there for lunch even Shilpa had come n during lunch Geet told everyone that she was joining back the university from Monday.


All were shocked to hear this as Geet had gone through so much already n if n uni people talked about it she would be hurt n when they voiced out their worry,


Geet "Dont worry guys ,I am ok n even Maan n our family doesn't have a problem with it n let people talk I dont care until my family doesnt have a problem"


After hearing this all are happy to see Geet being strong.


Precap -

Family Dinner Get-together

Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys I know u all must be angry on me for updating after what seems ages... he he he I know u might be bored by now with my never ending excuses but I cant help it. Plz try n understand that I have my studies which takes most of my time. Earlier I had only mon to fri classes but now I have classes on sat as well so now my time is very less n I have so many ffs to write. I cant ignore any as all want update of each ff. So I update 1 ff every week but if Im not able to plz understand either Im too busy with colg work or Im not well.

Im sorry to keep u all waiting but I cant help it. N plz do comment n hit the like button. I update after so much hardships n yet Im not getting good response n if it continues I may stop all my works to stop troubling my readers as well as myself.

Love,
Hinal
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving it...
continue soon plz :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hinal, awesum updt...loving this dewar-bhabhi bonding...all the sasural chedaoing is awesum...coontinue sooon...
abt updts...dont worry we will be waiting eagerly fr it...giv updts whenevr u can do so and do take care of urself too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
sab ne maan ke maazak udaya that was really awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago



OMG kheer mein mirchi...Geet tera jawaab nahin...

now next day b'fast will be prepared by men of the family...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
boys teasing girls cooking n now girls challenged to cook men
loved the family time
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
plz try to update regulary dear
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon

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