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Posted: 12 years ago
harikaaa...tu kahan hai????
hehehehehehe.
oye kitna wait yar...
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wait kar thoda tv se chipak gayi hoon sony mein hoon bus wapas aaongi in 10 mins😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

harikaaa...tu kahan hai????

hehehehehehe.
oye kitna wait yar...



ruk jaa thoda wapas aoongi in 10 mins to update 😉
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Duniya Jise Neend Kehti Hai,
Na Jaane Wo Kya Cheez Hoti Hai,
Aankheon To Hum Bhi Band Karte Hain,
Par Wo To Unse Milne Ki Tarkeeb Hoti Hai,
Hum Neend Ke Shouqin Jyada To Nahi,
Lekin Kuch Khwab Na Dekhe To Guzara Nahi Hota…
Waiting dear
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Originally posted by: GurtiArti

Duniya Jise Neend Kehti Hai,
Na Jaane Wo Kya Cheez Hoti Hai,
Aankheon To Hum Bhi Band Karte Hain,
Par Wo To Unse Milne Ki Tarkeeb Hoti Hai,
Hum Neend Ke Shouqin Jyada To Nahi,
Lekin Kuch Khwab Na Dekhe To Guzara Nahi Hota
Waiting dear



this is for you 🤗
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PART 16:

She ran to the kitchen to grab some food like a maniac. Geet checked on the every bowl with the lids to eat. She was hungry for two and half days?? God when all the bowls were empty she fell down crying I am hungry ko...koi mujhe khana dijiye she screamed holding her tummy when out of the blue the plate full of food was placed infront of her, she ate the food just snatching it literally stuffing it inside her mouth saying sorry to the life inside her. And when her senses started to work geet looked at the person with utmost fear in her eyes.

Aap?? The plate fell down her hands, geet got scared literally feeling dev will guess her plight and so it was how cant he?? ... haan main so to complicate things in your life you have a baby inside you right geet?? Dev smirked god I am so happy ab toh mera game mujhe aur mazaa dega, maan separated from his own child and he will not even know it haina geet?? She just watched dev as he was spitting out the venom from his words, a feeling of disgust ran through her nerves looking at him.

You don't know geet how much I am happy today mujhe apne business se hi dur karega maan toh main usse tumse, uske bache se toh dur kar hi sakta hoon na?? very clearly dev said which made geet to cry out even more... please dev maan se mujhe alag mat karo geet begged him joining both her hands ... What will I get in return geet?? Tum toh mujhe yeh bhi nahi bol sakti ki badle mein mera jaan lelo lekin maa ko chod do, maan ko mujhse alag mat karo'. You have a life inside you he taunted her coz that was something geet would have uttered

Par tumhe kaise pata chala ki main...I know warna itni pagal hote hue tum khane ke liye nahi dhoondti na he cut geet rudely, you just have a day now phir uske baad...dev left laughing leaving a crying geet behind.

That night was the night of dev and sam's marriage, the whole mansion was decorated beautifully and here maan wanted to throw those papers on dev's face after the marriage, but who knows the marriage will turn into a game. Maan cant return to sameera and can neither have geet for his life this was what dev wanted it to happen.

Geet stood infront of the mirror setting the jewellary, she placed the bindi followed by jhumkas. Her sight fell on the waist band on the dressing table and her hand automatically went down to her tummy, tears got welled up until somebody's hand slipped holding it firmly... main pehenaadon?? Maan took the waist band from geet's hand, she shivered with the way maan was caressing her stomach ever so sensuously, maan's lips settled on geet's shoulder. He gave feathery kisses making her loose the control she had on the senses till now. Maan did not notice the tears in geet's eyes, she didn't know probably this will be the last to be in his arms and she wanted to live to the fullest. But maan was not going further, had been it was like every normal day both of them would have been on the bed making love but tonight is different for geet and for maan too!! This only made geet restless, she wanted maan to love her for their last night together. But then her patience snapped as maan was not deepening his touch neither his kisses.

Why are you stopping yourself maan?? she held the hand which rested on her tummy, her heart started to beat faster feeling his hand running on it and wanted it to be there always cocooning the life inside it. Will the baby get the love of a father, geet wondered... She leaned on maan's shoulder for support love me maan I want it badly please she hyperventilated saying this. But before both of them get lost into each other, The door was knocked got knocked ... Maan, geet bte open the door shaadi ka muhurat nikla jaa raha hai, all the guests are asking for you please come soon dadima said from the other side.


Aaya dadima, maan replied still holding geet in his arms... jo tumhare dil mein hai wahi mere dil mein bhi lekin aaj raat ke liye wait karlo phir tum jo chahogi wahi hoga he pecked geet's lips and left her to go out, when geet's hand held his finger tightly... Darr lag raha hai maan please yaha se kahi mat jayiye she pleading maan


Tumhe mujhse koi alag nahi kar sakta tumhe darne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai maan kissed geet's palm and went downstairs. Geet remembered as to what dev told her in the morning


When the police will come you will have to say maan was not with you, and you do not know anything about his whereabouts, agar tumne aisa nahi kaha toh I promise you will find your mom dead saath hi tum bhi marogi


As geet got down the stairs police were talking to maan, her heart sunk with the words she will have to utter. Her legs were giving up, she started to feel dizzy but then geet did manage coming down holding the saree pallo


Police: yeh lo aagayi, I guess your girlfriend right?? Ms. Geet aapse hi kuch sawaal karna tha... was maan singh khurana with you last night?? He asked looking at geet intently observing every move of her. But the answer he got was something unexpected


Ji woh mere saath nahi the geet said in a low tone looking everywhere. Why was the police here?? Why did geet say she was not with him last night?? And then the next set of words from the police left maan with a shock... I am sorry Mr. maan singh khurana aapke hone wali bhabi I mean sameera ji has given a complaint against you that you tried to molest her last night and with the proof I got now you will be arrested few more I have with me police threw few images of sam and maan, a written statement of hers, he held maan's arm to drag him out.


Just a minute inspector, yes I was home last night and with the words of her you cannot arrest me he said with an MSK tone ... I am not an ordinary person whom you can blame however you want to


Inspector: dekhiye khurana saab for now you will have to come with us, get a lawyer prove your righteousness and then you are free. Maan did talk to sameera before he came to geet last night as she was the one who came to him to talk. She begged him to accept her back into his life to which he simply said no but for now maan was not given a chance to speak anything, he had to follow the police to the station, as he knows his way out. The shocked person there was sam, this was the least she expected. Dev did all this to take revenge from maan not to marry her!! She sunk on the floor breaking down, watching dev to walk away. Sending maan to jail was something they planned together but not on the night of their marriage. How foolishly she believed dev, he was using her like a pawn in his chess game and she was like an obedient idiot followed his orders coming to terms with the fact that she cant get maan anymore he is just geet ka maan. And on the other side, dadima's rage knew no bounds. She was pissed off with this girl for the first time ever since she came home, sameera was telling her what is geet she was the one who never believed her. Probably for sam it was the time she realized her mistake and for dadima a time for misuderstandings


Geet came back to the room controlling her cries, she took out a pen and paper wrote something on it. She opened the cupboard to take out the money when somebody knocked the room door. She looked at the door but did not had the courage to open it...open the door geet the game is not over yet dev yelled banding it with his hand.


Precap: did maan actually believe that geet betrayed him??

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wow lovely painful update.. te way geet crying for food and te way dev using her was so painful.. dev u r playing ur games with geet and my maan using sam too, u will face ur hell soon by my maan,.. he wont leave wat u did to his geet.. he wont leave u.. he will burn u alive.. wait for my MAAN SINGH KHURANA KI punishment.. te way geet asking my maan to love him and te way she thinking her last night with him, and her baby was so lovely.. now my maan lose everything , every moment with his baby, pls dont do tis... my maan been arrested and te way geet thinking to leave was so painfull. now dadi blaming geet..i love te update so much
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

dev had pIayed his game

Iets see wat he d0es nw
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think maan knows that dev is blackmailing geet as he is msk so he is playing along

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