mg OS : will you marry me TEASER PG 29 JUN 19 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
awesome
fantastic update
liked a lot
very nicely written
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
DISHA DID NOT LET GEET SEE MAAN'S REACTION TO THE PROPOSAL
AND HE WAS ALSO LOST IN HER INNOCENT FACE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

TEASER




ho Kasam Se Kasam Se

hum Aayenge

shaadi Ka Joda

hum Laayenge

dulhan Hum Le Jayenge

there was a naughtiness in his eyes seeing her''

she moved and with her baby dance steps'..

tere Bina Jeeya Nahin Jaaye Mere Raja

dil Bechein Hai Doli Leke Aaja

aaja Mehndi Leke Aaja

meri Bindiya Tu Chamkaa Ja

mujhko Kangan Tu Pehna Ja

geet twirled her hands ' she was looking innocent beauty'.

the restlessness the craving of her innocent heart was depicting in each of the word that was apt for her...

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tere Pyaara Ka Mere Pyaar Ka Imtehaan Hai O Jaanam

tere Hi Angna Jayenge Saajna Ye Ailaan Hai O Jaanam

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o Sahi Waqt Par Hi

hum Aayenge

tujhko Uthaake

le Jayenge

dulhan Hum Le Jayenge





do tell me if i should write a update with this theme


i am very confused


readers review is most awaited

Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
It will be a Nice concept.

Ab jaldi se update kar bhi do.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
nice teaser waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Awesome first and second part
geet proposed to a person
and she is only sixteen
will maan and geet meet again
please update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
MG: WILL YOU MARRY ME

part 3

thank u all for reading and commenting

Changed geet surname to singhania..

Here someone was just smiling … looking around blushing and looking extremely handsome .. he had just the best experience of his life… a beauty just asked him to marry her.. and no wonder he knew she was drop dead gorgeous matured child…

A child maan questioned himself… he was grinning ear to ear.. well it was his first experience that someone asked him directly to marry her ..well he had got some most exciting offers of asking a date or for being in a relation..but those proposals were having no match with this one.. after all the baby doll just asked him…

Maan couldn't help but to remember the way she was expecting an answer from him … she was there just for him .. made him so much happy … well his heart was just fluttering in a newly found chocolate candy that she gave…

After some time with much efforts maan tried to get her out of his mind…

Maan: common maan this is not the first time you have got a proposal… look I know that the girl was something but still if someone will get to know this know then you will be the new centre of attraction instead of Ms SINGHANIA… well you need to concentrate on your driving now.. else MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA you will be seen in a well known hospital with many broken bones..and you definitely don't want that so its better to concentrate where you are going….

Well well his first experience for a marriage proposal had left him in a certain bewilderment … the guy didn't expected that he will experience a experience and to tell you the truth the guy was kind of shivering listening to the girl ….

Well anyone would have if you just come and say " WILL YOU MARRY ME…"

He was in his BMW … looking around the gifts that finally he had arranged for one his best teachers.. he along with his friends were giving a farewell too their teacher .. a memorable .. which indeed was now for him….

It was very hard to concentrate on his driving when someone had stolen your attention in just a mere split of second.. making you lost in her….

Maan : so cute just like a doll….

A small red hue that was actually a blush appeared on his cheeks.. still he couldn't help but to think about the nave and childish gorgeous baby beauty …

Even he was scared for a second that what was going on.. but her hazels filled with naughtiness and a strange glint made him to lose himself … the way she was twisting her lips…. The way she was biting her lips.. the pink gloss that she was unknowingly eating .. and he could see some chocolate boxes in her hand ..and knew that they were just for her and the way she was holding them .. the possessive hold was just saying that " THESE ARE FOR ME…"

Maan : may be she was expecting an answer….

He couldn't help but smile…. This ought to be the best experience of his life… may be this is the start …. A start to something that he will cherish all his life…

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Here at geet's place .. geet was sitting sulking.. her nose was held high with her anger.. It was indeed that she didn't even understood a bit.. but she was helpless ..when your best friend betray you then you don't have any other way to get your way .. and here disha had made her mom by her side so there were no chances that geet could make up what she wants ….. disha was there ..she was getting there books in less than one month they were to appear for the board exams and here her best friend needs to learn how to seduce a guy….

Well that was the new promise geet took from disha ..for letting go the mall topic.. well miss singhania was very intelligent disha thought….

Disha st: where I am caught… she looked above just like she saw geet did whenever she is upset or wants something from her parents…

Disha: babaji.. please help me I am caught between life and death.. if I will not complete my promise than geet will not live in peace and I will then god knows what will happen.. she will not live others live in peace and it includes me too… oh my sweet good babaji help your poor child.. your favorite geet is hell bent on making me embarrass and she herself is not so matured that she will understand all what I will say to her …

That was the exact reason even though geet was grown up and was sixteen year but still due to all pampering and the upbringing like a princess she was so naIve and soft like milk … the tenderness of her heart couldn't be matched to anything that was materialistic.. she was so soft In every means just like a child and being her best friend she couldn't hurt her bestie…

Disha looked at geet .. she had already closed all the books that she opened … well that made disha angry.. everything is in its place but study does comes first …

She gave geet an angry glare but geet just made a face and pouted…

Disha: you wanted to practice quadratic equations na.. and you are having problems in trigonometry too than why did you closed the books geet .. you know we need to pick up our pace else we wont be able to complete within given time….

Geet was stubborn…

Geet: not until you tell me how to seduce a boy

She was getting difficult to handle .. disha for a second thought to call rano and tell her what her dear daughter wants to know but knowing rano and a mothers nature she knew she cant do this ..but geet what to do with her craziness she thought…

Disha sighed and cursed the moment she said that they will go to the mall…

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Next:

geet sweetly sit beside someone…. And with an extra sugary smile..

Geet: can I come please…


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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
geet is such a cutiepie...and maan blushing, total update is dreamy😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
hii need some help can anyone help me in selecting pics for the banner i dont know which ones to use so if anyone does have something please do post in the thread

suhaana
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

geet is such a cutiepie...and maan blushing, total update is dreamy😳



thankss a lot dear

yup geet is such a cutie pie 😛

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