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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

It was a very well written chapter. This was so unexpected. I mean after everything that she had to go through because of him and is family she still loves him! This was the very same man who doubted her thinking that she has someone else in her life and she still...anyway, I suppose controlling one's emotions and feelings is really tough and that's what happened here. Looking forward to reading the next chp.😊

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

hi dear

as you say

me here with my few lines😆😆

sorry for mistake😉(spelling mistake dear)

yeh kaisi tukado mein

zindagi jee rahe the hum

hai hum ,

ek dusre kee

yeh kyu nahi ,

ek dusre se kahe rahe the hum

apne aap banaye gaye

mere niyamo ke alawa

kabhi bhi , haan

kabhi bhi ,toh kuch maine kiya nahi

aur kya woh

badalna chahegi mujhe

iska bhi toh mokka ,

maine hame diya nahi

kya mera

hammare is rishte mein ,

khush na rahna

yu ghutna

aur

chupchap ,sab sehna

kya kasoor tha bas unhi ka

kya mera

kabhi bhi ,

kuch na kah paana hi

mera bhi kasoor tha hi

kyoki

woh meri baat sune

meri har chooti zid ke aage jhuke

mere nakhre uttae

mujhe apni palko par bethaiye

is sab ka mokka bhi toh

maine hame diya nahi

aaj jab woh aayi

mere yu saamne

tham gayi yeh zami

ruk gaya aasma

par

mujhe mein naaye ahsaas the jagne laage

aur khud ka hi ,

naya pahlu

tha nazar aaya

mujhe mere hi saamne

jo chah raha tha

ke chum lu usse

chu lu aise usse ,

ke jaise chua na ho pahle usse

yeh kasak si mujhme jaagne lagi

kyu apne in hasin palo ko bhi

aur hasin banna sake hum

is baat ka bhi mokka ,

maine hame diye nahi

still more

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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ElienoreMG

@ElienoreMG

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Amazing update...
Y does geet love dis jerk so much?
Loved it...

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lehr

@lehr

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

superb update dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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ahsaaspyarka

@ahsaaspyarka

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

not even in my dreams i cud imagine that we wud get this twist at this stage, i loved it, though yes maan does not deserve this happiness so easily but i know this was more for geet, she took this bold step more for herself coz she wanted to sooth her ever paining heart which is given so many scars...she had no fear of afterwards consequences coz the blames maan had so far put on her, she knows nothing can be more painful than that and she was well prepared for it.

The thing that i loved the most of TEARS in the eyes of maan, today he realized that all the time it was HE who was WRONG...beyond imagination, he actually never knew geet, her feelings and her heart...actually she never existed for him, he never knew that even she was a human with a heart which beats, wants, has feelings, some dreams...he never knew until today and today when he realized this, he cant even imagine the amount of pain he has given her, I though didnt much understood the precap being maan behaving weired but i guess it will something related to his reaction to his new found realization.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

wow nice update di

oh wow atleast maan babu k dmaagh ki khirki khuli

i hope now he will be able to what his beautiful innocent want in actual

cont soon

please

love u

seher

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

awesome update

maan ko akal kab aayegi!!!!!!!!

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amrutavjoshi

@amrutavjoshi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

superb one..
It is obvious to loose in front of loved one in emotional disturbance
when he reason for emotional disturbance.
Maan is still confused ...
Loved it

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#559

oh my god...never thought this update to be this beautiful...it was breath taking..it was heart wrenching..and it was just heavenly...
it was so painful to see geet like that.. and more painful wen she just prepared herself for anything..from him...like she knew how worse could it get...🥺
but the way maan felt her love..was just so heart touching!!!
he actually saw her love finally... and am really looking forward to the next...