~Kashmakash~ Maaneet SS Thread 3

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#541

both the updates were marvellous. maan does not know anything about his wife. he has to do some reality for his wife. way Muski di. beautiful as always. continue soon

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Awesome update...loved it
Aww Maan is Crying...thank god ye buddhu kuch samaj aa raha
confused precap..😕
waiting for next...continue soon
thank u for update

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#543

awesum...loved it... so in the counselling maan realised he doesnt know hr at all...and frm the phone that she nvr had any other man in hr life...and now after making love to hr he realised they nvr had njoyed it like 2day...wow!!!and all these realisations made him realise that he was wrong and had tears in his eyes...so the small brain and his little heart will now start working, hope so...beautifully written...continue soon...

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sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#544

loved it...

awesome awesome update di...

It was written beautifully mainly when geet expressed her pain when maan didnt see her love and her feelings for him in her...

last part when maan realized he was wrong... brought tears in my eyes...

now everything makes sense to him...

beautifully written... i have to words to say di...the emotions and the way you expressed their feelings in this update is extraordinaryly written...

waiting for the next update

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#545

what beautifully written update!
the way you described the pain and the way maan realized his fault was awesome
all the while he kept on assessing the possibilities as to what led to the situation whereas it was right in front of him
their lovemaking sang of their love
it was the first time ever that they made love to each other
you have done a swell of a job with this part
i loved it!
it's too good
i have run out of superlatives
waiting for next part
continue soon

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: Water.
Muski a question!

Growling, he released, tears ran down his eyes feeling her painting exhausted never so satisfied underneath him.

Does this mean, he thinks she was never as satisfied before as he saw her today?

painting = panting correct?

I mean before it was in the dark but he never felt the emotions he is feeling today, because before she was never as responsive as she is today.

Because he was the one who always initiated before and it was just a way of life for her, just a chore because she could not say no to him...but today it was different for her, cus she initiated it and hence the energy, the aura and the experience was different for her.

Did I get it right?

typo err.. it is panting

yes she was not so responsive.. I have mentioned why she didn't feel so into it in the previous parts.. will also follow latter

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#547

Oh ho, he got what he craved for. I wanted him to suffer. Stil thinking that Geet might someone in her life.

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#548

How more weird he can get or b? Poor geet...

Which planet maan belongs to? He doesn't knw anything about her...he can have s.. Vd her abt talking n thinking abt it in some other way is sin...god wht mind set is dat...

It's an insult to geet n her truthfulness dat he chked her phn records...bt whn he has thought abt her as a human...

Wanted him to suffer in every way...mentally, emotionally n physically too...,bt he got wht he wanted to release his frustration n all...geet pls bt strict...else he won't understand u n ur feelings...,.mukan love u more n more...amazing updt