MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread3 - Page 23

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Part 15

Oh dear what have u done

maan's realisation was so serene and so dreamy

and the song u selected suited it perfectly and the pictures oh dear took my breath away

the song teri deewani in the show was one of the best

and both maan and geet looked divine in that song

U really know the art of playing with words

the whole dargah scene which u have written was magical

by the way the words uttered by baba to maan

did u write them urself?

excellent dear

and the transition from dream like state of maan to harsh reality of geet was awesome

whatever u described abt rahul's dirty intent or geet not being vocal abt her discomfort are so true to reality

sometimes we girls do get confused with soft and sweet language of men and dont recognise their real bad intent

and ur own experience in this case was really an eye opener

and kudos to u dear who is always there to help ur teammates

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

loved the way u r handling maan's restlessness for geet no no HIS GEET

and geet's struggle with rahul's flirt

and yes completely agree with u that at this stage she cant share her fear or apprehensions abt rahut with maan

and she being new to workplace and her past her behaviour of not being vocal is quite justified

another glimpse of geet's painful past

oh dear

why most men look at single girl with lustful eyes only

I dont understand just for a few minute's physical pleasure they are ready to ruin a girl's entire life

And i agree with u that we should trust our instincts in such cases and being vocal abt it is also the best way

again dear i have to say u r very well dealing with some very sensitive issues ( which we all are totally aware of )

and u r doing full justice to ur shift from rajshree to aamir khan's prduction

sacchi dear😊

now very eager for the next part

Originally posted by: Susegad

I read Maayo's update and was grinning the whole day.It was such a cute puppy love wala update that it just uplifted me so much.

Then I came to your thread and started reading your update.

I still had my silly grin plasterd on my face, and I was giggling like a teenage girl, reading about Maan finally acknowledging his love for Geet. him missing her, and stalking her. I swear I was in a serious stage of euphoria, when dhadam, the second half of your update had me landing straight back to earth with a painful crash.

I don't know why, but tody's update reminded me of a creepy a**hole(please pardon my english)professor I had in college who was the most digusting human being I've ever come acroos on earth. He passed derogatory comments,at practicals he'd just come and stand so close behind me I'd freak out. And that was some of his decent behaviour. The remaining I do not even want to remember.I do not even want to remember that creep. But at year end he asked to bring my journal to his cabin. I was the only person who did not submit. I tried sending it through friends but he refused and asked me to come personally. Since I refused and my journal never got submitted I got a big fat zero for journal keeping. The me today is a completely different person from the me back then. And if I ever came across him in my life again, I'd hid him so hard on his most vulnerable spot that every time he breathed he'd remember me and cry.

I don't know how you are going to deal with Geet's issue, and on popular consensus I see Maan is being called in to the rescue. But for once I'd like to see a woman fighting for herself and winning.

Sorry for the rant. but I just remembered my college days and couldn't hold back.

Just totally and absolutely love this FF on a whole different level.

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
maan confessed himself about his love for geet
he is deeply, crazily in love with GEET
her one side, her little talk, her smiles, her every gesture make maan crazy and calm
love is such a strong emotions
he want to see her whenever he is able to see her it's like he is in heaven
it's love
when he is not able to see her or find she go back to home early, he became restless
it's love

here geet is struggling to end all side with good note
but that B***** rahul is there to make her struggle more
it's so realistic , and it's happening in many office,
for girls it's not so easy to say to whom she will say , still I believe to complain but the thing is too delicate
without any fault girls r objectifying by those p******
a small glimpse of geet's past make me scared what she suffered in her past
such a horrific thing , she is suffering, struggling still , just cause she is innocent, girl

Rahul is gradually crossing all limits and stooping too low
hope Maan or some one will be there who will rescue geet from this
Read the note before the update
I'm agree with ur view here
pls continue soon

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

That was an awesome one Ritzy

I loved the realization of MSK... and actually liked the idea of him giving time to realize the intense of his love... it was written so beautifully... all the small silly things u end up doing when u are in love...

And the second part... grrr... Rahul is completely taking advantage of Geet's silence... i guess thats why it is required at such times to express your hatred towards such behavior... and how much u feel disgusted about it...

Am just waiting as to how you are going to deal with the whole thing... and kind of scared too as to wat extent that 🤬 wud go...

thanks for the update ritzy... and looking forward for the next

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Thanks Rakhi...

I know many want Geet to say something. Well in last update things crossed a limit and she will react. Hope I am able to keep it as realisitc as possible...

awesome update

this rahul is such a 🤬