Part 15
Oh dear what have u done
maan's realisation was so serene and so dreamy
and the song u selected suited it perfectly and the pictures oh dear took my breath away
the song teri deewani in the show was one of the best
and both maan and geet looked divine in that song
U really know the art of playing with words
the whole dargah scene which u have written was magical
by the way the words uttered by baba to maan
did u write them urself?
excellent dear
and the transition from dream like state of maan to harsh reality of geet was awesome
whatever u described abt rahul's dirty intent or geet not being vocal abt her discomfort are so true to reality
sometimes we girls do get confused with soft and sweet language of men and dont recognise their real bad intent
and ur own experience in this case was really an eye opener
and kudos to u dear who is always there to help ur teammates
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loved the way u r handling maan's restlessness for geet no no HIS GEET
and geet's struggle with rahul's flirt
and yes completely agree with u that at this stage she cant share her fear or apprehensions abt rahut with maan
and she being new to workplace and her past her behaviour of not being vocal is quite justified
another glimpse of geet's painful past
oh dear
why most men look at single girl with lustful eyes only
I dont understand just for a few minute's physical pleasure they are ready to ruin a girl's entire life
And i agree with u that we should trust our instincts in such cases and being vocal abt it is also the best way
again dear i have to say u r very well dealing with some very sensitive issues ( which we all are totally aware of )
and u r doing full justice to ur shift from rajshree to aamir khan's prduction
sacchi dearđ
now very eager for the next part
Edited by gudmeet - 12 years ago
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