MG SS-Long lost love!!IMP NOTE PG5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi!guys i m sonali a newbie here and came up with my first ss on maaneet hope u all will like it. Maaneet r one of the most beautiful part of my life n will always be. Here this story is a lovey-dovey journey of maaneet with losts of ups n downs enjoys it.

LONG LOST LOVE
Prologue:
Geet's monologue
I hav heard ppl say,
first love is hardest
to despair,
I shook my head,
like i hardly care,
until then,i fell for one,
It was beautiful,yet strange
How dis one person,
can geet ur heart racing,
the name ,the sound,the scent,
or watever it was,
under coat of innocence
When i wrote letters
But didn't have the guts to sent,
sad it was,
To see u wid someone else,
hoping we'd be friends someday,
and sweeter it was,
wen it came true,
i still remember,
the first time u phoned me,
thunderstruck i was,
gasping for air,
time went by,
wid msgs and chats
And somehow you came to know
about my hidden secret
Calmly you asked
is it all true?
Wid shivers covering me
I posted a yes
Answerless i was,
to ur questions.
This ended wid the quote of love which said
"LOVE IS SOMETHING WHICH REQUIRES FEELING FROM EITHER SIDE"
And you never felt anything for me,
yet you promised
we'll stay as friends,
was this ur friendship?
With no talks,
no chat
And no YOU????




well that's it for now do tell me guys howz it it matters a lot for me:)
PROLOGUE PG1

CHARACTER SKETCH PG1


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome...
loved it...
Interesting concept...
Plz continue soon...
Best of luck ...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the prologue
interesting concept
cont soon...
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I want update yaar... Pls give fast
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Hi!guys...
Here i m giving a small character sketch of L3...
Will update part 1 in half an hour...
CHARACTER SKETCH
Maan Singh Khurana:Top businessmen of India and most eligible bachelor of town.Rude,arrogant,does not speak much but a kind hearted person.Because his 1 wrong decision lost her.
GEET HANDA:Beautiful,elegant and kind hearted girl.She is India's no. 1 interior designer.Lives in Mumbai.Very conservative,does not talk much because of her past.Only close to her best friend sadhna,her di n aviral.Hates her family(will know as the story progress)
SADHNA MEHRA:Best friend of Geet,loves her to core.Knows everything about Geet n is always wid her in every decision.Engaged to Aviral.Lives in delhi.
AVIRAL SAXENA:Fiance of Sadhna and also best friend of Maan.Knows everything about Geet.Respects her a lot n considers as sis.
MEERA MAHLOTRA:Sis of geet.Loves her a lot.Married to yash n lives in delhi.But never forces geet to come back as she knows the reason.
YASH MAHLOTRA:Meera's hubby.
DADI:Same as show.
More characters will be introduce as the story progress...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys i m really very sorry for not updating yesterday as promised to you Yesterday i was online by cell so typed the whole part but by mistake it got format n was having no strength to type it again so really very sorry... Here is the part 1 enjoy it and do tell me how's it😊

LONG LOST LOVE

PART 1:

VENUE: TAJ HOTEL, MUMBAI

People were enjoying like mad on the dance floor at the disc in The Taj Hotel in Mumbai. They were celebrating as their company The Malhotra Enterprises got a very big project with 1 of the topmost company of the country. It was not just the celebration for their company but as well as their best employee GEET HANDA got the award of Best interior designer of the decade.

A girl wearing short knee length dress was standing at the lone corner of the disc as if waiting for someone. She was the most beautiful girl anyone can see with beautiful eyes which were the mirror of her soul. But somewhere her eyes contained a bit of sadness which no one could recognize. One of her colleague went up to her and asked for dance which she politely denied. Again she looked at the door and saw a couple entering the disc, ran to them and hugged her best friend.

It was Sadhna and Aviral who entered the disc and looking for Geet when they suddenly spotted her and saw her running towards them who immediately hugged Sadhna. They broke the hug and when Aviral said, "It's cheating Angel, you forgot me."And he made baby face. Sadhna and Geet smiled seeing his nautanki and included him in the group hug. Later they enjoyed the party and went to Bandstand to enjoy the view of beach. They were sitting silently when Sadhna broke the silence and said, "I m so happy for you Angel, aaj tera dream poora ho gaya.You achieved what you wanted, today uncle aunty'" she mentally slapped herself to have remind her of that when she was so happy. After list listening this suddenly Geet expression changed from happiness to sadness and finally hatred.

Sadhna: I m so sorry angel I didn't wanted to make you upset please angel I m sorry."But seeing no reaction from her she asked Aviral to talk her. He nodded and said," You know angel why we call you angel it's because just because of you I got my love, my Sadhna. If you would have not been there we would have never met but just because of you we're together but we want you back angel, the girl who would make everyone around her smile and herself always smiled but seems like she's lost somewhere please bring her back please. Forgive them Geet forgive them please." He requested but Geet didn't flinch and said, "She's dead jiju and dead never come back. Please don't force me I can't afford to lose you both." She cried and hugged them. Both knew it was no point of explaining her and hugged her back. They talked for a while, it was around 12'o clock when they were returning from the beach when Aviral suddenly stopped the car turned towards Sadhna who was curiously looking towards him. He winked at her and she understood what he wanted to say. Both were brought back from their silent talks when Geet spoke in frustration, "Will you guys please do your romance later I m feeling very sleepy, let's go please." Both smiled mischievously at her and suddenly shouted in union, "HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANGEL." and hugged her.

SAME TIME SOMEWHERE IN DELHI:

A tall guy with sharp features, well built figure and M shaped lips was sitting in his cabin lost in his file as if it was the most important thing in this world. After sometime he closed his file and rested his head back at his big chair and closed his eyes. After what seems like ages he broke the silence and said, "HAPPY BIRTHDAY MISHTY. Please forgive me and come back please mishty I can't live like this please come back." He cried.

PRECAP: Geet coming back to Delhi and some memories of bitter yet sweet past.

Please like and comment guys it matters a lot to me.😊

Edited by maaneetkisonali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay me first
Awesome update
loved it
geet happy to see avril and sadhana
geet is sad
Sadhana wishes geet happy birthday
Maan also wishes geet happy birthday
continue soon
Edited by mansi.tripathi - 12 years ago
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Awesome part
loved it
yupie second one to comment
Edited by preeti555 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys!

Here i m giving part 2 of L3 but before that i just wanna clear a confusion that in part 1 precap by mistake i wrote that geet is coming back to india so you all must be confuse as geet lives in mumbai.I just wanna tell u all that geet lives in mumbai only and is coming back to Delhi so you all don't be confused and i will try that i don't repeat my mistake again sorry guys😊
LOST LONG LOVE
PART 1:
Geet was sitting in her cabin lost in her thoughts.It has been 1 week since Geet's birthday and her conversation with Sadhna.She was not able to decide what to choose one side it was her past which she can't forget and the other side it was Sadhna her best friend who was always with her in her every decision.She remembered Sadhna's warning.
FLASHBACK:
It was morning after the party Geet was sitting in her cabin doing her work when sadhna barged in her cabin followed by Aviral.She looked angry as well as bit sad.Geet looked at Aviral asking what happend to her.He signalled as if he had no clue.Geet sighed, went to sadhna and sat beside her.
Geet: Ab tu bataegi ki tujhe kya hua hai ya phir wo bhi mujhe hi pata lagana padega??????
Sadhna turned her head and made a grumpy face and said, "Aaj tera birthday hai and hum sirf 1 week ke liye aaye hain and look at you, you are busy in these stupid file of yours."
And again turned her head.Geet smiled a bit at her childness and stood up. She waited for sadhna to react when she did'nt find her moving so finally said, "Ab yahin baithegi ya chalegi bhi." Sadhna smiled full heartedlly and hugged her in exitement.Aviral was smiling seeing their bond. A true friendship which no one can break not even god.
Later they enjoyed the whole tour of the big city of Mumbai and did a lot of masti.At evening they went to one of the best resturant of Mumbai and had their dinner. After that they went to juhu beach. It was night so there was no crowd, they sat on the ground calmly watching waves of the sea when suddenle sadhna spoke, " Geet tu to jaanti hai ki next week hum wapas ja rahe hain and uske baad hamari engagement hai and 1 mahine mein shaadi."
Geet nodded and asked her to continue. Sadhna continued, "Geet you know that you are the most important person in my life agar aaj mujhe ye sab khushi mil rahi hai to teri wajah se. It's just because of you i m getting all the happiness and ab jab maine apni zindagi ki nayi shuruwat kar rahi hu tu main tere bina shaadi karne ki soch bhi nahi sakti. Main chahti hu ki tu hamare saath delhi wapas chale meri shaadi ke liye please." She waited for geet's reply,seeing no reaction from her she shook her and said, "Geet please..." But geet cut her off and said," I can't come and you know the reason please don't force me." and she stood up to leave.Sadhna had enough of her.She was seeing her suffering from last 6 year.God damn 6 year was a long time.But geet was not trying to understand it.She stood up angrily and caught her wrist and shouted at her, "What do you think of yourself ? ha? why don't you understand dammit it's being 6 years...6 damn years and they are suffering for their deed.They are dying eachday with the guilt that their daughter is punishing herself because of their mistake.For godsake geet please move on. " But geet didn't flinch as if she was deaf. Her face was blank, void of any emotion.Seeing no response from her Sadhna finally said, "Alright you donn't wanna come na fine but keep one thing in your mind agar tu shaadi mein nahi aayi toh main ye shaadi nahi karungi and you know very well i can do that." She caught aviral's hand and left from there angrily.
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Geet was brought back to present with a knock on the door. She asked the person to come in and saw aviral entering her cabin with a smile on his face. She smiled back and asked him to sit. He sat before her and sat down. Aviral and geet always shared a special relationship. He has always protected her like a big brother. Maybe he knew her better than sadhna and that's why never forced her to come back to delhi. After what seems like ages he broke the silence and said, "So angel what have you decided. Whatever is your decision i will always be with you and respect it but tum sadhna ko jaanti ho agar wo ek baar kuch decide kar leti hai to she never steps back." Geet stood up from her chair and went to the window. Aviral stood up to leave and said, " Think about it geet and teel us, we'll be waiting. By the way we're going back from evening's flight." And he turned to leave when geet's voice stopped him," I'll come with you both." Aviral turned and hugged her tight. He knows how difficult it's for her to go back but she's coming for their happiness she was really an angel.They broke the hug, aviral kissed her forhead and said," Thank you so much geet. I m so happy that you are coming with us. Main abhi sadhna ko bol ke aata hu she'll be so happy." And he ran from there. Geet smiles seeing him.
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They were sitting in the plane and the flight was about to take off. Sadhna was so happy that geet was finally coming back to delhi for her wedding. But on the other hand for geet it was the most difficult decision of her life to return delhi. The city where she ws born and brought up, the city were she spend her childhood and it was the same city were she lost her smile and left her parents. She was sitting quietly,when the flight took off, she closed her eyes and drifted back to the past.
FLASHBACK
It was Annual feast at St.Joseph. The school was buzzing with activities. Students were running here and there for checking the preparations confirming if everything was at its place as it was a very important day for the school because it was annual feast as well as their school completed it's 25th year of continuous service to the country and providing best education to the students. Soon the function started and everything was set.
A girl was standing at the lone corner with her friend and praying her babaji," Babaji please sab kuch sahi ho jaye mujhse koi galti na ho please." Finally her friend who was watching her with astonishment got irritated and shouted, "For godsake geet tujhe Student of the year ka award mil raha hai tujhe jung ke liye nahi bhej rhe hai.Please babaji ko pareshan karna band kar and go your name is being called." Geet twisted her lips and went to stage, received the award and thanked everyone for giving her the award. While coming back she saw someone and her heart missed a beat. But she shrugged off her thoughts and went to sadhna who hugged her and congratulated her. Later she went her home and found it empty as always. She smiled sadly and went her room. She changed into her nighty and laid down and cried silently.Well this was geet's life since she became self dependent. It was daily routin geet would come back home and always found it empty. She was the daughter of Mohinder Handa, the famous industrialist but he never got time for his daughter. Her mother Rano Handa was a social worker she was always busy in her board meetings or kitty parties. She was the eldest daughter and her younger brother and sister were always busy in their lives.
Geet always got what she wanted even before she asks for it. But sometimes its not money that can give you happiness. Money may be the most important need of a person's life but it can't by love and feelings. It's not money what men lives by but it's love the love for which Geet always craved but she never got it her parents where to busy in their life. Geet met sadhna 2 years back when they were in 9th standard. At first geet was hesitant to be friends with her because whenever she made friends and trusted them they broked it brutally because they were just intrested in geet's money nothing else but after sadhna came and they became friends geet was always very protective and possessive for sadhna because she was the only one she tresures. Geet loved Maan from the time when she first knew the actual meaning of love. It was 7 years back when they were in 6th class when geet saw maan for first time and instantly fell for him. It was not just an attraction but it was true love which she tresures but never voiced out in front of him infact he never noticed her but she was mandly in love with him. Thinking about her life a lone tear escaped her eyes, she closed her eyes and driffted off to sleep.
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Precap: Past continues...
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Please like and comment guys it matters a lot to me😊
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