KHUMAARI2-The Nocturnal Beast(MG)NEXT THREAD ADDED - Page 45

hey Osheen..its Maha frm Germany..i am following various fan fictions here since one year but been a silent reader till today..this story has forced me to come and leave a reply..i must say u are a great writer and an amazing concept plus the way u present the characters..its really very interesting..am deeply in love with "Khumari"..wish u all the best and keep up the great work..

wow great story pl\z update soon
i can not wait for the part of your story

this is jus WOW
geets condition is jus too scary
she jus ran into the jungle 😲
n he is nt following her 😡
ufff he fighting wid innerself 🤔
dekhlo worewolf kahi iss tym gap mein koi asli wolf aake usse kha na jaye 😲🤣
but seriously he went to her n took her back 😛
ufff that bandaging part n dat kiss too sensual 😳
this beast will be death to me someday 🤣
nxt morning aye haye wat a perfect morning 😳
i will giv my life to watch that 😳
mere nanga punga maan 😳🤣
ye lo mere beastu ko tgo sharm hi nhi hy 🤣 geet resisting her temptation to look back 🤣
grt self control geetu 😎🤣
ufff apple khani hain but brush b karni hain 😛
kha liya w/o brushing 🤢🤣
ufff this maan is the limit
cottage k hote hi tent mein rakha geetu ko jus becoz he luv camping 😲
i mean seriously!!! 😲🤣🤣.
luved it ❤️
update soon

hahaa MSK is too smart ...awww poor Geet
bechari Ko brush n cloth bhi nai diye :-P
Awesome update...loved It very much
waiting for next...continue soon

maan werewolf who is beast but hae a heart

loved the update. I am impressed with the way you are telling this story.

Woah yaar. Reallly i looove ur writing style. So descriptive and intriguing. Each sentence is beautiful. 😳 👏
Love geet's guts. She ran as fast a she could 😆
Maan traced her in nano secs. 😆
While reading i was afraid that at the very sight of blood maan will turn into a beast and suck on it. But im happy he didnt 😃
Maan heals faster. I envy him now 😆
Hmm talking about envy. Love the pic u put of wet maan and the other in black shirt. Stopped reading and stared the pics for a while 😳 😆
Poor geet. She couldnt change nor brush her teeth.
Ooops they had an issue over their repsective worlds
Loved maan's past. He was violent from a tender age. I thought at first the old man will transform maan into a wolf. 😕 my beliefs are getting false 😆 you are getting beyond my expectations. 👏
Maan can forcast the weather. Wah 😆
He has a cottage 😲 same reaction like geet. Why was he troubling geet then lol
Cant wait for more. Thanks for the long part 👏

Awesome updates
Loved it
Amazingly written
Continue soon
Eagarly waiting...