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Posted: 12 years ago
I recently read Palindrome's Life Partner and loved the following scene:-
This touched me due to Maan's affection for Geet and his love for his Sister causing him to be in this dilemma. Geet just being her cute self offering him a hug to sooth his restless heart. Such a cute scene out of the blues.

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"Are you sad???"She asked as she took a closer look at his face under the moonlight.His eyes were sad and troubled.
"Yes.."He could not lie to her.
"Want to share with me???"She asked.She waited for his answer but neither "yes" nor "No" came from his side.
His lack of response made her aware of his dilemma to decide whether he should share with her or not.
"Want a hug???"She asked with a smile.
"Hmm???"He asked, his voice laced with confusion.
"Want a hug???"She said again spreading her arms along with the blanket this time."Believe me "Hugs'" are magical .."She spoke further with her arms still open for him.They were just few steps apart from each other but still she was able to feel his reluctance as he moved towards her.He stopped when he was close enough to feel her breaths on his face.He looked in her eyes which were reflecting warmth like always. That made it impossible for him to resist the temptation of feeling that "warmth" physically.
Next moment,geet felt his cold hands embracing her inside the blanket.His hold was as soft as his breaths which she could feel now on her neck. Geet wrapped her arms around his broad shoulders thus taking both of them in her blanket.They remained in solace of each other's arms for next few minutes till geet heard him saying.."Those bangles were for you geet...!!!"


I loved a lot of other scenes in this FF... Like Geet feeling Jelous of Aarvi for taking her pillow, Maan's shoulder) one nigh and then finally sharing with ther even when Maan offered her the exclusive rights... Her term for consummating as.. Mystery solving... Her interaction with Maan's friend Aadi and the hilarious series of events at his place... Maan clicking Geet's pic with pacifier in her mouth and she accepting that prank as a professional prankster...Maan realizing Adi is in love after he saw his neat apartment... Geet's letter to Raj jiju just made me cry... Maya's acceptace of Aarvi... Maan explaining Aarav about the love he should give to Aarvi as a big brother instead of scolding him like any other adult would have in that situation... Maan and Geet's discussion on Raam's character... The end where Geet is checking for after sex glow and her friend asking the same question when she texted her that the mystery is solved and Maan's final reply to her...
The FF was just too cute for words... the best part was that it gave us a lot of thought provoking debates and some lovely lessons for life.
Thanks a lot Palindrome.
Edited by TaranaStyle - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TaranaStyle

I recently read Palindrome's Life Partner and loved the following scene:-
This touched me due to Maan's affection for Geet and his love for his Sister causing him to be in this dilemma. Geet just being her cute self offering him a hug to sooth his restless heart. Such a cute scene out of the blues.

"

"Are you sad???"She asked as she took a closer look at his face under the moonlight.His eyes were sad and troubled.
"Yes.."He could not lie to her.
"Want to share with me???"She asked.She waited for his answer but neither "yes" nor "No" came from his side.
His lack of response made her aware of his dilemma to decide whether he should share with her or not.
"Want a hug???"She asked with a smile.
"Hmm???"He asked, his voice laced with confusion.
"Want a hug???"She said again spreading her arms along with the blanket this time."Believe me "Hugs'" are magical .."She spoke further with her arms still open for him.They were just few steps apart from each other but still she was able to feel his reluctance as he moved towards her.He stopped when he was close enough to feel her breaths on his face.He looked in her eyes which were reflecting warmth like always. That made it impossible for him to resist the temptation of feeling that "warmth" physically.
Next moment,geet felt his cold hands embracing her inside the blanket.His hold was as soft as his breaths which she could feel now on her neck. Geet wrapped her arms around his broad shoulders thus taking both of them in her blanket.They remained in solace of each other's arms for next few minutes till geet heard him saying.."Those bangles were for you geet...!!!"


I loved a lot of other scenes in this FF... Like Geet feeling Jelous of Aarvi for taking her pillow, Maan's shoulder) one nigh and then finally sharing with ther even when Maan offered her the exclusive rights... Her term for consummating as.. Mystery solving... Her interaction with Maan's friend Aadi and the hilarious series of events at his place... Maan clicking Geet's pic with pacifier in her mouth and she accepting that prank as a professional prankster...Maan realizing Adi is in love after he saw his neat apartment... Geet's letter to Raj jiju just made me cry... Maya's acceptace of Aarvi... Maan explaining Aarav about the love he should give to Aarvi as a big brother instead of scolding him like any other adult would have in that situation... Maan and Geet's discussion on Raam's character... The end where Geet is checking for after sex glow and her friend asking the same question when she texted her that the mystery is solved and Maan's final reply to her...
The FF was just too cute for words... the best part was that it gave us a lot of thought provoking debates and some lovely lessons for life.
Thanks a lot Palindrome.

Thank "you" so much Tarana...
You have covered almost all the "scenes" of Life partner here...😃As a writer,I can't ask for more...
once again thanks dear...🤗

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