MG : ~BLESSING FOR MY LIFE~pt 2,3 pg 6,7 jan 16

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Maan geet~Blessing in my life~

"BLESSED WITH

AN ANGEL OF MY LIFE "

I was just an ordinary man , a man who never expected anything from life no dreams no ambition nothing was there for me , she says i am her angel she calls me angel but who i am .,., ???

Everyday ... Everysecond , every hour i am lost , lost in my self my life and now lost in her... She says i am her owner like i own her but how can i ?? An ordinary man cannot own a priceless possession and she , she is beyond any price.. ...

Like everyday he is seeing her cleaning his room cribbing about him... And like always he is looking at her with those chocolate brown eyes that always speak what is in his heart.. Seeing her in front of him he becomes tongue lied like she has done any magic on him ... His eyes are the reflection of his heart which is himself unaware that his angel is slowly taking that part of his heart that was till now waiting for someone to come and with an authority capture that place which is waiting for its owner with so much eagerness and longing that can't be expressed with any words... These can only be captured with the expression of eyes that can lost itself in the deep pools of those awaited eyes.,...

she was there looking at him cribbing all the way putting all the books beside him near bed...she was the song the melodious saga that he now wanted to cherish for a lifetime...
geet: you have again done this angel see i am tired of doing this.. Why do you trouble me so much... And these she said looking at the books these are my enemies i know you love them more than your life but please try to leave them for sometime they also need sometime for them... Her angel that she calls him was looking at him he wanted to tell her what he feels why he feels how he feels about her , her presence , her words and HER ... For him its her... He was saved by his angel six months back when he had met with an accident no one was there to help him when she came as a saviour and that moment binded them forever unknown to the unrevealed truth.. That was still hidden between them...

He was MAAN that she came to know he was the heart of delhi the most handsome and eligible bachelor... She was there for him when she couldnt contact anyone... She took care of him and now living with him it was a compulsion as he didnt let anyone came near him except his angel... Still he is same and lost his memory in the deadly accident he was in coma for a month..

she was cribbing when he came to her still he cant move his left hand the accident barred the movement

maan : and what do you think angel do you also need some time from me i am also troubling you , i need you at every step in my life ...

there was a deep resentment a sense of burden on him., she never thought that he will say something like this...

she smiled a little and backed a little she settled herself carrying him with her...

geet : you know that my angel can never bother me its just sometime my angel becomes cranky like ., she was thinking keeping her hand on her chin., umm like,
maan : like ...
geet lookeed straightly into his eyes and shouted

geet : DONALD DUCK ... she ran which accidently got his left hand jerked...


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A random thought again...

do share your views

SUHAANA


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Posted: 12 years ago
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for new story
cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was really sweet one ..
plss do continue soon

n pm me as well for this

Luv Ya
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Congrats for new story

Start was awesome

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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting start ! maan lost his memory... can't use his left hand... and geet is his angle... continue soon...
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Nice start
geet calls maan angel
maan was in coma
maan has lost his memory
continue soon
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Congrats...Me dancing...😆
Ska Skanker

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interesting
he seems to have lost his memories in the accident
how did he get invloved in the accident i wonder
and who is geet really to him
pls do continue with it
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRTAS FOR THE NEW STORY
MAAN WAS IN AN ACCIDENT AND LOST HIS MEMORY
GEET TOOK CARE OF HIM
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congrats for the new story dear.
lovely .
continue soon.

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