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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: heytal
Avi it was fantastic👍🏼

👏 👏 👏
Very refreshing n amazing
So when do u grace us with the next part Ladies😳

Thank you Heytal!

Glad you liked it.

My bit is only because I was feeling guilty that I bugged Mariam so much.

Aage it will only be her story...

🤗

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yash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

That was an awesome piece of work Marium, Avi and my darling shiku.. 🤗

Marium and Avi please consider writing.. you both are very good at it.. what can I tell about shiku, she is my fav.❤️

I'll be waiting to read further..

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sweetkj
marium..

it was a mind-blowing piece..
and i am out of words for now..!!

avi..

man you are just awesome..
i just wish if you could write a bit more..
but yeah your these kind of continuations are just whoaa. great.
its wonderful to read them..

you both just made me go flat..!!
you both were so damn catchy man..
i was like.. * wow.. reading.. ended.. oops..!!
scrolling up and down looking for something more.. *

Thanks KJ! 🤗
I know it was short and that's why I didn't want to post it but doston ke aagey chalti hai kya? 😆

Avi's piece was just awesome! It's better than mine and I'm sure of that! 😊

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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Yes, I know. 😳

Read Avi's part. She wrote a continuation. It's just great! 😃

😃

yeah i did. 😊

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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: had2bu

😳 Thank you hai ji! 😳

I could not resist the great start that Mariam wrote...

Me too waiting for more...

🤗Thanks KJ

marium keep on giving starts.. and you continue.. and we will read. 😛

🤗 avi..

waiting for continuation.

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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: mayyo13
Thanks KJ! 🤗
I know it was short and that's why I didn't want to post it but doston ke aagey chalti hai kya? 😆

Avi's piece was just awesome! It's better than mine and I'm sure of that! 😊

kabhi bhi nahi..!! 😉

and i would say i just loved both actully all the three parts.. 😃

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: heytal
This is truly awesome Mariam
Just loved it
Someone was saying I can't write
Yup can see it🤓
Its was truly a commendable effort for the first time infact amazing😳
👏👏👏

Thank you Heytal, for this lovely compliment! 😊

Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

I woke up and as usual signed into IF and guess what I see, a pm from Mayyo OMG!OMG!OMG! 😲with her very own link. Woohoo!👏

Wah bacchu wah! You made my day. After reading that update I have this little smile at the corner of my lips that is just refusing to go away.😊

Yaar it took me back to my teenage days jab kisi ladke ko dekh ke humara bhi dil dhadakta tha. Observing the minute details and habits about that person. Looking at the person and then looking away when you are caught looking and pretending disinterest, then back to the same cycle, but never having the guts to utter a word. 😳

'Welcome Home' brought tears to my eyes, but this piece had me giggling all the way.

Mayyo you absolutely just absolutely cannot and will not stop here. Continue it. What about Geet's feelings. Has she seen him. Is she ignorant to his antics or just pretending.

Likhooo, gadi ko yahi pe maat chodo. Agey badhao.

Waiting eagerly for more.

I loved it but it left me wanting more

Like Oliver Twist says, please ma'am I want some more.😆

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago

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mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: had2bu
My bit is only because I was feeling guilty that I bugged Mariam so much. [/DIV]
Aage it will only be her story...
🤗

You didn't have to feel guilty! Someone said bugging friends is one of the prime rights of friends! 🤗
And even if I'm the only one who writes further, this won't be only my story. It still will be ours! 😃

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: TheBrat
I turn another page, and pause a beat when you enter the class. You think I don't observe you when you enter the class. You think I don't notice you when you look at me that way, you think I am oblivious to you, your laugh, your talks, and you around me.
You would've known better if you'd stopped once to observe why wouldn't I turn a page for so long when you're around.
You'd have known better if you've wondered why would I take the longest route to class, which would pass through the ground where you play. You'd have known better only if you've raised your eyes from the book you try to hold in the last moment. Only if you've turned once, you'd have seen me smiling at the book which you're holding upside down.

He he desperate attempts to push some thoughts in your mind. I lub you Mayya Mayya

Me loving this continuation. Mayyo this is what I want to know from you, does she know or doesn't she?

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