If Only You Saw Me (1) - Page 50

Originally posted by: memyselfndI

Wonderful Update!

Originally posted by: had2bu

Nice update.

The uneasiness felt by two different people expressed in different ways. One just macho-ing his way through it, the other holding onto the support offered and putting on a brave front.

When you decide you don't want to look at a particular someone does that not become the hardest thing to do. Very well expressed.

Thanks for updating...

No thap, thap, thap today.

Originally posted by: TheBrat

I am in love. Absolutely, crazily, madly, deeply, irrevocably, shittily, stupidly, idiotically, blindly, truly, totally, from the moment I had my eyes on the title called Chapter Three, from the moment he, who was outspoken and an extrovert felt nervous of getting an opportunity where she had to notice him, when he wondered if it was the first time she would notice him. Why oh why, you have to do this? My dreamy smile vanished for a second, and I felt a prick at his innocent musing.

Wow! I haven't heard of so many adverbs associated with love before!😆
I'm sorry to have vanished your smile but it's quite natural for someone to feel out of character with that one person who makes us feel what we don't normally feel, don't you think?😊

I came out of it, trying to erase the memory, I believed I loved this guy already but I was up for a surprise. There was more.

Had anyone seen me while I was reading the update, they would have thought I were a mime artist, with no sound escaping my lips and my facial expressions changing drastically, from smile to hurt to smile again.

It's quite a boost to my little self confidence to know that I could actually make you feel the emotions through the chapter!😳

When I believe I loved this man through and through, you introduce her. And I almost want to hit you. You give him competition and me confusion. Now I don't know whom to choose, to say I love. Her nervousness, her talking with her Chhoti for moral support, her feeling nervous, but calming her racing heart, and not showing her inner fears and doing a great job, it made me so proud of her, just as he felt. Her being embarrassed wondering if she really had done well, her lowering her eyes and listening to his speech only to look at his eyes, and finding how sincere they were, and the smile that captured her was warm and untainted. That was enough for me to die and go to heaven. Not before taking a sneak peek at the last line.

You're more than welcome to hit me!😆
She is loveable, isn't she? With her simplicity of dealing with things and with her deeper understanding of things..😊

Okay now I am officially dead. Please look for my obituary advertisement on tomorrow's paper.

For this, I'm going I say a mummy-ish thing. Marne ki baat karti ho?! Tou theek hai, aainda aisa koi kaam nahin hoga jis se you feel this way! Aaj se no more update!😆
Just kidding. Thank you Shika!🤗

Originally posted by: ninand

came across this at the recommendation of a dear fellow reader Avi, and should say, this is a very pleasant change. College goers who aren't obnoxious and full of themselves!.. in fact are simple, and sweet ..

Maan 's quite admiration for her, his awareness about her, his nervousness , despite his confident outgoing personality are endearing. and lol.. do I love Geet for being a bookworm, and a recluse or what:).. the way she finally came to see what the big deal about his eyes and smile was all about , and then decided that that shouldn't be enough to like someone.. yeh , i like her.

I like the simplicity in the story and the characters,.. enhances the mood of the story naturally..well written.

@Avi.. I liked your part too. Although the writer's Geet is slightly different from yours ,in that she is oblivious to Maan, your's isn't too far apart from her..

she did sound as simple and unassuming as the writer's Geet is.. and you should try your hand at writing more often:)..

Originally posted by: sweetkj

our college dude!❤️

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Yes, she noticed what all of it was about and she isn't in denial of the pull of his eyes and smile. But she is mature enough to understand what's been over-talked about and what it actually is. 😊
A little progress is definitely there, but it isn't 'their' progress. It's her progress and it's his progress. Not as much his as hers. 😛
Thanks Onir! I'm glad you like it! 😳