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Mariam, you tease! That last line...
I loved this one, perhaps even more so than the previous part. Whereas the last part was about the girl's allure and the boy's fascination, here, the girl finally becomes real. Well, I say real but in my head, she still that mysterious sprite, hence 'the girl' and not 'Geet'.
You've featured the best love of all - that of family and friends! I'm always amazed at how this one is often overlooked for romantic love. It's my favourite kind; it's hard to imagine that we would be ourselves without the love of those who raised, nurtured and grew up with us. I love the love she feels for her family. It's very heart warming, especially knowing that she is so far from them, that they are always in her heart.
Wow, Mayyo, you're a poet! Did you even know it? 😉 (Yes, yes, I'm going through my PJ phase. Just kidding. Every day's a PJ day 😈) I especially loved the first one.
My rule in life: stick to your own business, no need to be all friendly and talkative with people when you don't feel the same deep down in your heart!
👏 That is a great rule and very relevant these days when a lot is related to how much you say and to who.
So she's not impressed by him at all! Mala te aavadata 😃 (A bit of bootleg Marathi I learnt on the internet today. I give it about ten minutes before someone tells me it's wrong 😆).
I had expected this to be the end but I'm very glad it's not. (It's not, right?). I really want to see what happens next!
And no, don't worry, I was not not studying ;) I was about to take a nap and came online and you updated at around the same time. I despise naps, by the way. But I have come to understand that some of the things you dislike the most can end up being good for you...as I'm hoping Geet will soon discover with the party 😉 (Oh look, she's finally become 'Geet' in my head :) )
- Zarin
I loved this one, perhaps even more so than the previous part. Whereas the last part was about the girl's allure and the boy's fascination, here, the girl finally becomes real. Well, I say real but in my head, she still that mysterious sprite, hence 'the girl' and not 'Geet'.
You've featured the best love of all - that of family and friends! I'm always amazed at how this one is often overlooked for romantic love. It's my favourite kind; it's hard to imagine that we would be ourselves without the love of those who raised, nurtured and grew up with us. I love the love she feels for her family. It's very heart warming, especially knowing that she is so far from them, that they are always in her heart.
Wow, Mayyo, you're a poet! Did you even know it? 😉 (Yes, yes, I'm going through my PJ phase. Just kidding. Every day's a PJ day 😈) I especially loved the first one.
My rule in life: stick to your own business, no need to be all friendly and talkative with people when you don't feel the same deep down in your heart!
👏 That is a great rule and very relevant these days when a lot is related to how much you say and to who.
So she's not impressed by him at all! Mala te aavadata 😃 (A bit of bootleg Marathi I learnt on the internet today. I give it about ten minutes before someone tells me it's wrong 😆).
I had expected this to be the end but I'm very glad it's not. (It's not, right?). I really want to see what happens next!
And no, don't worry, I was not not studying ;) I was about to take a nap and came online and you updated at around the same time. I despise naps, by the way. But I have come to understand that some of the things you dislike the most can end up being good for you...as I'm hoping Geet will soon discover with the party 😉 (Oh look, she's finally become 'Geet' in my head :) )
- Zarin
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