If Only You Saw Me (1) - Page 19

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Tic tic 8

What a present Avi. Thank you.

Avi, wonderful continuation.

Mariam, I hope your friends are able to convince you to continue. You will be making your friends super happy and unhe khush dekh ka, hum bhi khush ho lenge.😆

Excellent piece. Thank you.

Thank you Usha! I am glad you enjoyed it.


Mariam I'm trying to round up all my friends to encourage you.

Hope you are feeling a writing streak coming on.

Here I am, crashing the den of chupa rustams.

@mayyo13 - beautiful piece. Kindly continue.
@Bratty - I can kill you for this you know
@Avi - bellissimo!!

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

First of all, thank you, Avi, for the PM. I wouldv'e missed out on this wonderful story, if you hadn't PM'ed me. :)

Second, amazing! It was so short, but it packed a punch. Chotta packet, bada dhamaka.. :D

Avi, your part was also wonderful.. I loved them all!

I hope you continue this!

P.S. Tic Tic 6😉

Thank you for taking time out to read and comment on this one! 😊

I agree that it was short and it was meant to end where it ended but now I am going to try and continue. 😳

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Tic tic 8

What a present Avi. Thank you.

Avi, wonderful continuation.

Mariam, I hope your friends are able to convince you to continue. You will be making your friends super happy and unhe khush dekh ka, hum bhi khush ho lenge.😆

Excellent piece. Thank you.

Thank you! 😊

Well, my friends have been successful in convincing me and now I'm trying to continue! 😆

Originally posted by: had2bu

Thank you Usha! I am glad you enjoyed it.


Mariam I'm trying to round up all my friends to encourage you.

Hope you are feeling a writing streak coming on.

Thank you Avi, for the efforts you're making. You're such a sweetheart! 🤗

And I can't let your efforts go vain, can I? 😉
I'm going to post the next chapter sooner or later.

PS: How long does this countdown ho on? It's making me a little nervous! 😆

Originally posted by: glassdoor

Here I am, crashing the den of chupa rustams.

@mayyo13 - beautiful piece. Kindly continue.
@Bratty - I can kill you for this you know
@Avi - bellissimo!!

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Tic Tic 6😈

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Originally posted by: mayyo13

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Tic Tic 7😃

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

Tic Tic 7😃

Itni tezi se countdown nahin manzoor!