MGOS:ZKLZSD part 13 ,14 pg 41 jan 14

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~ZINDAGI KE LIYE ZINDAGI SE DOOR~

She was sitting in the hospital a tension a fear can be seen geet was clutching her stomach . She was here for the abortion , somewhere she wanted it to be happen while the other part of her heart was screaming telling her not to do this heinous act , god will never forgive you for doing this . geet " me kya karun babaji main ... Is nanhi si jaan ko aise nahi maar sakti , kaise maar du ise ye mere pyar mere maan ka ansh hai , nafrat bhi nahi kar sakti main iss nanhi si jaan se mera bhi khoon hai ye par ye samaaj ye duniya nahi jeene degi mujhe mere bache ko ek gunehgaar ki nazron si dekhegi aur phir main kaise dekh sakhungi apne bache ki aankho me aanso ... Til til maarne se toh acha hai abhi maar dun .
geet was crying tears were flowing endlessly she is helpless , broken and pregnant . She didnt want to loose her child she loves it , her baby is everything she have , no family or her love . Her love was not strong it was just a game for him . Geet was looking at every patient it seems no one was there for abortion except her .
she was scared when a small cry grabbed her attention "maano uske saare sawalon ka jawab mil gaya , wo rona ek halki si aahat thi uske gum jazbaaton ki taraf "geet looked around and found an infant in his mother's arm mother was cutely scolding the baby and baby made a crying face , geet's heart beat stopped seeing that the baby was about to cry but when the mother hug and kiss the baby smiled making geet smile she very lovingly caressed her still flat tummy . Geet : "baby aap bhi mumma ke saath aise hi karoge ... Phir mumma apne baby ko manayegi jab wo rooth jayega use apni godi me lekar sulayegi ...
geet was lost in her baby but her reverie was broken when she was called , suddenly she realised that she was going to lost her most precious possession.
geet : nahi me aisa nai kar sakti me nai maar sakti ise baby apni mumma ko maaf kar do aapki mumma bahut hi khudgarz thi jo sirf apne baare me soch rahi thi . Babaji maine ek galti ki thi pyaar karke jise me kabi b na bhula sakungi marna chahti thi us din ke baad par kisi mazboot dor ne kheech liya mujhe " wo mera bacha tha babaji ".

Geet get up from her place and left the hospital . She was loving this feel , her motherhood which had just began and most importantly her BABY .

geet reached her home she is been living here since last two months her landlady had been very kind to her . When she fainted last week due to exhaustion and weekness she was the one who took her to call the doctor . Initially when the doctor announced that she is expecting geet was shocked didnt know what to do . That day she cried she cried a lot. But today she is happy she has found the reason to live . .the landlady was living alone and rented a room to geet . When she saw geet she gladly asked

LL : Beta sab theek hai na ...doctor ne kya kaha geet didnt know how to answer she didnt want to lie but if she will tell the truth what will aunty think of her she dont want her to point a finger on her character so she lied ...

geet : aunty sab theek hai she replied without meeting her eyes

LL : Ye toh acha hai beta apne parivaar me ye khushkhabri di ya nahi aur aapke pati wo kab aa rahe hai iss samay aapko sabse jyada jarorat unki hai ...
reality was now infront of her she was unmarried and was having a baby ...,

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so how is it will post next part soon
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INDEX

pt 1 - 4 pg 1

pt 5 pg 2
pt 6 pg 11
pt 7 pg 16

Part 8, page 22 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114327569


Part 9 page 26
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3368597&TPN=26&#


Part 10 page 30
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114962270
part 11 n 12

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3368597&TPN=35#



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zariya123 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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poor geet get pregnant
she wants baby but she is unmarried
what 2 do now
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz cntinue s0‹2m ,lovd da cncept
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz cntinue soon ,lovd da cncept
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CAN YOU GIVE THE PAST
WHAT HAPPENED
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part..
geet unmarried n pregnant
cant think maan cheated her
when he saved her 4m drunkards..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
Update soon
Waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing
both the parts were very well written
geet's inner turmoil
her decision to abort
n then not having the heart to do so
geet is unmarried
but pregnant with maan's kid
sure that maan wudnt have ditched her
geet still loves him a lot
but can't face him
now she going to start a new life
with her unborn baby
hope she dsnt have to face much
n that maan finds her soon
n gives her the life she deserves
update soon
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think these days cassonava protagonists r in.
poor geet
geet dont forgive him when he will come 2 u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Y SOO SMALL UPDATE DEAR...
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BUT NICE 1...😊

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