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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

superb update

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Everything seems to go fine.
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THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part









PART 35

a short one


The real shock was for maan when he listened the word maamu from his baby's mouth.. is this really true.. is he hearing the reality or its just a misapprehension that he heard.. for now he could not say anything he was just standing there with diya in his arms and she was so much busy in playing with the flowers…

Neeraj and nisha left..neeraj didn't even spare a single look to maan.. he actually didn't find something correct .. if maan had done all those things to geet and if he didn't accepted diya at that time then there must be a strong reason as far as he knew maan and his nature he will not did anything that was illogical or without any reasons …. Though he didn't know maan as a person but the valid and visible information about him says that he never did something that could conquer loss… and the way he was holding diya and his eyes were on geet ..there was something that none could have guessed it was actually conceled in his dark brown eyes..

And it was clear he hated geet but not diya.. that was certainly strange…

Maan gave diya to vishal when she was distracted by the little bunnies again… and went to his room.. he knew something was amiss..

Maan opened the armoire ..it was neatly arranged and he searched for box …

No one was there .. he had probably locked the room… though every corner of this room reminded him of geet but strangely the loathing that he gets on seeing her or on still recongnising her presence was visibly reduced…

He fished for those photgraphs those videos… that he had saw three years before and never touched after that…

His finger touched those pictures..it was her .. he closed his eyes in certain disgust .. even looking at those pics ..she in those intimate positions and all nude… but there was not only neeraj but some BAS****D with his wife… she was with THEM in their arms.. but the shame that he mistook as glow was making him to make a wrong impression of her in his mind that was still everytime conflicting with the image he had secured in his heart .. the nave geet that he was unable to take out from his heart just because she holded the place with her all love and warmth…

but certainly maan missed one of those photograph that was the important base of their relationship…

He looked for a video and saw written confidential.. maan kept all the things in a hurry and went taking that video with him…

Here geet didn't knew how to tell her daughter that the person whom she is calling her father doesn't deserve her love.. she wanted to tell him that even though she couldn't say no to diya at that time but he should not forget that she is the only parent she is having and will have…

Geet looked at the family playing with diya showering thier love on her little angel… diya was cutely pouting her lips as sometimes geet did and the next second she will get shy and will hide herself in her daadi's arms…

Geet smiled her heart flutter with some unknown happiness her naughty baby knew how to make everyone cheer …

Geet opened her mouth in astonishment as she saw her daughter's cute demand to her father in law…

Diya : dada ji horsey..diya wants horsey…

~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~

In some other part of the world..a man was in his bed with some of his S*** his hands were roughly holding her and was squeezing her B****.. though the girl was feeling sore and neglected but still she was there with him..she couldn't say a single word as he was roughly handling her…

She came on him taking his lips in her and he started to thrust in her all over again.. flipping her quickly pinning her hands above her head ..though the painful moans were coming out of her mouth but she was still all of his tortures..

He was still into her forcing her with his physical desires when an urgent call disturbed him.. he pushed the girl brutally and took his robe to attend the call sipping his drink…

Man: have you find about her …

The person on the other side gave him some information… and hanged up the call..

He with a disgusted laugh looked at the photo hanging on the wall…

Man: finally I found you … now no one can make me stay away from you not even that husband of yours..GEET..

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Okiess updated part 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous Part
now maan iupto something
waiting fro next
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
who is this anonymous man
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OMG!!! double update de k dil khush kar ditta :)
wow maan is still thinks that geet is in that pix ..he should try to check if that picture r fake or not ...
diya is so adorable
geet is still hurt
waiting for next update plz try to update this ff jaldi jaldi ..next twisy is very interesting ..waiting to know who is that man
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 34
nice part dear...
Diya is getting attached to Maan...

PS - its page 84 dear...

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