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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

How adorable was that ending Mannu.😳

This Maan and Geet's story, I could totally see happening for real. With him all nervous and excited for finally marrying the girl he's loved for so long. His doubts whether it was love or infatuation were completely realistic too, and something any normal human being would go through.

I also loved how Geet confessed her love. As if she herself had been unaware until that moment about her true feelings.

Suhaag raat pe mote mote aasu bahana because you are missing your family completely is justified and something I could totally relate to.😆

Mannu tumhari iss 'Twisted Love Story' ke hum deewane ban gaye. Totally love it.😉

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sdlife19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

sweet end to the story dear

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

IT WAS A TWISTED LOVE STORY BUT LOVED IT

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

thank you guys for ur sweet comments...
mera filmy dialogue
"maine kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki mujhe itne saare likes or comments milenge.."

thank u again...
love u all...🤗

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Ruchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

a nice sweet story dear!!👏

Really loved it a lot!!😳

Specially the Epilogue was very cute!!!😳

The "don't call my smirk stupid" part was awesome!!!😆

You should defo write more often dear!!!😳

Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago

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priyanka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

this is a real endearing read!
for i loved the way the story took it's course and reached it's climax!

amazing job done!
a big thumbs ups to you for such an amazing piece of art!
great!
looking forward to more of your works

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

read ur whole story in a go... and its such an awesome cute story...

though in certain parts i wished u had wrote in more detail but still i loved reading it...loved the shock of geet when maan proposed her or as per u commanded her to marry him but yes the best was the epilogue...

i loved maans pov of earlier times... the way he was drooling her, his hearing her and her friends in the canteen, his continuous effort to speak to her ... just loved it

will be waiting for another cute story from u...

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
read ur whole story in a go... and its such an awesome cute story...

though in certain parts i wished u had wrote in more detail but still i loved reading it...loved the shock of geet when maan proposed her or as per u commanded her to marry him but yes the best was the epilogue...

i loved maans pov of earlier times... the way he was drooling her, his hearing her and her friends in the canteen, his continuous effort to speak to her ... just loved it

will be waiting for another cute story from u...

OMG U LOVED IT..
THANK U SO MUCH FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT..
i have started new story..
here is the link...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3428947/yaariya-part-7-updated-page-11-23rd-jan

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

OMG U LOVED IT..
THANK U SO MUCH FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT..
i have started new story..
here is the link...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3428947/yaariya-part-7-updated-page-11-23rd-jan

jab ithni pyaari story likhi hai so y wont i love it... and yes i will surely read ur new story... all the best for that

ps: i have added ur storys link in the finished thread... hope u dont mind... wish ur work gets more and more readers

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

jab ithni pyaari story likhi hai so y wont i love it... and yes i will surely read ur new story... all the best for that

ps: i have added ur storys link in the finished thread... hope u dont mind... wish ur work gets more and more readers

me chadding on saatwa asmaan😆😆😆😆

thanks for adding the link..😃😃😃😃😃