Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
No Maan can't die leaving Geet & baby 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Haw maan is no more
please bring maan soon
waiting 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
part 7
what?
how could u do that?
poor Geet and the baby...
u better bring back Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HOW NOW GEET HANDLE THIS SITUATION...
WHERE MAAN LEFT ALL ALONE TO FIGHT WITH WORLD...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Nahiii
ok that was too dramatic right

but what a shocking update
maan is dead??????? 😲

waiting to see the new twist in the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
PART 8
Geet z nt crying..the sorrow of loosing hm made her lyk a statue..just luking at the body..placed in front of her.. widout blinking..
ADI--Sir neto sare kam 5 din me khtm.. taki jaldi yaha asake..mujhe wahahi.. therne bldiatha baki kam samvalneko ..par pata nehi tha..ye sab aise..he sighd sadly..dev cried out loudly..sit by geet..
DEV--Mujhe maaf kr dijiye bhavi..main ye news sunkehi vag k chale gaya..phr v bhai ko apke pass nehi la paya..she z nt even muvd.. anya saw..she shaked in inside..seeing hr shock state..she sit..placed 1 hand on hr shoulder..
ANYA--di..di..kch boliye na di..bt still she didnt react.. seems lyk no sound is reching to hr.. mihika came to hr..hlding hr shouldr..shaked hr..
MIHIKA-- geet..tu kyu nehi ro rahi..dekh tera maan tujhe chod k chala gaya..ro geet..ro..she cried hlding hr..jst thn baby bgn to cry..feeling hungry..
ANYA--di hamare bat na suniye.. par apke grihith ki to suniye..baby z nw crying mre..geet blinkd..babys cry made hr to react..Luk at hr baby..tuk hr frm anya..
GEET--shona..baba ..kya hua,mumma apke pass haina.. she stood..silent trs rolling dwn frm hr eyes..she went to hr bedrum to feed baby..
BUAJI--koi geet k sath jawo..iss halat me bacheko akele nehi samval payegi..
ANYA--buaji,ap chnta mat kijiye..di ko kch der rehne dijiye akele..
Itz bcm evening..every1 come bck home aftr doing the othr rituals..nishan cm to thr rum..saw mihika crying hlding maans pic..nishan sit by hr..she huggd hm..
MIHIKA --ye kyu hua nishan..ye iss bar v apna man mani krlia..bas chala gaya..
NISHAN--mihika..i cant believe till nw ki..his voice caught in hs thorut.. mihika hld hm tightly..
in the mean tym,in devnyas rum..dev z standing nr the window..anya came to hm..placed hand on hs shoulder..
ANYA--dev,pata nehi hamare ghr ki khushi ko kiske najar lag gaye(she shed trs..dev hld hr hand..)main jati hu..diko kch khilaneki kaushish krti hu ..dupaharse pani tak nehi pi rahe..aise hal me ye thk nehi hai..
CONT BELOW..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
CONTINUED
He nodded..
DEV --anya,doc phr aya tha..
ANYA--ha,dadima ko nind k injection deke gaye..aur fully bed rest dena hai unhe..she bit hr lips muffled the cry..thr whole families happines,peace just got vanishd at once..dev hld hr..
DEV--samavalo khd ko anya..bhavi ki khayal rakho.. aur ha..miki di Kaha hai..?
Anya --rum me hai..jiju hai unke sath..he nodded..anya went out..
she came in dining..sur z sitting on chair..hlding hr cheeck..just eaten hr food..The whole day she z seeing every1 z sad.. she dont knw wht happend..anya brushd hr hair..
SUR--mumma, sab sad kyu hai..anya dnt knw wht to say..
ANYA--beta apke bade papako na..bhagvanji star bana dia.. woh ab yaha..hamare sath nehi rehga..hr voice crackd..sur lukd at hr..thn went making grumpy face.. anya tried to stop hr..bt no use..she sighd..tld nakul to take sme food to mihikas rum..thn tuk sme fr geet..
Here..at geets rum..baby z sleeping peacefully on cradle..After drinking tummyful milk..geet z sitting by hs cradle..hr heart z aching.. trs are rolling dwn..she clenchd hr fist..maan z no more..the sentence echoing in hr mind..sill she couldnt able to accept it..today was gonna be best day in her lyf..bt it bcm a nightmare in daylight..hw ll she manage to live without hm..hw could he leave hr lyk thz..sur came to her..saw her crying..she already came here fr 4 tym from noon..bt seeing hr crying..she went away..bt nw..enterd inside..sit in front of her..
SUR-- badi ma..main janti hu ap kyu ro rahe ..(geet luk at hr vacantly..)mumma ne kaha badepapa ab star ban k asman pe rehnge..yaha nehi rehnge.. par ab chnta mat karo..main vagbanji ko bl k badepapa ko yaha le ayungi.. Plzz ap mat royie..she wiped her cheeck wid hr little hand..sur talking touchd geet to the core..she huggd hr tightly..break dwn in silent trs..anya saw whole matter standing near door ..
ANYA--st.. bhagvan,kis bat ki saza derahe hama re family ko..hr heart clenchd..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnx who lykd and comment on part 7...bt i m still sad...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
sad sad update

hoping some miracle will happen n maan will come back

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
😭😭😭cant belive maan is no more...poor geet..😭😭 to emotional..pls cont soon..

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