Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
kuch nehi hua maan ko...woh wapas ayega...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
another sad part...;(
by crying geet let her heart low...
and last her appearance in whitte was teriffic for all...
n plz dont discontinue it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 9
nice part...
poor Geet...
plz bring back Maan somehow...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear u r writing just mindblowing thank u fr being a wonderful writer on gf love reading ur works
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet n her pain
n now in widow dress
yaar plz dont made me cry na 😭
will not say lovely or awesome
how can i hwen u killed my maanu
me sure he cant die haina
waiting






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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 10
Every1 in drawing rum get cncious hearing anyas cry..she came thr running..hlding dev..she bgn to cry more..
DEV--Anya bat kya hai..she cant able to say anythng..just thn geet cm thr.. every1 lukd at hr..all get agn shock seeing hr lyk tht..thz z nt the geet they know..thz geet z unknown to thm..Every1s heart wrenchd..mihika went to geet..
MIHIKA--Ye kya hai geet..tu ye kya pehna hai..ha..geet lowerd hr gaze..tried nt to cry..hlding baby cls..
NISHAN--sachme..geet tm kyu aise.. he cant able to finish as geet luk at wid teary eyes..
GEET--Ab yehi sahi hai..hr voice crackd..she hld baby mre cls..mihika luk at hr..hr thz attire made hr feel more pain..abt absense of hr bro..
MIHIKA--Kya sahi..ha..tu kya bolegi ki kya sahi hai..tu yeh sab nehi pehnegi bas..dev anya bl ise ki ye sb nehi chalega..she tld directly..anya cring luking at othr side..dev just luk at hr bhavi..dnt knw wht to say..jst thn buaji nd anyas mom cm thr.. hearing ths..
BUAJI--ho kya raha hai..waha ma so rahe..aur tm log..mihika didnt pay heed..
MIHIKA--geet..ja change kr a..geet clsd eyes..dnt knw..hw to made thm undrstud..
ANYAS MOM--are mihika beta kya bl rahe ho..are yehi niyam hai..ki...nw anya opend hr mouth..
ANYA--mom plzz chup kijie ap..
BUAJI--Anya..galat kya kaha unhone..sahi to hai..tmlog geet ko rok kyu rahe ho..yehi chalta aya hai..Anya trnd hr gaze in pain..
DEV--buaji..aise niyam logone banaya hai..jo ham nehi mante..bhavi aise kapde nehi pehnegi..
BUAJI--par ye to..
MIHIKA--buaji..kch bat hame decide krne dijiye..geet..chal..aise niyam main tujhe manne nehi dungi..
GEET--Di..bate sirf niyam ki nehi hai..
Jab woh meri dil k sare rang leke chale gaye fr bahar k rang se kya fadak padta hai..tears rolling dwn frm hr eyes..wht can nw mihika say..thr z nthng to say nw..
DEV--par bhavi..
GEET--nehi dev..main janti hu tmlogoko taqleef horaha hai..par plzz sab meri ye bat samjho..every1 got silent..mihika luking at geet widout blink..saw the jolly, happy grl got changed at once..
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Posted: 12 years ago
mihika slowly tuk baby frm her..baby muved snuggled in hr arms..she kissd hz frhead..
MIHIKA--grihith tere pass maan k sab se badi nishani hai..bas isko kabhi koi dard,kami k ehsas v na hone dena..koi v..geet undrstood wht she meant..nodded slowly..
GEET--di..aplog ise thodi der samvaliye..main ati hu..sayin thz..she went bck to hr rum..anya tried to stop hr..bt nishan forbid hr..
NISHAN--nehi anya..mat roko usse.. usne apni pyar khoya hai..usehi khdko samvalna padegi..anya nodded..dev sighd..buaji nd anyas mom went frm thr..HERE geet cm to hr rum crying.. hr heart z bleeding..luk at thr photo of marraige..went to it..traced hr fingrs on the portion whr z maan..
GEET--kyu chale gaye ap..apne dekha sab kaise bikhar gaye..ab main kya karu..bataiyena..she cried mre..thn remind wht mihika said..she have to b strng..fr hr baby..fr hr family..she wiped tears.. AFTR 15 days of tht accident..nisan nd mihika went bck to thr hme already..every 1 sitting in drawing.. wrk going lyk bfr..bt feeling blank for maan..akash came thr wid a file..
AKASH--bhai..isme sign chaiye..maan bhai nehi hai to ap hi..dev luk at hm.. tuk it..give it to geet..
DEV--bhavi..isme sign kr dijiye..she knotted hr brow not undrstanding it..
GEET--main kyu sign karu dev..
DEV--kyuki..bhai k jaga agr koi le sakte hai to woh ap hai..mera v koi haq nehi hai uspe..he tld straightly.. buaji came thr..heard it..
BUAJI--dev..tujhe pata hai..iss ghr ki bahu e bahar kam nehi krti..
DEV--buaji..kal ki bat kal me thi..ye aj hai..bhavi..sign krdijiye..akash le jayega..
GEET--par main kaise ye..
ANYA--di..dev galat to nehi kaha..ap kyu jijak rahe ho..
DEV--i knw..baby ab chota hai isiliye ap jijak rahae hai..main abhi apko office ane nehi bl rahi..baby thoda bada ho jaye fr ap ana shuru krna.. ghrme anya hai..woh baby ko tab smvl legi..bt she still cnfusd..
ANYA--di apke sare bat hamne manli..ab ap ye to manlijiye..geet lukd at thm..sighd..signd on the file.. Akash tuk it silently..went..buaji also went frm thr feeling irritated..
Edited by Nasioush - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx who have lykd part 9...here z part 10...press lyk and comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
yieppee me first

now about the update

reading it i cried as the situation of geet is unbearable
do tell me that bauji of maan hates geet???

looking forward to the next part

thanks fro pm
Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beiging was painful but reading end part got lil relief as dev action made happy... Nxt cont. Sooon... 😊

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