Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
grrr me hate u
me 😭😭😭
u pagal; how could u made us cry
u kniow its bad
maanu me want maanu bas😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
part 8
nice part...
poor Geet...
bring back Maan...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Saddy update plz kuch b karke maan ki re entry karwa do na
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
loved it
it was really heart touching

poor geet she has lost her love
loved sur's talks

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
kya maan kabhi geet se alag ho sakta hai...kabhi nehi...maan wapas ayega...

heart wrenching
update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet realise sur frm hug..
SUR-- aur ha badepapa jab ajayenge,tab unhe dat dungi..Ki hame na bl k woh star kyu ban gaye..geet carressd hr hair..anya sighd..wiping tears,come inside..
ANYA--sur,beta ap jake abhi so jawo..thk hai..badi ma ko aram krne do..sur nodded lyk a gud girl..went bading gud nyt..thn sitting beside hr,anya tuk a spoon of rice..hld it in front of geets mouth..
ANYA --di lijie..dupher se kch nehi khaya apne..(geet jst shaked head to no.. trnd hr face..)di..aise nehi chalega.. agr ap nehi khaoge to grihith ka khayal kaise rakhoge..geet luk at hr.. thn at babys cradle..ryt..hr baby needs her..she cant deny tht,she open hr mouth to eat anya slowly feed hr full platesaw she still shedding tears silently..pressing the grief inside..anya put the plate at side..
ANYA--di aise dard ko andr dawa k mat rakhiye ..apne in ansoon k sath sare dard nikal..dijiye..geet luk at hr..
GEET --kaunsi dard ha..main kaha rone lagi kisike liye..(she wipd hr tears quickly.. anya hld hr hand)Bl..kyu rou main..woh 1 bar v kch nehi sochana janese pehle..fr main kyu rou..her breath raised..anya felt so pain seeing hr cndition..
ANYA --di ap...bfr she could finish,geet started..
GEET--anya..woh sab ko chod k aise kyu chale gaye..ha.. shayed..shayed..main hi achi biwi nehi ban payi..issiliye woh chale gayena.. Par ab main kya karungi..main unke bina kaise ji paungi..Blna tu..main.. main..hr voice chockd..she cried out loudly fr the frst tym..hlding anya..hr grief of loosing hr love bgn to come out frm hr soul..anya hld hr..didnt stopd hr crying..cz thz crying z needed fr her to let out hr pain,grief..anya caressd hr hair..geet z crying hr heart out..hearing hr crying..Dev,mihika, nishan nd all othr cm thr..anya saw.. shakd hr head to stop thm frm saying anythng. Mihika placed hr palm on mouth to muffle crying..nishan tuk hr frm thr wid heavy heart..dev watchd geet fr smetym vacantly..thn just went frm thr..all othr also went slowly..anya let geet cry as much she want..geet felt so weak..bgn to sob..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUED
Anya made hr luk at hr..wiped hr trs..
ANYA--di..chaliye ab..so jayie.. abhi baby hai apke sath.. Agr khud ka khayal nehi rakhenge baby ko kaise samvalenge..chaliye..she hld hr..help hr to stand..tuk hr to bed..help hr to lied dwn..thn placed baby by hr side.. geet carressd its head..baby moved in hs sleep..she patted hm..anya came to otherside to sleep..
GEET-- anya baby jab thoda bada ho jayega tab.. tab main usse kya kahunga ki uske dad kaha hai..Hr trs agn bgn to flow dwn..anya dnt knw the ans of thz q..remain silent..cring..
GEET- -nehi janti na..main v nehi janti..mera bacha to ekbr apne dadse mil v nehi paya..she clsd eyes in bth pain and tiredness..sleep dwn slowly..anya saw..hr words piercd lyk niddle in her heart..
ANYA--st...bhagvan,jitne dard meri di ko mil rahe bas use mita do..iss jindegi me aur kch nehi mangungi apse...praying ths,she slept dwn..
At the mean tym in devs rum, he z sitting on hs bed..thnking abt his bhavi..hr painful crying echoing in hz mind..
DEV--ajtak khd ko itna majbur kabhi nehi laga..kyu..kyu krte ho bhagvan aise..aisa lag raha hai jaise hat pair band dia gaye meri..kch nehi kr sakta..kch v nehi..he coverd hs face wid hs palms..

NXT MORNING..anya wake up..saw geet z sleeping..she didnt wake hr up as she had to wake up a couple of tym at nyt to feed baby..anya went down stairs to check dadi..sleeping..buaji z sitting by her..all othr also wake up.. And cm dwn evetually..a black shaddow of pain on every1 face..
DEV--anya bhavi uth gayi?
ANYA --pata nehi..main dekh k ati hu..she went..
anya cm to geets rum..saw she z nt in rum..nd baby is on cradle.. may b she z in washrum..she turnd to go..bt stopd hearing the sound of opening washrum door..she trned..bt seeing hr..hr heart get stuked..she tuk 2 step bck..geet wear a full white salwar-kamiz..thr z no sindoor..no manglesutra..anya cried out loudly..she just broke dwn seeing hr di..in thz attire..ran frm thr..geet sighd in pain..tuk baby..too went out..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnx who have lykd part 8...here z part 9...press lyk and do coment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
feel so painfull😭😭😭😭😭..pls cont next part soon..

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