Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 2

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PART 1
KHURANA MANSION
Its evening tym..sur z playing..anyia already 5-6 time told her to do her H.W..now she really become fed up.. ANYA--sur..abhi utho aur padne jawo.. SUR--mumma plzz..ap mujhe khelnehi nehi dete..rukhiye aj ane dijiye badepapa aur dad ko..just then maan nd dev return..sur saw them..ran to them joyfully..maan tuk her.. MAAN--kya hua hamari beti ko..bt nw she forget to complain..asked another q.. SUR--badepapa..ap mere doll laye..aur dad woh jo gadi lane boli woh v laye ap..?maan dev smiled..dev pulld hr cheek.. DEV--ha..hamari mumma k adesh thi woh..ham kaise na mante.. ANYIA--lo aplog na isse bigad k chodenge..har roj iski mange man k.. MAAN--aise mat bolo anyia..ye to hamari beti k samne kch v nehi..haina...sur smild.. ANYIA--par sur tu gadi kyu mangwai..tu to gadi leke nehi khelti.. SUR--are woh to bhai k liye hai..badima ne kaha woh bhai layenge.. mere liye...nw anya smild.. ANYA--chalo acha hai kam se kam ye aur k liye sochna to suru ki...sur made a face.. DEV--anya..mat chervao isse..hamari beti samajdar hogayi...anya nodded..ryt thn anyas mother cm thr..she came here to visit anya.. MAAN--namaste mousiji..she lukd at him..quitely noded..went agn inside..sur made a face.. SUR--nani bht buri hai..evry1 luk at her.. ANYA--sur aise nehi blte woh bade hai.. SUR--nehi unohone mujhse buri baat boli.. DEV--acha..aisa kya kaha beta.. SUR--ki jab nayi baby ayegi.tab badepapa badima mujhse pyar nehi karegi.ab ye to jhoot bat hai..aur jhoot blna buri hai..every1 get silent.. anya get irritated inside..she dnt knw why her mom always talk lyk thz.or never understand wht prob she have with maaneet..maan marreid geet after 2 years of devnyias marraige..when geet cm to thz house,her mom always tried to create a bad image in her mind about maaneet..bt she never paid a heed..as she knw well how r they..bt nw her mom agn tring it..this tym with her daughter..
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ANYA--bata nehi mom ka prob kya hai..jab ate hai aisi vaisi batein blte rehte hai.. DEV--jane do na..aisehi keh dia hoga..she got silent..totall atmosphere get tensed..Maan noticed the situation get cmplicated..he tried to ease it.. MAAN--are dev hamare sur itni badi kab hogayi..sab samajti hai..dev smiled..anya too smiled a little..she decided she will talk abt it with her mom..why she always tries to create prob between them..just then nakul cm there with a glass of milk.. NAKUL--bhabi ye badi bhavi ko ab deke aye.. ANYA--o ha..aur di ko blna puri khtm kare..main ati hu..maan put sur dwn..made her go to do H.W.. MAAN--anya..tmhare di kya kr rahi hai..kya ab v.. ANYA--subah ap bl k gaye jane k bat..tab se leke mu fulake baithi hai...maan sighd..he have to go simla for some work tomorow morning..nd that also for 10 days..here geets delivary date z near.. DEV--bhai..bhavi k narajgi sahi hai.. ANYA--sachme veerji..apko abhi hi jana hai..jab di ko ap k jarurat hai.. MAAN--are main thodi shaukh se jaraha kya..aur koi rasta nehi hai..dev ka janese v kam nehi hoga..huhh..kismat fhuti..jake dekh ta hu ab..he went to hz rum.. Maan enterd in room wid fear..saw geet z drinking the milk..she put the glass on sidetable nd saw hm..looking at hm she made a face..turnd her face..placing hand on her belly.. GEET--baby ap apne dad ko bol do..mujhe unse bat nehi krni..maan sit by her side..place hz hand on her belly..felt babys kick.. MAAN--par baby mujhe to bat krni hai..apke mumma ab gusse me na tomato lag rahi..geet get so irritated.. GEET--Hawww..main tomato hu..? MAAN--ab to alloo lagrahi ho.. GEET--MAAAN..ap.. MAAN--geet mujhe lagatha tm mujhse bat nehi koroge..she agn made a face.. MAAN--geet samajne ki kaushish karo..mujhe v bht bura lag raha hai..par kya karu.. GEET--jaiye na..kisne roka apko..a tear touchd hr eyes..maan wipped it.. hld hr face in hands.. MAAN--geet agr itni ansoon leke jane bologe to dekhna kch bura hoga mera..geet immidiately put her palm on hz lips..they lukd at each other..

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