Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
wow its was so cute
maaneet expecting their first baby n geet angry cause maanu ja rha hai on some stupid business trip uff
maanu geet ko b leja😆😆
n wt bura hoga oye aiwe hi dra mat
sur lvd her she is soo cute
lovely update yaar
\aiting 4 more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awesome
waiting for the next part
uff yeh anya ki mom usko dakhe mar ke nikalana chaiye ghar se
aur poor geet maan usko isse time pe chod ke ja raha hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
lovely update

maan going while geet is pregnant

what will happen next lets see

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Thanx all who gave lyk and coment till now...
Edited by Nasioush - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet^s eyes filld wid more tears..
GEET--maan ap aise bat kyu krte ho hamesha..bata hai apko mujhe kitni taqleef hoti hai yesb batose...he smiled a little..
MAAN --tmhi batao main kya karu..ekdum phas gaya hu bij me..aur vaise v main to jald hi chala ayunga..phr?to ab achi ladki k tada bat ko manlo.
GEET-- thk hai..par ap kam khtm kr k hi chale ayenge..
MAAN--ha baba apke hukum sarako pe..geet gigled..just thn anya came..with a plate of pasta..
ANYA--Are wah.. di k mood to thk hogaya..to di ab jaldi se ye kha lijiye with happy mind..
GEET--anya tu na mujhe khila khila k kaddu bana degi..anya laughd..
ANYA--di ap na nakhre na karo khalo ab..bt she z agn making face..
ANYA--niche mihika di ayi hai..ap nehi khayenge na to unhe bulaenge..
MAAN--kya miki ayi..kab..?mihika cm thr..
MIHIKA--oyee maan main kab ayi hu woh jan k tu kya karegi.. mera ghr hai jab chahu ayungi..
MAAN--are main to..she ignrd hr bro,luk at geet..
MIHIKA--geet fr khana nehi kharahi ho..aur maan tu..apni biwi ko bl k khana v nehi khila sakta..hopeless..maan lukd at her with knotted brow..thz z hz twin sister whom he calld miki with affection..whenever she come,bth get into fake quarell nd debate..knowing thz geet nd anya hide thr smile..
Maan--o hello..2 min k bada hu tujse..koi respect deti nehi upar se jhagarti hai..
MIHIKA--bade aye 2 min k bada..2 min koi tym hai kya..
MAAN--teri pass to hogi v nehi..akal ki andhi..
MIHIKA--maan tu chup kar nehi to khair nehi..
MAAN--tune jagda shuru ki to tu chup kr...geet nd anya enjoing it quitely..nishan,dev,dadima cm thr..hearing thr tu tu main main..
DADIMA--o ho..bache k bache hi rahege dono..kya hai ye..maan nd mihika get chup..
NISHAN--sach kaha apne dadi..
Maan going to say smthng..bt dadi stopd them..
DADIMA--Ab kam ki batein suno..(every1 lukd at her)dinner ready hogayi sab chalo..
DEV--dadi ap v na..dara dete ho..dadima smild naughtily..every1 laughed..went for dinner..maan helpd geet to walk to table..
CONT BELOW..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUED..
ON table..all taking their meal wid little chatting..
NISHAN--dadima buaji nazr nehi arahi..
DADI--woh amritsar gayi hui hai..akash v uske sat gaya hai..
MIHIKA--tabhi to batau ghrme itna sanata kyu hai.. every1 laughd..as their buaji z so stict..always asking why thz happend..why tht not happend..
DADI--are ye sab chodo..mihika beta ap boliye..kab apne bacho ko mujhe dikhayenge.. mihika nd nishan felt so shied..
MIHIKA--kya dadi ap v..
MAAN--are dadi ye to khudkohi nehi samval pati..bachi kaise samvalegi..
DEV--sachme..bata nehi jiju ko kaise samvalti hai..
MIHIKA--dadi inndono ko mana kijiye..nehi to..
DADI--acha thk hai..koi nehi satao mihika ko..all finishd thr meal..aftr smetym mihika nd nishan went home..evry1 also bck to their respective room..bt anya stopped her mom..
ANYA --mom ap sur ko woh sab bl k acha nehi ki.
MOM--are..main to thk hi...
ANYA--plzz mom..ham bht khsh hai..usme koi prob mat kijiye... plzzz..she went..her mom felt so angry thnking how much thz maan geet affected her daughter..
At maaneet rum..they are siting on bed..he held her hand and placed it on his chest..she lukd at hm..
GEET--Maan ap kal jarahe ho?..he smild slightly..
MAAN--ab v tm woh hi soch rahi ho..
GEET-- bata nehi,bht ghavrahat ho rahi hai..
MAAN--iss tym me aisa hota hai tension mat karo..bt thz tym her heart z not hearing anythng.. unkown fear covering her..she tried to convert it..
GEET--vaise maan babyne mujhse kaha he ll miss u..he placed hz hand on her belly..
MAAN--aur dad v..
GEET--kitna jaldi waqt chalta hai na..4 sal honewale hai hamare shadi ka..
MAAN--ha..ab baby v ayega..hame nayi khushi dene..he leand and kissd hr belly..thn heed to kiss her..bt she stopd hm..
GEET--baby sab dekh rahe hai..sharam kijiye..
MAAN--par baby ne kaha hai..dad main ankhen band kr k so jata hu..to nehi dekhega woh..their lips met..they kissd passionatly..
GEET--I love u..
MAAN--love u too..he made her ly wid comfort..bth sleep dwn..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ummm...me saddy saddy...so guyzz give fuels for my writing...u know what z that...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
nice update
loved it
Miki and maan's cute fake fight
dadima is drama queen
cute family
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant parts
read part 1 nd 2
loved maaneet moments
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
lovely update
kch bura mat karna

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