Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
nice part...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear maan kya sahi mein wapas nehi ayega...dil nehi maanta...plz leke ao wapas geet k khatir...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet knotted her brow..
GEET--woh Indian hai..?
DEV--ha..par rehte aye hai london me..shayed..bht kam blne wale insan hai..ajtak bat hi nehi hua unse..bhai ka v nehi hui..
GEET--Matlab?..i mean..maan ka v nehi bat hua tha unse..
DEV--Nehi bhabi..Mr.ahuja k PA..un k Behalf sare contact krti hai..aur mr. Ahuja koi meeting aur appointment k siva na kissise milte hai..na bat krte hai..geet bcm a little surprised..what type of man is hE.. may be he z so much introvert person..she thought..
BUAJI--dev..ye khane k table hai.. kamse kam yaha office k bat mat laya kr..saying thz she went..geet sighd..she knw..buaji is nt liking tht she going to work in office..anya saw hr tensed..
ANYA--Di,ap buaji ko jante hona.. chnta mat kijiye..geet nodded..went frm thr..
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It bcm 11pm of night..bt thr z no sleep in babys eyes..he z playing.. throwing legs..hands..geet z watching hm wid great peace..she kissd hm on nose..
GEET--mera baba ko aj ninni nehi arahi..hmmm..baby throwing hs leg more hearing hs mumma..geet tuk hm in hr lap..hld hm cls to hr chest..patted hs bck..anya cm thr..
ANYA--kya bat hai..aj iss janav abhitak nehi soye..baby mumma ko tang kl lahe ho..
GEET--uhuu..baby chotima ko bolo.. main to achi baby hu..bilkul tang nehi klta..anya smild..caressd babys back head..
ANYA--di main..geet inturrapted..
GEET--Main janti hu tu kya bolegi.. yehi k main rukh jati hu yaha..anya main samval lunga isse..tu ja..jake so ja..(bt she still hesitate)..anya..main achise samval lunga isse..ja..gud nyt..anya nodded..kissd babys head ..went..
geet saw baby already slept dwn..she slowly put hm on bed..patted hm.. place pillow on hs bth side..She tuk the photo of maan from side table..huggd it..tears are rolling dwn frm her eyes..she trid everyday made hrself calm in frnt every1..bt thr z a trnedo crashing hr inside..she carressd the photo..tears falling dwn on it..
GEET--maan..main kya karu..apko khone ka dard dil se nehi nikal sakti main..nehi nikal sakti..she bgn to cry mre..lied dwn beside baby..hugging it..CONT BELOW
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Posted: 12 years ago
CONTINUED..
Anya saw it..standing near the door..understood why geet didnt want her stay thr..she wipd hr tears..turnd to go..saw dev standing..dev also saw geet crying..he luk at anya..thn went silently to rum..she sighd..went behind hm..
AFTER 9 MONTHS..
Anya feeding baby cereal between playing..as baby bcm really mischivous..whnever she made hm sit one place..He bgn to crawl in twinkle of eyes..geet cm thr getting ready fr office..she started going to office whn baby was 5 mnths..she smild..cm to them..
GEET--ale..mela baba kya kha lahi.. grihith luk at hs mumma..give hr a smile..raise hs hands to hr..geet tuk hr..
GRIHITH--mum..mum..mum..all he could said thz..nd othr thngs..on hs own language..geet kissd hs cheeck..
GEET--shona..mumma ab office jayegi..shararat na klna..he giggld..
ANYA--ab ye to nehi ho sakta di.. kyuki chotima ko to baby ka satana pasand hai..geet put hm dwn to hr.. carresd babys head..
GEET--main ab chalti hu anya..bye.. shona bye..anya hlding babys hand bade bye to geet..she smild..went..
Geet came to office after 15 min.. went to her cabin..tuk sit..everyday cming here she felt,she z so cls to maan..she sighd..Bgn to work..adi cm inside..
ADI--mam..woh..mr.Ahuja..pauch gaye hai..abhi gadi me ya a rahe hai..geet remind it nw..today she has meeting wid Mr.Ahuja..she nodded.. he went out..she checkd everythng agn,she dont want any fault..as its maans wish to work wid hm..
Aftr smtym geet cm out frm cabin hearing mr.ahuja arrived thr..He step out frm the lift..geet luk at hm..nd wht she saw..she felt sm1 snatchd away the ground undr hr feet..she luk at othrs..seeing thr reaction she understood she didnt saw wrng..he z wearing a casual suit..a frameless glass on hs eyes..hs eyes r blue in color..bckbrashd hair..clean shaved face..bt except thz thngs..hs face z just luk alike maan!!..he stood in frnt of hr..strechd hs hand..
IKSHIT--Mr.ikshit ahuja..u should be mrs.geet singh khurana..geet felt lyk whole world spining..she fainted..fall dwn..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally maan is here yipee awsum update
Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx who lykd part 11...nw give lyks nd comments here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
i was thinking like this will be the twist

Mr. Ahuja is resemblance of maan

as the title of your ff is mere ajnabee

shock was there in all the face especially geet


thanks for pm

continue soon
Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
m ws damm sure ki mr. ahuja he maan honge/ uske tarah dikhate honge...
ab asli maza aayega story kaaa...
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet missing maanu me too
a small leap n this ahuja
mujhe toh phle doubt tha
bt is he my maanu
hope he is maanu cant see anyone oin my maanu's place
very obsessive na😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
nice part...
is that Maan?
cont soon dear...

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