Maaneet--Mere Ajnabee..PART 14 on PAGE 27&IMP NOTE PG28 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww again painful update
cant see her in pain
jab koi chla jata hai how much it hurts i know
geet will join office
bt still there is hope my maanu will come
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear u r making me shed tearsss
awsome part
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
nice...
poor Geet...
this Bua is so irritating...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part

please bring maan back I can't see geet like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 11
Geet z sitting worriedly..wht if she failed to manage hr all duties..dev sit beside hr..seeing hr still worrid..
DEV--bhavi..apko to pata hai KC bhai k liye apna ek aur family hai..woh jaha v hai..ab v unke liye utnahi ye maine rakhta hai..aur main janta hu..ap sab samval loge kyuki..bhai ab v apke sath hai..geet luk at hm.. sighd..
GEET--main nehi janta dev main kitna samval paungi..par kaushish jarur karungi..dev slightly smild..anya put hand on hr shoulder..dev stood up to go to office..bt stoppd..
DEV--o ha..anya..tm aj sur ko lane mat jana..main use le ayunga..she nodded..dev went..
ANYA--di..ap kamreme jaiye..main kitchen se ati hu..geet hld baby securely..nd went to hr rum..anya sighd luking at hr going..
ANYA--bhagvan..meri diko sab kch samvalneki shakti dena..she turnd to go..saw hr mom..
ANYAS MOM--ye kya sun rahi anya.. dev beta geet ko kaha office ane k liye..anya felt so irritated..
ANYA--sahi suna apne ma..aur issme galat koi bat to hai nehi..
ANYAS MOM--are tujhe dev ko samjha k ye rokhvana chaiyetha..tu to..
ANYA--mom..plzz..main fr ekbr apse minti kr ta hu..ki aise baten krna bandh kijiye..she went frm thr..
ANYAS MOM--bata nehi iss ladkiko kab akal ayegi..she fumed
At the mean tym at geets rum..she placed baby on bed..sit beside hm.. baby z nw awake..luking at with hs big eyes..she z watching hm..itz gives hr peace to hr heart..she bent dwn hr head to hm..tuk hs tiny hand..kissd.. touchd it wid hr cheeck..
GEET--pata hai..sab kehte hai tere ankhen mumma jaisa hai..Aur tera hath bilkul papa jaisa..baby z muving hs legs nd hands..geet kissd hs frhead .tears touchd hr eyes..
GEET--shona..tu dad ko miss krta hai ?..jab v tu jagke rehta hai..ye lagta hai..ki tere ankhen tere dad ko dhundta hai..hr voice chockd..every tym..evry moment hr heart z wrenching for maan..she tuk baby in her lap..baby yawnd..made a sound of crying..geet knw now he ll drink milk nd thn ll sleep dwn..she bgn to feed hm..he slept dwn slowly aftr hs tummy got full..
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Posted: 12 years ago
CONTINUED
Geet tuk hm..slowly put hm on cradle..baby muvd as he z not in hs moms lap..she patted hm..anya come thr..
ANYA--baby so gaya di..geet nodded ..anya luking at hr..before she like to talk continuosly..bt nw everythng just changed..tears filld hr eyes..geet saw..
GEET--anya..kya hua..anya huggd hr..bgn to cry..geet hld hr..
ANYA--di..sab kch aisa kyu bangaya.. kyu..tears also cm into geets eyes.. she wipd thm..made anya luk at hr..wipd hr cheeks..
GEET--meri pagli hai tu..ab aise mat ro..nehi to tere veerji ko lagega..main hi sab ko rula rahi hu..(hr voice z shaking..bt she make it up)..sun mihika di se bat hui teri?..
ANYA--hmm..di ko doc ne cmplete rest lene kaha..koi stress lene mana kia..par di to..she got silent..geet sighd..here dadima z sick..thr di z too becoming less cncious to hr health.. Geet luk at maans photo..
GEET--ST..ap to bas chale gaye..par dekhiye..kya hal hai sab ka..
Anya noticed geet z thnking smthng.. luking at maans photo..she hld hr hand..she startled..
ANYA--kya hua di..
GEET--kch nehi..chal niche chalte hai.. She tuk baby carefully..bth went dwn.
AT NIGHT..all are haveing dinner..
SUR--mumma nehi khani mujhe ye.. ummm..mujhe pasta chaiye..main ne to kaha tha..the name of pasta.. remind every1 abt maan..its his fav dish..all become silent..
ANYA--shararat nehi krte beta..khalo ..bt sur still making a face..geet cm thr..making pasta fr her..
GEET--ha sahito hai..meri shona beti to pasta hi khayegi..sur made a cheer ful sound..
SUR--I love u badima..(geet smild slightly)..badima..jab bade papa ayege ap unke liye pasta mat banana.
achi saza milegi..geet carressd hr hair ..seeing hr ths belief..dev coughd..
DEV--bhavi..apko ek bat batana hai.. London main hamare ek client hai.. bhai ka v bht icha tha ki woh unke sath kam kare..par..(he sighd..)woh ihake bat sun k aneka date postpond krdia..ab waha ek project shuru kia.. ab woh khtm krk kch mahine bad ayenge India me..
GEET--nam kya hai unka,dev..
DEV--Mr.IKSHIT AHUJA..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx who lykd part 10...nw give lyk nd comment here...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

geet always missing maan


thanks for pm
Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Har baar dukh aur b badata jata hai kab geet ki zindagi me khushiya aayegi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet showing every one her strong side
bt chodo
me hate anya mom
n now thois new ch
who is this man
waiting 4 more

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