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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

when r u going to update next??

r u planning to bring a new twist here or r u going to end this and start a new ff???

no dr... would just end this ff
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512

no dr... would just end this ff



and will start a new ff soon haina???? i wont take a no...

when will be the next update????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



and will start a new ff soon haina???? i wont take a no...

when will be the next update????

update may be today ...
new ff no am really not thinking on that line dr...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512

update may be today ...
new ff no am really not thinking on that line dr...



Y????????
R u busy or what that u r not writing a new one??? intehaa was loved by so many and am damn sure all will want to read more from you... pls think over and i really hope u come up with a new ff ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
HW DADI KEW ABJ MAANS LV FR GEET
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



Y????????
R u busy or what that u r not writing a new one??? intehaa was loved by so many and am damn sure all will want to read more from you... pls think over and i really hope u come up with a new ff ...


thanku for the support you guys gave me..
but my studies are gonna start again...
and i would love to devote myself to them...
i would be back again when i would be free again..
but for now i am turning back to a dedicated reader😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
how much more time dear waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 90


Geet bte, did you prepared everything for tomorrow, asked dadima who came to hall where geet was supervising nakul for tomorrow's meal. Ji dadima, I had checked the menu and had invited mom dad as well as meera and other relatives too. ok bte, geet tomorrow we have to get up early to ensure that everything is proper. And ha tell men that murahat (auspicious time) is of 10 am.
Ji dadima, will do that. Geet was about to go into kitchen when dadima interrupted, geet aap please annie ko bi dekh lena, after all bhai dooj h kal. Wo nhi hui to puja kaise hoga. Geet couldn't help but feel pang in her heart but tried to mask her pain with a small smile. Ji dadima, aap tension mat lo, I will ensure everything is fine. Dadima nodded and left to her room, while geet silently wiped the lone tear that made its way.
Geet was in her room setting the sheets when maan came from office. He threw his coat on sofa, while his other hand loosened the tie. Geet gave him a glass of water and helped him loosen his shirt. You freshen up, I will bring your coffee till then. He nodded and went to freshen up.
After a while she came back with his coffee. Maan, kal bhai dooj h so you guys have to stay home till noon. Maan felt the little withdrawal in her voice and knew she is upset. He pulled her to himself, holding her waist. Kya hua jaan, you are sounding low. No maan, am ok, may be kal ki preparations se tired hu. She tried to go away but he did saw the water layer that covered her eyes and a pain gripped his heart.
Geet did someone said something to you, kuch hua kia, tell me. She refused. Maan kuch nhi hua, who will say anything. Aap bekar me tension le rhe ho. Aap rest karo while I will check dinner.
Maan unwillingly let her go as he knew if she had decided to not speak, she won't do that by any way.
At night too, she was quite low. Maan tried to make her talk but didn't succeeded. He knew something was eating her inside but she just wasn't ready to open up. Finally not having any other way, he seduced her till she was covered in the ecstasy of their love making and was moaning till they lasted in each other.
Next day, khurana mansion was beaming in happiness. Whole mansion was decorated with flowers as all close relatives filled the grand hall. Geet wore a deep maroon green saree which complimented her slim figure while maan dressed himself in a white sherwani with studded green stones, matching hers.
Annie dressed in baby pink suit came down n the hall where her brother was sitting waiting for her. As she came down, both brothers happily hugged her and then all moved to temple room of the mansion. There they did some small traditional pooja and annie did the tilak of maan first and then dev praying god to keep her brothers always safe and give them all the happiness of the world.
In return dev gave her a diamond bracelet while maan said his gift is just on the way. Annie agreed and then fed them sweets. In all these happiness, none noticed the sad pair of eyes that were stuck on the door, waiting for someone whom she knew won't be coming. She couldn't help to look at dev maan annie who were busy in themselves, remembering their childhood and laughing remembering the small pranks they pulled at each other.
She immediately moved away her head, when she felt her eyes burning with tears. She would have cried maybe, but just couldn't spoil the festive mood of others. She tried to portray herself to be busy in looking after others, yet a part of her knew she wouldn't be able to control for more and spill the tears that were stinging her eyes.
And that's when she felt someone pulling her hairs from back, just the way he used to do when he would meet her after days. She immediately turned around to hit him when she felt herself freeze on her place seeing armaan instead of him.
Her eyes immediately looked around for his single glance, but stopped when armaan's words fell on her ears… aaj bhi you are missing him. Why didn't you called him then, har saal to you both would talk so much on the day until your phone turns dead, phir is baar kyu nhi.
She immediately looked away and tried to go away, but armaan held her wrist. He called me today, geet immediately stopped, her heart eager to know what he said though her mind refused.
He was missing you, keh rha tha ki he is ready to eveN fall on your legs, bas ek baar maan ja. I had never heard him so broken as I had heard him today. Ek baar maan ja na geet please, geet immediately freed her hand and ran upward, in her room to release the cry that was choking her throat.
As she closed the doors, she cried, cried till she released all the pent up feeling that was bothering her since last few days. Her heart was just asking why, why you broke my trust. Why you played with my feelings. Kyu kyu.
She was still busy in calming herself, when she felt a familiar touch on her shoulder. She knew who it was, but how can he be here, she wondered.
She immediately stood up and looked at him with her red, swollen eyes, while he just stood there bowing his head. She was about to go away, when he spoke, gudia, ek baar please trust me.
No, not anymore. Raj please just go away, I don't want to create more drama. Please raj just go away.
Geet ek baar sun le. I promise I won't repeat that act again. Bas just once forgive me. 2 years hone wale h and I hadn't heard a single word from you. Last year bhi I tried to come but army walo ne ek mission pe bhej dia tha. This year you don't even know how much request I had to do. Please gudia, I promise, even I had asked forgiveness from maan too and he had forgiven me, bas ab tu bhi maf karde.
She turned to him holding his collar, what did you said, maan ne maaf kar dia. Ha he must would have did that but how can you expect me to do the same. Raj I agree you were worried for me. This sudden marriage news had made you crazy but what you did wasn't a sensible person like you would have done. You played with his feeling, and not an easy game, you just made a laughing stock of his feeling. Wo agar kuch kehte nhi iska matlab yeh nhi ki mai samajti nhi.
You didn't even knew how many nights he just stayed awake thinking about all that. How many times he had skipped his dinner because his mind was not in peace. Agar koi aur unke jagah hota na to shayad muje chodkar kab ka chala gya hota. This marriage had only given him pain. Pehle it was me who used to play and then when I realized my mistake, yu came to play with him.
Raj am really sorry but I don't know how to get it all back to normal. I can forgive you knowing it was for my wellbeing, but I am worried ki wo baat unke jehen me hamesha rhegi… and I don't want him to accept our friendship our relation, just because of me.
She immediately stood up and moved to open the door but stopped when she saw maan standing there, with his hand folded on his chest. Geet looked at his firm face and tried to gauge something from his expression but he didn't gave anything away.
With firm strides, he walked toward her and held her by shoulder. Geet what do you think ha. Would I be happy to see you sad. I gave you enough time to solve the issue but tum dono to age hi nhi badte. Geet I was angry with him but we solved that issue. The main reason was you were angry and that's why I had asked him to solve the issue without me interfering. But aise kab tak chalega.

Agreed he was at fault, but it was you who gave him my description like a dusht danav. You said you were unhappy and that was the reason he did his best to satisfy himself. I don't want you guys to just fight anymore. And be assured I don't have any problem with your friendship. My trust on you is strong enough to not be broken this easily.
Geet hugged him tightly and started crying like a baby in maan's arm while he kept patting her back to calm her. Seeing her tears flowing uncontrollably, he signaled raj to come who took her from maan and hugged her wiping her tears.
Girlfriend please ab to rona band karo. Dekho muharat khatm hone wala h and still you didn't did tika to me (those who wondered why she is doing tika to him, well you guys forgot she treated him like her elder brother). she immediately straightened herself and looked at the clock, which stated only 15 minutes left. She immediately rushed to pooja room while both men followed her with a small smile.
All were excited to see raj after a long time. Even shyna came dressed in a decent suit. geet did tika to raj and asked for her gift. He handed her a scrap book which had some of their childhood pics decorated nicely and a sweet line written below each pic.
She thanked him but was uncomfortable with shyna. She immediately searched for maan who was actually standing beside her signaling her to hug shyna too. she looked at him for long minute to ensure he was really happy and when she was assured that he didn't have any problem, she hugged shyna too who pleaded sorry for her acts too.
Geet finally let go of everything and was happy with the way things turned out. All were waiting for maan's gift which still hadn't arrived. But all got a sweet shock when they saw arjun with his whole family.
Then maan explained ki both families are soon gonna be one as arjun had wished to marry annie after their exams and his parents had agreed too for the alliance. Even the seniors khurana had met too with arjun and had given a positive response for the alliance.
Annie had tears, and thanked maan and geet too knowing she must have convinced him. Maan hugged her tightly happy for his sister.
It was night and maaneet were in their room. Geet was standing in front of mirror trying to remove her earing which was not willing to come out. She again tried but failed. She was still fiddling with her earing when she felt his expert finger touching her ear.
She looked at him through the mirror while he was focusing on her ear. After a little effort, he swiftly pulled that damn earing and kissed the smooth skin behind her ear.
Maan, she moaned, as she felt his hand going to her bare waist below the saree and caressing the bare skin sensually. She let her body fell on his, while he smoothly held her, his mouth busy on her neck.
Maan, thankyou for today, she whispered when she gained her sense.
Kyu, kya hua jaan… what did I do. He said still busy on neck relishing the texture of her skin.
Maan, thankyou for coming in my life, I sometimes wonder what I would have done if I hadn't met you, she whispered as she felt him nipping her collarbone.
Geet you know what, today I got a call from dr. singh and he said your all reports are normal, he said totally changing the topic as he turned her around facing her.
She looked at him excited, with the news.
And you know what I was wondering that I should start shopping my daughter as she is soon going to be with me, he said with a smug smile as he lifted her and threw on the bed, covering her body with his.
no it would be my beta, samje, she retorted but her words were died as his mouths covered hers peeling off her clothes looking for a long night ahead.
Precap: elilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
just loved it...
u r goin 2 end this😭
will miss it a lot...
Edited by lg001 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update.

finally geet forgave raj.
naughty maan😉
ur are ending this 😭
will miss it badly😭
but promise that you will start a new stroy.
plz plz
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago

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