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would be waiting dear 😉
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i read all updates at one go...i really liked this FF...
and waiting for next update...
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

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hehhe ..Sona mujhe kill karogi toh next part kon dega 😛

yeh hi soch ker tujhay zinda chodna para😆
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

yeh hi soch ker tujhay zinda chodna para😆

hi sona 🤗


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Thank you so much for all lovely comments 😊


Part 8


"Where is she?'' the three words rung in Maan's mind after seeing Geet not in her room. He rushed to reception, shouted on whoever person was presented there behind the desk and came to know about all incidents within few minutes. His mind had become heated enough to be burst out any moment with the shock and tension he had got after knowing everything. For a minute he could not understand what step he should take first. Either he should go and see that bas***d Manager or should he go for himself in search of her. And finally he went for the last option as Geet safety was the most crucial task to do at the moment. He took his car and started it, he was not sure where to go. He looked around, for any possible place could be found for her! But it was tough to decide which direction he should have taken.



"Did she know anyone here? '' he asked to himself. "I dont know!!!'' he himself had answered. "Damn!!!'' I dont know anything about her!!.. where to go... kaha dhundhu usse'' he closed his eyes in depression, calmed his mind to take any decision at least as he had no much time even. It was past afternoon and soon will be evening and then dark. " And if I dont find her in few hours where will she go?''


"Ohh!! what the need of you to came out from room Geet.. why the hell!!!'' he bang on the staring wheel with force. "calm down Maan. first start to find her!!!' he made himself understand and drove off in random direction.


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Meanwhile, Geet was lost in her thought. She was ashamed on her , was feeling so aversion, hated for her own self. She was siting on a lonely, aloof bench like lifeless for hours, had been recalling the entire incidents of past two days, had happened with her. How she was happy in her Haveli with little life she had . Though she had not much accompanies to live with her yet she had the securest shadow of her mother, who was enough itself for her to be protective from any bad occurrence. She had the support of walls around her together with a roof where she had no tension of anything but here she had tension of where to hide her existence which had become the exhibition for this open society. She sensed some eyes on her. Her semi-conscious mind became alert. Watched around where she was. She was not secure. Her mind screamed, shook her inward to bring her back in sense. Geet at last heard her mind. She straightened herself. Self-talked...



"Geet what are you doing? Instead of searching Maan, trying to contact him you're sitting here!! Alone? Wsae bhi whatever happened there was no fault of him in this all. Haina!! it was all your mistake that you had forgotten the keys. Isme unki kya galti?? Unhone toh tujhe kaha tha na room me rahne ko. But stupid you! Why did you come out??? Now also he must have been looking for me I know. I should call him. Haan.. ye thik hoga!!'' she stood up and started searching the note and then she remembered Manager had not given it back to her. She sunk down in worry again. She looked her fist. She had money which she had took with her when had gone to have roadside food. A little hope came back in her heart. "Geet tu ghabra mat'' she made her self understand. She looked around. Many people were sitting, chatting, spending their time there. She went to a group and asked about Maan. People did not understand as there could be many Maan-s. Geet tried to remember what manager had said, his full name was "Haan! Its Maan Singh Khurana. Aap jaante hai unko? He is very famous businessman. Mujhe unke ghar jana hai '' she spoke as much as she knew. She had decided to go his Mansion and meet there itself. "Dont know office me honge ya nahi. That man on phone had said Maan was not there. So I should go Mansion and wait for him. Mai gate ke bahar unka intzaar kar lungi'' So She asked for Khurana Mansion address.



Of course people had known him. They told her address. Geet almost jumped in joy, controlled her happiness she came out from there and took auto. Auto-driver left her on entrance of Mansion where she had stood, started waiting for Maan, to come.


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It had been evening when Maan could not find Geet. His all patience broke down if would have left any and now he was mad on that manager. He turned back car toward hotel. With long and fast footsteps he entered inside together with the dark red shade of anger and burning eyes on face. His look was rigid and mind had die-enough agitation. He barked in manager cabin and fist of his hand had become more firm when he saw, Manager was blithely talking on phone about Geet and the incident that had changed the mental condition of Maan ruthlessly.


"Where is Geet!!!'' Maan yelled, clutched manager collar, making him jumped in shock...


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Geet was standing outside of Mansion, some far from entrance from hours, waiting for Maan. A few times, she thought to go inside , meet Dadi but how could she!! Maan had said very clearly, Dadi was not doing well. It could have risk. She was not sure what to do. Meanwhile, Dadi watched a girl, stood outside of Mansion since hours. A few times she had ignored but it had became darker. Finally, she decided to call the stranger girl, inside. Guard went to inform Geet. She got shocked. " No.. I'm okay here'' she denied but he did not move back as it was Savitri Devi order. Finally Geet had to go inside with guard and she with trembling heart, kept her first step on the door of Khurana Mansion...






Precap :"Namaste Dadima'' Geet touched Dadi feet

"Who are you?'' Dadi asked

"Ji mai..woh.. ''

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"Your husband left you here? alone!!'' Dadima shocked



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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hey mona lovly prt yaar,maan s rstles gud going nd yeh geet seedha sasural pohunch gayee,eger 2 see maans reactionaftr seeing hr at km

again me ist😳 🥳
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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omg she reached the mansion
and dadi is meeting geet
lets ssee wat happens nw
and maan is so angry god only can helped dat manager nw
do update soon

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