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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

tumne pukara aur ham chale aaye😆

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Thank you so much for all lovely comments 😊

LILY111144 , singh24 Muahhh daarlingsss spam ki baarish karne ke liye 😛😆


Part 7


She was back in hotel. She took lift and it dropped her to her floor. She pushed the room door but, it did not open. She twisted knob , tried to move more forcefully, again she failed to even give it move a bit. She got scared. Looked left and right to ask for any help. She found a waiter. "Bhaiyaji.. jara suniye!!'' she rushed to him and he, came to her. "bhaiya ji.. it got stuck, please open karjijiye na!!'' \



waiter asked for key, she had not. She looked him with frown and then got to know what blunder she had done. "Madam you should talk to Manager. He must have spare key of this room with him''



"Wo kaha milenge?''



"From reception you can ask for him Madam''



Geet nodded and rushed to couch area where she asked the reception- girl for Manager. She also told her what her problem was having. Girl asked room number which Geet did not know. "Mai dekh kar aati hu'' she again went to see the room number and then told back to girl. Girl checked in register. "What's your name Madam?''



"Geet''



"but for this name we have no any booking M'aam!''



"No , actually my hu-- husband is with me. He would have booked on his name''



"Okay, His name?''



"Maan!'' Geet felt butterflies in stomach speaking his name



"No M'aam we have no booking for this name also'' Girl said disappointing.



"Aap thik se dekho na.. hoga unka naam!!'' Geet was being very impatience, started becoming very nervous.



"No M'aam we dont have''

Hearing their loud talk manager appeared. "What happened?'' The girl described everything. "Whats your husband full name Madam?'' Manager asked. Geet tried to remember but it was not possible as she didnt even know it. Seeing her quite manger started doubting on her. He checked and found it was signed as Mr. & Mrs Khurama.



"Ma'am you said you are married and not even know your husband full name? Ye kase ho sakta hai!!' Geet had no answer. "Do you have his any contact number or his address or anything, where does he work?'' Geet had again no answer. She was sinking deep down in tension. Manager was now sure, something was not good, about her. He was again going to inquire further Geet remembered, she had Maan number which was in room. Her face lightened little. "I have his number!!'' she said hurriedly. "Wo room me hai!!'' She looked around in anticipation, anyone could help her. "Really!! And you think we will believe you !!''



"Please.. I'm not saying lie.. I have his number !! '' she was verge of cry but controlled. "Ek baar mujhe room me jaane dijiye!!''



Looking her making pleads Manager melted, agreed. Sent her with a waiter and she brought the note , Maan had left for her. She gave it to Manager. He called.



"Hello.. is this Mr.Khurana's number?'' Manager spoke

"Yes.. it is.. but he is in meeting right now . Cant talk to you'' Adi, Maan's assistant attended his call.

"I'm calling from xyz hotel. Mr. khurana's wife wants to talk to him''



"What!!!! what you said. Maan sir wife?? Adi shocked. "Are you gone mad!!! Do you even know whom you're talking about. Agar Maan Singh Khurana ko pata chala na toh wo aapki hotel band karwa denge'' He hung up in anger ..



Manager shocked, "Was it Maan Singh Khurana number??'' he thought. He looked Geet who was staring him with her all hope. The hope which she was holding , clutching near her heart with anticipations, dropped down, broke in parts when he, gave her the most hateful, unpleasant look to her.



"So Who was with you Madam!!'' Manager spoke with taunt in eyes.



"Maan.. '' Geet spoke in perplexity.



"Oh!! So you mean The Maan Singh Khurana.. he is your husband!!!'' he started laughing. More people gave their cheap giggles, accompanied to him. Geet looked him then around, not knowing what happened to all. "Kya hua ??'' she spoke feeling awkward.



"You even know whose name you're taking?? Maan Singh Khurana.. The owner of Khurana Constructions. The great businessman of not only in this country but a very known person out of here too. And you are saying he is your husband!!!!

Geet shocked to know more about Maan. He is that rich she had not guessed. "Now I think Girl you, should get out from here !!!'' Manager gave her meanest look he had. "Do you really think we are that fool not to understand that you are telling the biggest lie that you're Mr. Maan Khurana's wife!!! You know he is that famous, if he ever suffers from a little headache , the whole country would have known within just a small span of time and here you're saying he had got married with you and no body even got a hint of it!!!''



Geet felt deep, sword like cuts in her body. It gave the extreme pain internal which she had never knew, had existed in this emotion world. She was breaking down, diminishing, wearing out. Not understanding what to do, what to say. She had no escape, no rescue, no save. She had been trapped with thousands questions which had been left, unanswered.



"You're still here!!'' manager spoke seeing her stood unmoved. Geet startled, looked around with wet redness in her eyes. In no sense she started leaving hotel and finally left. She was on road, looking both sides, around, everywhere. Where she was, she had no idea. She went in same park across road, sat on a aloof bench with her shattered, shredded life. Manager words, everyone's laugh were resounding in her ears. She felt pity on herself. She felt why could not she leave her weighty, unworthy life. She went lost in her uncanny thoughts..

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Maan came out from meeting room. Adi handed over his phone. Maan checked his missed calls and found an unknown number which was received. He asked Adi and he told everything. "What!!! '' Maan stood up from chair in a spark, rushed out, drove his car as fast as he could. Reached hotel in little time. He went his room found it empty. He knew.. something was wrong.. in fact very very wrong had passed off, but the certainty he did not want to guess anymore. It would be unpleasant to even suppose anything bad happened to Geet..





Precap : "Geet where are you !!! '' Maan was becoming mad!!!

*

"Namaste Dadima'' Geet touched Dadi feet

"Who are you?'' Dadi asked



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i sandwichd ur updt😳
poor geet no one blives hr as mrs MSK,are use khud nehi pta,ab agar maan manager ki band bjai to maja aa jai,precap intrstng .mona u r welcm sweety😊a big🤗 4 u
me ist👏🥳🥳🥳
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovu awesome update...awww poor geet fass gaye naa...n wo kamina manager kitna rude hai kaise nikal diya geet ko 😡...tu toh gaya manager🤢...bechari geet ab kaha jayegi awww uss park ki bench mein hi 😔...aur wo manager v kitna ajib hai tuje toh pata hai naa jab maan ne room book kar waya tha toh fir etna kya puchna hai...😲...hmmm interesting precap...geet meet dadi ma...😃
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic dear
i guessed from starting 2/3 parts that this ff is going tooo good
but 1 complain is
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Geet.. Geet & Dadi met..but how??Nice update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

fantastic dear

i guessed from starting 2/3 parts that this ff is going tooo good
but 1 complain is
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...it is too small


Haillaaa small kaha 😲

puure 1100 words hai 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Latka diya...
Essa bhi koi karta hei...
Im so sad for my angel...
Manager to gaya...Maan usse nahi chodega...
precap...??? Geet Dadima ke pass...!!!



Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites


Haillaaa small kaha 😲

puure 1100 words hai 😆

😆haa per itanaa intersted hai kii small hii lagaa naa😉😉

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