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Posted: 12 years ago
Giving 😊 just 5 minutes 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Giving😊just 5 minutes😃



How much time dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you so much for all lovely comments 😊


Part 6


Maan step paused on the very step he was. He turned to Geet. She had waken up, was sitting on bed with curious expression which had confusion & fear in equality. Silence overboard. "Aap kaha jaa rahe hai'' '



Maan came near her. When she was expecting him to come nearer, he turned, went and stood before open window. The sky had millions starts, watching him only with the wait, Geet had. "Geet.. wo ' mujhe jana hoga, dadima is waiting for me'' he had calm in his words



"Aur mai...''



Maan observed her. Her two words had million questions where Maan had no answer of any of one. He stared her eyes. It was shrunk, had rucks. He came near , knelled down beside her, giving some distance between them.

"Geet I dont want to hide you anything'' Maan spoke staring her. " I could not talk to Dadi. She was not in the condition to hear anything about this incident. And so I cant take you home with me. You have to stay here until I talk to dadi and she accepts you'' he waited for her response but it didnt come. Geet heart broke. She sunk in deep. The fear she had to be left alone, was fronting her at the moment. Maan expected her to cry but she didnt. He could see the reflection of millions pieces of her broken dreams inward her eyes but he did not see, that every piece was counting its last breath and was waiting for a miracle, to be alive again. "Geet kuch bologi nahi''



Geet composed herself. She had known , now she should not have expectation from him. It was her bitter fate and she would not let it do any affect to others. She tried to smile. "Koi baat nahi, aap jaaiye"



Maan did not expect this. "But Geet you!!.. I mean can you stay here alone, till I come?''



"Ji .. you dont worry, I will manage. I used to been alone sometime in Hoshiyaarpur. Aap chinta mat kijiye. Your Dadima will be waiting for you'' She tried to be normal which was although very difficult for her. She had never been alone in her Haveli as always, she had her mother around her. But she could not show her fear or insecurities to a man, who did not know her, or where, she had very less chances left to be accepted by him, his family. Maan had no option but to agree.



"Geet this is my phone number. You can call whenever you need anything and dont worry, I'll be back tomorrow morning'' he smiled, gave her assurance. She nodded, with the same certainty, he had given her. Maan left...

##

Now she was left alone, completely alone. It was scary. She never had been alone leaving her house. It was first time she was not in her family. This big city, this massive crowds were very creepy for her. She looked the note. "Maan'' she read. "Oh-- his name is Maan'' unknowingly small whisper of his name gave her little peace. She felt secure a bit. "Geet, why are you scared haan! He had said na tomorrow he'll come back. Bas ek raat ki baat hai. Aur yaad hai what Maa had been said .. you should have believe on Babaji. When you feel alone or fear, just remember him, he will keep everything okay and fine. Hai na!!'' She closed her eyes and started praying. After long wait, she slipped in deep sleep...

##

Khurana Mansion,

Maan was in his room after chatting with Dadi and Dev. They could see, Maan was little disturbed but they thought may be due to long journey he was tired. "Maan beta aap aaraam kijiye'' Dadi said and send him to sleep. So he was laying on bed facing, staring ceiling with semi-conscious mind. Whole day event was circling around his mind. How everything happened with a spark speed. His life had been changed with a incident which he could never have imagined. It was all odd, unexpected, so sudden. First time in his life he had no control over the most important episode of his life. "was all real'?' his mind questioned. "If yes, then how it happened? Was she real?Was that girl, in real she is my wife? .. Geet' .. sweet name'' he smiled then it vanished. "Maan, how could you accept her your wife. You dont know who is she.. what is she!!'' ' "What are you thinking Maan!! of course she is girl.. dont you know!!'' ' "Ohh yea I know she is girl but what is she doing in my life? How it all would be alright? I dont know Dadi and Dev will accept her here or not and if they dont... Where would she go!!!''



He remembered her fearful face when her brother threatened them. He remembered her terrifying expectation when, He, kept knife on her neck. He pressed his lashes.. "Maan how could you do that. You remembered how scared she was!!! Ohh will she be okay?? '' a worry crossed his mind. He stood up. He looked time. It was passed midnight. He observed the darkness of night. It was thick. "She is alone there. Must be scaring. I should check her once!!'' He changed his cloth and rushed to out. The hotel was not so far. He drove fast and in few minutes he was in hotel, inside her room. He looked, her sleeping silently. Her breath was calm. She was shivering with cold. He picked up AC remote and did it some warm. The blanket, was hanging down from bed, he kept on her, slowly. For his saw, she had some dried tears on her cheek, which seemed had fallen down from her closed eyes when she was in sleep. Maan raised his hand to wipe it. He was feeling a ting of pain inside his heart. His hand, his index finger pressed little on the soft skin of her cheek when she stirred. He moved back along with his lifted hand. With a sudden move his leg collides with table behind but he balanced himself. "Aaram se Maan!!'' he mentally shouts to him and took his seat on side couch. He was facing her. He was staring her and he dripped, into deep sleep..

##

With the first ray of sun Geet witnessed her dearest dream Maan, which had become true. She could not believe Maan was there. Yes indeed he had promised her to be there in morning but this early, she did not expect. A smile crept on her lips. She jointed her hands and prayed to Babaji. The sound of her bangles broke his sleep. He stirred, moved left and right his aching neck with closed eyes. The couch was not so comfy for his tall body. It was really, very bad experience to sleep there, he thought. His odd facial expression made her giggle softly, she stopped when Maan drowsy gaze fell on her. She looked down.



"Wo .. did you sleep well ??'' Maan spoke sitting up straightly. He found this situation very odd. It was first, he was with a girl in same room and that too, spent whole night. Geet nodded. "Hm!!'' Maan spoke. He saw struggling her in her Lahanga. "You didnt change?'' he asked then realized, she had nothing with her to change. "I'm sorry. Mai abhi aata hu'' he said and left and come back with a packet in his hand. Handed over her and said her to change her dress. "Isme kuch kapre hai..''



Geet looked him, he to her and in middle the packet was hanging, between both hands. The second passed. "Ahem.. Geet!!'' it was Maan who came back in sense first. Geet startled and moved back. Packet dropped down on floor. She bend down and picked it up. Intentionally in slow motion as she had to control her racing heartbeats. Maan was watching her every act, somewhere liked it. She stood up. Maan was expecting her to go and change but she, was not moving anymore. "What happened!!''



"aap yahi rahenge??'' she spoke slowly. Maan did not understand what she meant. Then he guessed may be she was hesitating due to him being there, like he was feeling odd with her. He walked to balcony giving her the privacy she needed. She went in washroom and got fresh. After about twenty minutes she came out wearing the dress, he had brought. He was on call when turned and could not move further. It was like he had got the punishment of being statue till someone gives permission to turn out. He was spell-bounded with her.



"Hello!!! Maan sir.. are you there???'' The sound came out from phone..



"huh..haan..wo Adi.. I call you later .. And yes I will be there in a hour for meeting..don't worry!!'' he hung up. Geet realized his presence and heard his going again talk, she stared him. Maan came back inside. He ordered breakfast. They did it silently with the rising heat they were feeling inside their respective hearts. "Geet I have to leave for meeting. Will be back in evening and tonight will try to talk, if not to dadima then at least with Dev.. Wo mera chota bhai!!! Perhaps he could help us" "Ji'' she could say. Maan was leaving. He thought for something and came to her. Gave her some money. Geet was not sure why then he said "Geet you might need something in my absence. Keep it!'' She took hesitating. Maan left for office..

##

Geet was feeling bore. She was looking out from window when saw a park. Some children were playing there and then a Golgappa stall near it. She eager-ed to taste it and was really needed to walk in fresh air, in open as well. After thinking for a little she decided to get a chance to complete her curiosity. She came out opening door and then shut it, without know it was an automatic door which could have been opened from Key only and she, forgot to take it...


Precap : "Who is with you Madam?''

"Woh..Maan''

"You mean The Maan Singh Khurana!!!'' All started laughing...



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update

Maan getting restless n came back to Geet at midni8 was awesome scene

Opps now Geet forgot to take key wid her n hotel staff are laughing at her, please Maan come n save Geet
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

sooo sorry lovu tu janti hai meri net ki halat ...etna late comment de rahi hu...any way awesome update tha n don't know why I found it sooo romantic...har chotti chotti chiz pe romantic like maan ko geet ke liye sochna ...apni cell num deke jana ...money dena sooo caring...hayeee 😳😳...aur toh aur raat mein aake room me so v gaya😳😳...lovely update lovuuu...

Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part

loved the way maan came back at midnite...

beautiful
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Posted: 12 years ago



wonderful part...

Maan came back to see whether Geet is alright...

Geet went out shutting the door...

people will laugh on her when they will come to know that she is telling about Maan...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
waiting for maan to geet to save her from people laughing at her
maan started caring for geet even he has a forced marriage ,is simply mindblowing
love this part
thank u
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg dat was so cute
and everyone making fun of geet
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome,amazing part,
loved it
maan is feeling something, her pain, affect him badly
he was with dadi ma and dev but his soul or heart r with geet
maan back to geet as he was worried
geet felt secure with his name and his presence make her feel better
but maan had to go for her work
now what will happen feeling scared for geet
continue soon

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