maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 65

Originally posted by: angelic_princes

Hey nishu di me back
solly for late comment di 😔😳
poem for the escort business is awesome and saddy saddy..
bt i loved it..geet chah ke bhi maan ke pas nai aa sakti..aisa kya hai uske past 😕
again not read the story 😳
and iss poem ne mujhe bahut curious kar diya hai wats wid maan and geet past..and i wil surely read d ff after my examz 😛

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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thax for comment choti

its story about an escort and a divorcee😉

Maan is an escort 😲???

Originally posted by: angelic_princes

Poem for kashmakash:
omg di lovely...😊
di i am in love with dis poem..i m really into the ff kashmakash and this poem is so so beautiful
di aap plz geet ka POV Likho na kashmakash ka pleej pleej..i really want to read it in ur words *making puppy face*
pleej

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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dear wwhat you wwant

is on first page of this thread

my first poem is geet monologue(for kashmalash ff)

if you still want on more

thn tell

Di i have read that
i want more on the current phase 😳

Originally posted by: angelic_princes

Di i have read that
i want more on the current phase 😳

more on the way

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

more on the way

kahan gayab ho jate ho aap??
kabhi kabhi 😳

me here dear.but my net did hide abd seek from few days.so even not able tp pm for new poem

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hello dear

me back with few lines😆😆😆

don't know,how bad they are

as my net is doing hide ad seek with me

so write it ,without further reading

maan and geet

with their view and problems

mai ek sukhi patti

tu ek surakh gulaab

hum dono ka ek hona

jo na pura ho sake,hai woh ek khawaab

tu nahi hai sukhi patti

tu hai ek gahari chaav,jiske nicche do zindagi

falaa rahi hai,apne paav

aur agar

hu mai gulaab ,to jaan le

mere paas bhi hai ,kaate be hisaab

nahi de sakti mai tujhe mera saath

thak chuki hu mai ab itna

ke nahi kar sakti,thamne ke liya khushiyaan

aage apna haath

ateet se hum chup nahi sakte

jo beet gayi hum pe,usse hum muker nahi sakte

jo hona tha woh ho gaya,maanta hu

issme hum dono ka kuch hissa kho gaya

chahe kuch bhi karle ussko to hum badal nahi sakte

janti hu mein ,ku chahiye tujhe mera saath

hai mere paas tera kuch aisa

jo lauta dega waapis khusiyaan tere haath

par tu kyu nahi dekh sakta

un khushiyoon mai bhi hogi mere beete kal ki parchaaiyan

jo degi har pal tujhe mere saath na chalne ki duhaaiya

jo pal kal aayega

woh na tune dekha hai na mene

saath woh kya laayega

yeh na tu jaanti hai na mein

isliye

haamare liye jo pal hai

woh bas yahi ek pal hai

jo beet gaya woh bhi ik kal hai

aur jo aayega woh bhi ik kal hai

aur woh kya laayega,yeh soch kar is pal ko na jeena

jo aisa karre ,woh insaan toh mein nahi na

ok

me done with my thoughts

please forgive me for my spelling mistake.

me waiting for your reply

wow

Originally posted by: jssood

and poem no 13 is too good

thanx dear for your comment. hey did you resd all poem from start.me waiting for your reply