maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 61

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

POEM NO :1

this is the poem
i write for muskaan's new ff
like to share

i knew
me gone mad

kya kya likhne lahi hu
to much emotional
what to do
yeh din hi aise hai
you understand na
hi hi hiii

na hum bewafa the
na tum bewafa the
kasoor tha to,bas tha uss faasale ka
jo pahle pal se hi
hum dono ke darmiyaan the


tum ne kabhi kuch bhi to mujh se kaha nahi
aur agar kabhi kuch kaha hoga toh
un faasalo ke kaaran maine kabhi kuch bhi sunna nahi
aur kua sunti,
kyu sunti,
mai uss kahi gayi baat ko
kyoki jab maine huch sun na chaaha aapse
tab to kabhi ,aap ne kuch kaha nahi

aur ab
jab aap ne kaha ki
hum aapke hai
jism se rooh tak
din se raat tak
dil ki aakhiri saas tak
dhadkan ki aakhri aawaz tak

to mai chah kar bhi ,sun na saki
saare sapne dobaara dekhu
aisi himmat,khud mai bun na saki
ab
yeh sab jaan kar
teri har baat maan kar
ek ajeeb si kashmakash mai phas gayi hu ki


na tum bewafaa the
na hum bewafaa the
kasoor tha to tha
bas uss faasale ka
jo hameesha se,hum dono ke darmiyyan the


nice very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey shruti

you got time
itni jaldi

thanxxx alot dear
waiting for your comment on other poems
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Posted: 12 years ago
ke yahi hai woh ik phool , jo hoga mujhe mere daaman mein qubool
Agar woh daman wala phool hai toh yeh kya hai,
Maan with a phool in his kaan😆
Waiting for you to complete the whole poem before commenting.
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆 back to rona dona
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poem 14 for Kashmakash
Kuch kahe bina bhi itna saari baatein ho sakti hain yeh aaj tumahri kavita se pata chala.
Aankho se baatein, ka kya matlab hain yeh aaj pata chala.
The poem gave me goosebumps though😳
Haye aisa bhi pyaar hota hai kya yeh sochte reh gayi.
Kuch kaha nahi par phir bhi pyaar ka sara junoon bayan kar diya.
One more winner from your side.👏
Yaar tum yeh sab likhti kaise ho?
You are a real romantic at heart janeman😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

ke yahi hai woh ik phool , jo hoga mujhe mere daaman mein qubool
Agar woh daman wala phool hai toh yeh kya hai,
Maan with a phool in his kaan😆
Waiting for you to complete the whole poem before commenting.


me like🤢 dear
pom complete kaise karu

as i knew
which thoughts have to come next

but noe line sink ho hi nahi rahi
its really bad idea to stop poem in between

seems like update second time read karna hoga
like doing it first time😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

ke yahi hai woh ik phool , jo hoga mujhe mere daaman mein qubool
Agar woh daman wala phool hai toh yeh kya hai,
Maan with a phool in his kaan😆
Waiting for you to complete the whole poem before commenting.


waise yeh look is ff ke maan ko suit nahi karti😉😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

😆 back to rona dona


what to do😡😡😡

when you come after ages and do🥱🥱🥱 comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Poem 14 for Kashmakash

Kuch kahe bina bhi itna saari baatein ho sakti hain yeh aaj tumahri kavita se pata chala.
Aankho se baatein, ka kya matlab hain yeh aaj pata chala.
The poem gave me goosebumps though😳
Haye aisa bhi pyaar hota hai kya yeh sochte reh gayi.
Kuch kaha nahi par phir bhi pyaar ka sara junoon bayan kar diya.
One more winner from your side.👏
Yaar tum yeh sab likhti kaise ho?
You are a real romantic at heart janeman😉

thaxxx alot dear
for your checking😆😆

and me romantic
ask my husband
he will be like😕

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