Is first love last love? Epillogue - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting prologue...A love triangle in the making???
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
luv triangle...luv da prolog can't wait to
read more undate soon...bt plz dont make it
too painful for maaneet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm...congrats on another SS! Awesum CS n prologue! Hope Dev n Geet nt in love! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
sounds interestin love triangle. looking forward for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
congrats...

prologue and CS
nice...
so Maan loves Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Is first love last love? Part 1
I thank Ratna for making this wonderful banner.

Dev,Geet and Maan were at their colleague Natasha's wedding place.

Dev started singing...

Peeche peeche aanda
Meri chal ve nai aai
Kaaliya da ekda aayiwe
Mera laung dawacha
Nigah maarda aayiwe
Mera laung dawacha

Peeche peeche aanda
Meri chal ve nai aai
Peeche peeche aanda
Meri chal ve nai aai
Kaaliya da ekda aayiwe
Mera laung dawacha
Nigah maarda aayiwe
Mera laung dawacha

Dawacha..

Dawacha..

Dawacha..

Dawacha..(Ready).

Geet who was in a fun mood could not control herself.She started shaking her legs.

She danced around Dev.Maan was fuming with jealousy.

He thought:This Dev is dan good at singing.That's why Geet is crazy about him.Unfortunately I don't possess the tool which he possesses...singing talent.But I cannot accept defeat that easily.I can dance.I will dance to impress Geet.

Maan started dancing.Geet was surprised.Maan moved towards Geet intelligently by shaking legs.Geet smiled at him.For Maan her dimpled smile for him was priceless.He was very excited.

But Dev's song pulled her back which led Maan angry again.

After the music-dance session,while everybody was busy Maan grabbed her hand and dragged her to a vacant room.Geet was shocked.

G:Maan...what are you doing?

Maan held her shoulders tight in a rough manner and stared at her:I am doing what i feel like doing.


He removed his hands from her.

G:Are you crazy?

M:You are crazy.That's why you are encouraging Dev to flirt with you.

Geet got irritated:How did I encourage Dev to flirt with me?

M:By over rating him...admiring him as a singer...

G:Did I do any mistake by adiring him as a singer?I don't think so.Because he is a fantastic singer.That means he is not over rated.And don't try to underestimate him.He is my best friend.

Maan got irritated:Ohhh!I am fed up of hearing good things about Dev.Why don't you say at least one good thing about me?I danced well.Right?Or you don't want to give me a compliment as I am not famous like Dev?If I take dance as a pofession I can be more famous than Dev.

Geet smirked.

G:By the way...why do you get angry when I praise Dev?Is it not jealousy?

Maan felt embarrassed as he was caught red handed.

M:Jealousy?Me jealous of Dev?Never!

G:Don't hide it Maan.I know that you are jealous when I talk good about Dev...when i dance with him.
Maan did not know what to say due to embarrassment.
Geet lowered her voice and asked him in a cute manner:Is it because you love me and you hate to see me with someone else?

Maan was shocked by her unexpected question.
Maan stammered:Geet...
Geet smiled:Tell me Maan...tell me what is inside your mind.Otherwise I won't talk to you.
Geet pretended to be angry and tried to walk away.Suddenly Maan caught her hand.She smiled.Slowly she turned back and looked at his face with a smile.Maan smiled.
M:You are right.I can't tolerate you getting close to anyone else.
Geet smiled:Why?
M:Because I love you.
She blushed:Me too Maan.I love you too.
Maan could'nt believe the magical words she uttered.
They both looked at each other's eyes deeply.Their heart was beating fast...
Mahi...mahiii...
Suddenly they heard a voice.
"Geet!"
G:My God!Dadima is calling me.What if she finds me with you here?

M:What is the problem?
G:You fool...she will think that we are doing some mistake.That's why we chose this vacant room.
Suddenly Maan pulled her towards him.
M:A sweet mistake...
Geet blushed and ran away removing his hands from her.He smiled.
Geet ran towards her grand mother Indira.
I:Where were you Geet?It's time for Natasha's departure.
G:Sorry dadima.I was...I had sweets.Right?So I went to wash my hands.

I:Ok...
Geet was relieved.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome, nice start
loved it
loved maaneet confession
it's amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
lovely!!!
waiting for the story to unfold!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
nice update. simply love it.. it 's a gr8 update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
hi
the up is good
so geet is dancing with dev and this is cant be taken by mann he felt jealous he took geet and asked her why she always praise dev geet who can see his jeolous his anger thorugh his words asked him whther he loves her
mann who cant hide it anymore confess his love to her
geet too says that she loves him too
plz cont soon andpm me

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