Touched'thrd1 Pg1 (Finished)

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Just read the second chp. It was very well written. The way you had written about the emotions they were feeling after their proximity was amazing,very well written. So they're married! That came as a pleasant surprise. Looking forward to the next chp.Update soon😊

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esheena

@esheena

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

awesome update di loved it totally

now waiting 4r next part😊

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

Thud Thud...what an awesome FF...mazaa aa gaya padh ke...

pls jaldi update karo...me waiting waiting..:(

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singh24

@singh24

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Blushing Queen 😛😛😛

Kahan ho???

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ana56

@ana56

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

amazing update dear

but y GF is closing?

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Faiza

@DreamyPrincess1

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Chap.2 Predicaments means dilemma as u said to me TOO PERFECT & mesmerizing

Ur description Stole my ❤️

Maan's mind war is amazing like he can bear any thing from her now if its will be anger, blame or accusation after watching what he never saw in past one month...

Hush.. Good to know that they are married couple in Dandenong as their Childhood in Melbourne..

must say u ork hard for this... who ever help u or by ur self .. THUMBS UP 👍🏼

Finally Aniee portray places there in ur FFs...

EXACTLY WHAT I want to see in this Story...

Aniee u know I JUST LOVE IT!!! ❤️

then His thoughts & that too desirous.. Naughty Maan's thoughts is too naughty after see her like red & her view as checking out her... hmmm 😆 😉

& see Geet, TOUCHED by him she become jelly... 1st impact on her... 😆 😳

& Impact main she become deaf also as He said something & she heard like he is asking her to lift her up... GOD!!! 😆 😳

She covering about their moment by saying HE IS HANDSOME.. We know that & SHE IS PRETTY, that's y he is fell for her

He think that she gave him permission to hook up 👏 👏

again lost in him!!! superb 😉

But u only show HIS dilemma, where is Geet's View??? 🤢 🥺