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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

oops subhah fever to nahi tha

ufff tum dono kya hoga tum dono ka!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

yaar agar hota toh mai abhi tak kha nai leti

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

congratulation for new FF
nice and awesome start
loved it
continue soon

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Mona

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Posted: 12 years ago

congrats for the new ff. awesome story loved it thanks for the pm. continue soon.

Edited by masaf57 - 12 years ago

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 12 years ago

he he dona di kuch nai ho sakta

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

sachhi me kuchh nahi ho sakta *sigh*

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars
he he dona di kuch nai ho sakta

ghar mein home medicine bhi nahi hai kya...

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lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 12 years ago

haan dona di dopahar ko fever aa gaya tha... he he poor dona di 😉 and nai gk nai hai

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JeevanaP

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars
haan dona di dopahar ko fever aa gaya tha... he he poor dona di 😉 and nai gk nai hai

ghar mein beaten rice aur fried gram nahi hai kya...

kaisekitchen hai tera...

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SilentMelody

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg omg chamia...

what have u done...?

what an awsome outcome of a thought in the matter of jst 1 hour...

i still cant believe ...im jst speechless...

bt i wont runaway jst by saying im speechless...

bcuz u deserve an appalause for this awsome creativity...👏👏👏

.i know how u got inspired to write this story jst by seeing a pic.

ur words jst gave life to this pic yaar...mindblowing...

this proves how creative,passionate,n great writer you are...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

4 ffs at a time...howw???

ek ka hangover uttarta nai tu dusra le aati ha...

ooo GOD aniee im surely going to become big time BEVADI again...

wait wait...let me leave a note for my family...

note: mom ...dad..bhai..if u dont find me anywhere...dont search hard for me...

sirf aniee k threads ka chakkar laga ana...wahin kisi ek thread ma padi hui milon gi...

ok now comming to serious comment...

what do u mean ranjhi u wasnt serious till now???

jo kuch likha wo awain tha...???

no no ...im damn serious with all stuff...

ok now abt story...

starting with banner...double thums up👍🏼👍🏼

simply beautiful ...hatts off najiah...👏👏

n storyyy...ufff aniee...

beautiful start...autumn season

geet totally different n mesmerizing...lost in her own world..in the beauty of nature...enjoying autumn bliss...very unique...

lovely entry by maan...fully in trance by geets beauty...

kiss in a very first part...wow aniee is back...

n what a romantic n passionate kiss...dreamy...

hottness in chilled weather...hmmm...

yaar itne romantic enviroment ma koi kar b kya skta ha...

maan is in love with geet...

so is geet...she also confessed

bt yeh kya???

why geet got concious...? why she is confused.?after a beautiful passionate kiss...

kahani main twist?

ye kya chakkar ha anii...

was it only a weak moment or what...?

mystryyy...

anii unfold this mystry soon yaar...

itne dreamy kiss k baad yeh...QQQ?

waiting for next update..

jaldi dena ok...

bt i must say ...all n all it was fabtabulous update...

very different from ur previous work...

lovveeeddd it to the core...

.ek baat anii...jo note main ne ooper dia apni family k liye,,,

wahi tu ab apni hr update k end main dia kar...

q k ye story padhne k baad sbka yahi haal hona ha...

sb ki sb BEVADIAN BANI HUI HONGI...

ANII THANX FOR THE DEDICATION...

bt i doesnt have any contribution in that...

its totally urs...n najiah's magic...

luv ya...

Edited by ranjeeta1410 - 12 years ago

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