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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Thesaurus

i will check out on youtube...



ya sure 😊
phir review dena apna...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan



ya sure 😊
phir review dena apna

yep i will give u a detailed review...on aap...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab jaldi darr ko update karo yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan

ab jaldi darr ko update karo yaar

haan baba karungi...bas yeh new OS finish kar loon...phir Darr hi upd. karungi...jaan..thoda aur wait krle...😳puhleez...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Thesaurus

haan baba karungi...bas yeh new OS finish kar loon...phir Darr hi upd. karungi...jaan..thoda aur wait krle...😳puhleez...




ohk but kitne days
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Posted: 12 years ago
aj aur kal..main try kr rhi hoon OS aaj hi finish kr loon...agar ho jaata hai..toh kal Darr upd. kar doongi...pakka...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Thesaurus

aj aur kal..main try kr rhi hoon OS aaj hi finish kr loon...agar ho jaata hai..toh kal Darr upd. kar doongi...pakka...




ok will wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
okes...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago



Thanky frds for loving the previous upd.
i am dedicating this upd. to 111priyan aka Amita...one of the ardent readers of Darr...love u ami...😳for waiting so eagerly...


Chap~16


1 year after...

'mam plzz wait aap andar nhi jaa sakti...sir meeting mein busy hai'

'meri baat meeting se zyada important hai'

'but mam sir ne kisi ko bhi disturb krne ke liye mana kia hai...its a confidential meeting mam plzzz try to understand...'

He tried hard to stop her...but she pushed him away and barged into his cabin...

'maan singh khurana'

All the eyes just stared at the lady in astonishment clad in a wedding attire...ignoring the stares she just called out his name once again...

'maan singh khurana mujhe aapse zaroori baat krni hai'

Her eyes were spitting fire...of anger...frustration...pain and restlessness...

'excuse me gentlemen'

And after few sec. only two souls were left in the cabin...

He stared at her blankly for few minutes without any emotion...and just simply settled down on his chair as if nothing had happened...immersing himself in his file...

'main aapse baat kar rhi hoon mr. maan singh khurana'

'hmm sun rha hoon main bolo?'

She went near him and snatched his file away...

'geeeth' he seethed in anger...

She smirked slightly ...

'toh aap robot nhi hain'

Hearing her he just glared and turned around...masking his anger...

'muh kyu mod rhe hain aap mr. khurana...?'

'himmat hai toh saamna kijiye na mera...' she challenged him...

getting no reply from him...

'kya hua darr gaye aap...ki meri aankhon mein dekhne se apne jazbaaton ko rok nhi payenge boliye na jawaab dijiye chup kyu hai aap' she went near him and jerked him...

He turned away from her called the receptionist...

'mana kia tha maine mujhe koi disturbance nhi chahiye kaha tha na...ur fired'

She chuckled...and clapped ...

'wow mr. khurana grt work keep it up...'

'kyu aayi ho tum yaha?'

'kaha na baat krni hai aapse' she snapped at him...

'magar mujhe tumse koi baat nhi karni hai'

'kyu nhi krni hai...?'

'tumhara jawaab dena main zaroori nhi samjhta...so just get lost from here' ...

'i will not...'

'majboor mat karo mujhe geet ki main tumhe dhakke deke bahar nikaal doon'

'beshak nikaliye magar uske liye aapko mujhe chuna hoga mr. maan singh khurana'

'woh toh kabhie nhi hoga chahe meri jaan hi kyu na chali jaaye' he glared at her...

'fikar mat kijiye main aapko itni aasani se marne nhi doongi'...

'tum aakhir chahti kya ho geet?'

'aapko' she stared at him intensely...

'asmaan aur zameen kabhi nhi milte'

'kshitiz...'

'horizon'

'aapko confusion na ho isliye english mein translate kr dia'

'Aur kya chahiye tumhe sabkuch toh de diya hai maine tumhe...paisa...naam ...bangla ...gaadi'

'aap chaiye mujhe aap...aapka pyar chaiye mujhe' holding his collar she stared at him...with love and longing...tears clouded her eyes...

He stared at her in disbelief...

'kya kaha tumne?'

'I love you maan...and i want you to love me' she pleaded with her eyes...

He jerked her away instantly...in fear...

'nhi yeh nhi ho sakta tum mujhse pyaar nhi kr sakti ...tum mujhse pyaar kaise kar sakto ho haan...bolo jawaab do mujhe'

'kyun nhi kar sakti main...aapse pyaar haan...aur aap kyun khud ko rok rhe hain...main aapki hoon aur aap mere maan'

'main kisi ka nhi hoon samjhi tum...'

'aap is sach se bhaag nhi sakte hain'

'kaunsa sach?'

'saat pheron ka sach...'

'its just a damn deal geet' he snarled at her...

'Darr nhi lagta mujhe aapse...par shayad aapko Darr lagta hai mujhse'

'kya kaha tumne?'

'aapko deals krna bahut pasand hain na mr. khurana common lets make a new deal'

'deals banata bhi main hoon aur todta bhi main hoon sirf main samjhi tum aur mujhe kisi se bhi Darr nhi lagta hai'

'Darr toh aapko lagta hai mr.khurana mujhse'

'manzoor hai mujhe tumhari deal'

she smirked at him...

'gud yeh rhe papers'

'papers?'

'aapko toh pakka kaam pasand hain na...so here it is...plzzz go through it...'

With that she made her way to the door...

'aur haan jaldi kijiyega zara u know na i don't like to wait...'

He stared at the file...specially on the heading...

'DEAL OF LOVE'

I know guys u have lot of queries what happened in the past...after the incident...plzzz bear with me...one thing i will just let u know...this story is unpredictable...so u will gradually come to know all about the past...what happened in the past 1 year...

PLZZZ DO LIKE AND COMMENT...







Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
haila.. u jumped off..

but i will wait to know wat happened
and wats this deal and all

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