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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanx a lot guys for liking & commenting on the previous upd.

Here comes the next upd. of Darr.

HERE IS WISHING U ALL A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR 🥳

Chapter-8

khurana mansion echoed with the heavy foot steps of the Devil maan singh khurana without wasting any more secs he just rushed & hurried his steps towards his room where his mishty was eagerly waiting for him as he thought so but soon his dream was to be rudely broken by a harsh reality of which he was unaware.

maan while walking up the stairs was only imagining his mishty in the red saree.

maan-' aj ki raat ki toh baat hi alag hai mishty, main -tum aur bas pyar hi pyar'

Thinking about her clad in a red saree was making him hard.

Imagining her perfect curves , her beautiful face, her luscious lips , her almond eyes was just only drowning him in his desires of making love to her from night till morning, till eternity.

With these wild thoughts he gradually entered the room.

His eyes looked around the dark room searching his mishty, but the darkness was making it hard for him to get a glimpse of his beloved girl.

His urges were now taking a toll on him making it unbearable to control his desires.

'Mishty-mishty kaha ho tum?'.

He called out while searching the entire room with his eyes but as he tried to move deeper into the room a voice made him abruptly rooted in his place.

'sir annie mam geet mam ko apne saath le gai hain, unki tabiyat kuch thik nhi thi , main kabse aapko awaaz laga rha tha par aap sun hi nhi rhe they'- said a panting nakul.

Hearing this maan clenches his fists closing his anger filled eyes.

'Annie'

In a haste he turns & grabs nakul by his collar.

'meri mishty ko kaha leke gai , aur uski tabiyat ko kya hua?'

nakul stammers seeing his wild self.

'ji woh city hospital'.

maan rudely throws him on the floor & rushes down the stairs & immediately informs his guards to take out the car.

At the airport.

annie is waiting for the flight to dubai along with a faint geet.

annie-sorry geet mujhe yeh kadam uthana pada, par main kya karti aur koi raasta bhi nhi tha tujhe maan bhai se bachane ka'.

Gradually geet moves a bit & moans in pain 'hmmm maan'

Hearing maan's name from geet's mouth annie is shocked to the core.

In the car.

'yeh annie ka phone switched off kyun aa rha hai aur mishty ka bhi phone switched off aa rha hai, mishty ko toh chot lagi thi haan, par woh annie ke saath kyu gai, mere hote hue, nhi zaror annie ne hi zabardasti ki hogi, magar mishty ko mana krna chahiye tha, kyun nhi kia, kyun mishty,kyun?'

His anger is reaching the extreme level gradually.

'kyun, main aa rha tha na, mera intezar kyun nhi kia tumne mishty kyu?'

Thinking somebody else touching his mishty was making him boil with extreme anger.

At the airport.

'annie yeh tumne kya kia , kyu kia?'- asked a tired geet, still trying hard to come to her senses.

annie-geet please tum bolo mat, bas kuch der aur phir hum maan bhai ki pahunch se bahut door honge.

geet smirks slightly 'namumkin hai yeh'.

'woh mujhe dhoondh lenge'

The hospital employees were rushing here & there as maan entered the wings along with his bodyguards.

In few minutes each & every nook & corner of the hospital was thoroughly searched but with no avail.

'MISHTY'

The whole hospital echoed with this name by Maan singh khurana.

'MISHTY'

a raging maan rushed out of the hospital with his guards.

Here at the airport geet shivered suddenly.

Her whole body got goosebumps.

annie-common geet lets go, flight aa gai hai.

precap-will maan find his mishty?

please do LIKE&COMMENT.

Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
Romanaxx thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear:-)
can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope she will go away from his clutches
but i know he will get her back

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Posted: 12 years ago
THIS IS SO SCARY
MAAN IS HUNTING FOR MISHTY WHILE ANNIE IS PLANNING TO LEAVE WITH HER
WILL MAAN FIND HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...I hope he get back his mishty soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very nice chp. So Annie is trying to take Geet abroad. Maan is so angry! Gosh! If he and Geet come face to face now, pata nahi Geet ka kya hoga. Looking forward to reading the next chp and thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Annie Geet ko le toh aayi hai but I dont think they'll be able to run from d Devil.

Gr8 going buddy.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Romanaxx

Nice update dear:-)
can't wait to read more.

thanx a lot for loving it dear.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanky so much.😊

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