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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jssood

hii

thanx for pm me
geet situatian is terrible
when maan come to know about that

hii dear ur most welcome.yep her situation is terrible . let's see what happens when maan comes to know about this. thanx for commenting dear.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanky so much.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Romanaxx

Nice one:-)
can't wait to read more

thanx dear fot loving it. will upd. soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

The way Maan is remembering Geet,only tells d tale of his insane love for her.
Another thing got cleared that Geet is only engaged to Maan.They r still not married.

The story is getting more and more interestin.Waiting for next part.

thanky so much dear for loving the upd. so much yep u have analysed the situation very aptly in ur words. yep maaneet are still not married. thanx for finding it interesting. will upd. soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing.loved it

thanky so much for loving it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanky so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for commenting.u will come to know all gradually.

Originally posted by: punam2712

I THOUGHT THEY WERE MARRIED

BUT IT DOESNT SEEM LIKE IT FROM THIS UPDATE
WHERE DID THEY MEET

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanky so much.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanky frds for loving the previous upd.

Here comes the next upd. of Darr.

Chapter-7

Hearing the footsteps , geet panics her heart beat raises to another level. But she can't back out now , its now or never.

geet-babaji raksha krna, shakti do mujhe apne Darr se lad kar jeetne ki.

As the sound of the steps are nearing geet is getting more & more restless.

suddenly the door clicks & geet closes her eyes.

geet-geet

Hearing the voice she hastily opens her eyes.

tum?

yahan?

kaise?

In the mercedes.

maan is getting more & more restless & moreover angry too as the tire of the car has got punctured.

& its taking time , moreover he is unable to bear the distance now from his mishty, he just want to reach to her , it has been quite few hrs he has seen her & he needs to see her , to touch her, to feel her , to embrace her in his warmth at any cost , she is her lifeline . A drug a sweet drug & he is addictive to her.

sweat is covering his brows.

His hands are shivering.

His eyes are gradually changing color dark red & swelling with anger.

As the time is passing each & every minute each & every sec. is now getting on his nerves.

As he tries to get out of the car the driver informs him about the fixing of the tire.

& without any further delay the ride resumes.

maan- adi.

Adi-ji s s sir.

maan- burn that damn bas*** in hell along with his tyring company.

adi gulps his saliva.

adi- but s s sir.

maan glares at him with extreme anger spitting from his eyes like a burning volcano who is just waiting to erupt at any moment.

adi stammers saying yes & vigorously nods his head.

maan- jiski wajah se mujhe mishty se do pal ki doori bardaasht krni padi uska namonishan mita doonga main.

with this he closes his eyes & leans back.

Thinking about the past once again.

Drowning himself in the memories of his mishty.

'jaadu hai nasha hai madhoshiyan tujhko bhulake ab jaaon kaha'

At KM.

geet- yeh nhin ho sakta tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho annie?

annie- geetu please meri baat maan jaa.

geet- nhi annie agar maan ko iski bhanak bhi lag gai toh tum jaanti ho ki kayamat aa jaayegi.

aur main nhi chahti ki meri wajah se tujhe kuch bhi ho.

annie- mujhe kuch nho hoga geetu.

geet- nhi keh dia na bas nhi ab mujhe aur kuch nhi sunna hai.

Hearing this annie breaks in tears.

'yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai geetu, kaash main sab kuch badal sakti, kaash'.

geet cups her face in her hands & wipes her tears.

'annie ab jo ho chuka so ho chuka use badla nhi jaa sakta'

annie- maine socha tha maan bhai badal jayenge par aisa kuch bhi nhi hua.

geet- aur na hi kabhi hoga, maan kabhi nhi badalenge.

'anyways annie isse pehle ki maan aa jaayein tu please yaha se chali jaa'

annie gets up wiping her tears & in a determined voice says.

' jaongi par tujhe saath leke jaongi'

geet trys to stop her.

annie-sorry geetu par tujhe bachane ke liye mujhe yeh krna hi padega.

Before geet could understand anything annie hits her on the shoulder & she faints.

annie- yeh marshal arts ki training kab kaam ayegi.

From the outskirts of KM enters the mercedes of MAAN.

'sir hum pahunch gaye'

Maan-hmm.

He gradually opens his eyes.

'mishty main aa gaya apni bhookh mitane'

with a slight sexy smirk.

precap-Volcano erupts.

please do like & comment.

it means so much.

Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
car ki tire puncture ho gayi n maan wants to burn the tire company!!!!!!!!
annie geet ko kaha le ja rahi hai??
ab to jwalamukhu puthega ab annie aur geet ko kon bachayega
loved it

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