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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanky so much friends for appreciating the previous chap.

Here comes the next chap. of Darr.

chapter-5

KM at midnight.

geet in dilemma how to leave.

geet-babaji main yaha se niklu kaise , spy cameras aur maan ke guards unse kaise bachke niklu.

'mushkil toh aur bhi badh gai hai agar khud ko chot pahunchai toh kisi cheez ka istemaal bhi nhi kar sakti wrna maan toh us insaan ke saath pata nhi kya karenge jisne bhi woh cheez banai hogi'

At the owner's shop.

outside a black mercedes is parked gradually the windows are automatically let down , peeks an evil smirking maan.

Maan- sazaa puri ki usne ?

adi-ji sir.

The man comes out with a broken face , tears continously rolling down his face, completely shattered still holding the rod in his hand & he falls down on his knees on the street suddenly dark clouds hover the sky & it starts raining heavily.

The man looks at maan & is only able to utter one sentence.

'sazaa puri kar li maine'

'barbaad kar dia apna karobar apne haathon'

maan smirks evily .

'grt job ab iska antim sanskar bhi kar do'

& with this he slides the window up leaving him still confused kiska antim sanskar?

At KM.

geet still thinking ways to get out if this hell but she is not able to find any.

geet- kya karun main babaji khud ko nuksaan pahuncha nhi sakti phir?

suddenly a name strikes in her mind an only name which always makes her shiver badly with fear.

Her Darr 'MAAN'.

geet- Maan ko nhi nhi babaji main unhe kaise , par geet agar tujhe yaha se nikalna hai toh bas yhi ek raasta hai.

'jisne qaid kia hai, wahi azaad karega'

Here in the car maan rests his head on the seat thinking about his mishty , the first time when he saw her in the rain.

flashback

maan, the maan singh khurana for the first time was visiting India was the headlines of every newspaper & news channel.

'One of the biggest & the most successful business tycoons of Asia'

well known for his ruthless & arrogant behaviour.

a road block breaks maan's thoughts .

smiling to himself he again thinks about the past.

maan- kitna badal dia hai meri mishty ne mujhe.

'MK se maan bana dia hai'

'6 mahine se zyada ho gaye hain us bheegi pehli milan ki raat ko , par lagta hai jaise , kal ki hi baat ho'.

'main aur meri mishty kichad mein lipte hue , bheege - bheege se, ufff mishty tumne toh us din bhi meri jaan le li thi, aur aj bhi usi laal rang ki saari mein meri jaan le ke rahogi, par mujhe koi aitraaz nhi'

'kyunki meri jaan hi meri jaan le sakti hai'

At KM.

geet who is pacing here & there suddenly topples on something , she looks at it & is startled to find her red saree beneath the carpet.

geet- hey babaji yeh yaha kaise?

suddenly she remembers that she herself had hidden it or rather thrown it here hastily in order to hide it from maan so that she could stop his insane obsessiveness.

remembering that incident she clutches her heart , her heart beats are raised to another level making her forehead covered with sweat.

she shivers but leans down gradually & takes it out.

geet- kabhi socha nhi tha ki ise main dobara dekhungi bhi, jis laal rang se itni mohabbat thi mujhe , ab utni hi nafrat ho gai isse'

'aur iski wajah sirf aap hai maan'.

she tights her fists making her nails digging her soft skin.

determined she decides something.

'par aj phir se is laal rang ko odhungi khud par, aapse humesha ke liye door jane ke liye, jo rang kabhi paas laya tha, aj wahi door bhi le jayega'.

geet- jaldi ayiye maan, aapki mishty aapka intezar kar rhi hai.

with this she wipes her tears.

precap- past - present cont.

plz do tell me how u like it?

waiting for ur likes & comments.

Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet ne rula dia
maan obsessiveness makes her fearful
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very nice chp. I'd like to read more about Maan and Geet's pehli mulaakaat. I wonder what happened to the guy Maan punished. Eager to know what plan Geet has in mind.Loooking forward to the next chp. Thanks for the PM and update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm update...
I think geet is planning to kill him...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear:-)
plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
THIS MAAN IS SCARING ME ALSO
HE IS SO POSSESSED AND OBSESSED

HOW CAN ANYONE LIVE WITH HIM
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet maan se bhagne k liye maan ka sahara lena chahti hai
lets see kya hota hai
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice One !! 😃 !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update dear.
maan is really crazy for geet.
waiting to know more about thier past.
continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
The Glass company owner had to destroy his company wid his own hands.And even after that he may killed by MSK's men.Thats why maan said abt kriyakarm.

And d first meeting of Maaneet was quite interesting.Both in mud!!!


Wanna Know Maan's fixation wid red saari.And even curious to know geet's plan to elope.

Loved d update.

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