VENOMOUS DESIRE-THREAD 02 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
I love all ur stories and loving this story to the core!!i'm waiting for how maan will ultimately punish sameera!!i jst can't wait for the next part to witness how love blossoms between maaneet more.i've added u to my pm list,pls kindly give me a pm whenever u update the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
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One of great creations Loving it and especially the back ground music .Wao Kurba Hua tumne yaad dilla di .Thanx alot dear...
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Rohit was shocked and stood disappointedly that he wanted to relish Geet's beauty for himself but she became impure when Maan kissed her.Rohit cursed Maan and went from there where Maan stood there kissing her lips madly while Raj smiled impressively folding his hands across his chest.

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PART 16






Maan kissed her lips passionately in front of everyone that everyone stood there seeing it in total shock.Maan licked her lips and pulled her towards his hard frame and pinned her.Geet was seeing around her rolling her eyes and was getting embarrassed as the whole world were seeing them both with shock.Maan left her swollen lips licking it one last time while the party whole stood like statue seeing their kiss.After sometime one person started clapping and everyone followed suit and Maan grinned back to the crown and pulled Geet towards his hard frame and walked past them.Geet who was totally red due to kiss sulked behind Maan with total shy.The party hall was pin drop silent and Geet hid her face inside Maan's chest with shy.Maan waled faster than ever as he knew that what was gonna come next as the media still was present.















Seeing Maan move faster one of the reporters walked faster towards him to ask about the scene which went on one minute ago but Maan was too faster and Rajveer walked past him faster too.Maaneet immediately sat faster and Veer sat in driving seat and immediately started his car and drove faster before the media people would surround them.Veer asked angrily,"Maan'tum paagal ho gaye the kya wahan par'.aise kiss karne ki zaroorat kya thi Geet ko?"Maan fumed with anger and spoke angrily,"Meine koi galat nahin kiya haina'.meine apne biwi ko kiss kiya hai naaki kissi aur ko'.aur waise bhi mujhe us Sameera ko sabak sikhaani thi isiliye Geet ko kiss kiya'.kaise kaise baat kar rahi thi meri Geet ke baare mein'.uski moo band karvaani thi isiliye kiss kiya''!"Veer asked,"Tumhe maaloom hai in sabka parinaam kya hoga?Ab Geet bewajah badnaam hogi'.!Tumhe maaloom haina ki yeh media ke log baath ko ghumaakar likhenge'.aur is kiss ke baare mein kal kya aane waala hai humein maaloom nahin lekin logon ke gossip ka shikaar aap dono banenge'.!"















Geet was too silently nodding to Veer's words while Maan had an enormous satisfaction as he had seen an unknown pain in Sameera's eyes.That pain which he had when he was betrayed was seen in Sameera's eyes.Geet was observing Maan's expressions intently and asked softly which wasnt audible to Veer,"Maan'..us waqt aapne mujhe aise kyun kiss kiya?"Maan said taking her right hand and kissing it softly,"Jaan'.i dont wanted the scent of that Rohit on you and u know am so possessive of my things and that's y i kissed u in front of everybody.Geet was overwhelmed with Maan's love and her eyes wide opened with shock and asked innocently,"Aapko pata tha ki woh Rohit mujhse battmeezi kar raha hai?"Maan nodded yes slowly and Geet's eyes welled up remembering his touches and said cutely showing her every where,"Usne mujhe yahan yahan touch kiya'.!"
















Maan saw her bare waist and kissed it softly while Veer was conscious and cleared his throat to gain his attention.Maan groaned badly and whispered in her ears,"Mein tumhe ghar mein dekhta hoon'.!"Geet blushed furiously and hid her face inside his chest.Maan smirked and cocooned her inside his embrace.Veer drove the car towards KM and stopped near the porch where both Maaneet got down and Veer went to park it in shed.Maan immediately lifted Geet in his strong arms and Geet asked innocently,"Aap mujhe neeche utaariyena'.kahan leke jaa rahe hai'..!"Geet asked with popped eyes while Maan smirked and said,"Geet..ab humaari shaadi toh announce ho chuki hai toh ab suhaagraat toh banta haina..kyun?"Geet blushed furiously and hid her face inside his crook of the neck and Maan groaned,"Jaan'.tum abhi se tempt karne lagi'.!"Geet saw him with mouth wide open when Maan said smirking,"Dekha tum mujhe open invitation de rahi ho'!"














Geet immediately closed her moth and blushed furiously while Sameera who stood in the garden fumed with anger.Sameera had came there to talk to Maan but his behaviour made her more burn in jealousy.Now Geet had become centre of attraction to everybody who love her so much and no one saw towards her and ask her about her health or anything.In Sameera's home also no one gave importance when she came back after struggling in the fashion world.Sameera thought that Maan is waiting for her but she saw that he had moved on with Geet wasnt digested by her.Sameera was getting angry on Geet as she dint made up his mind to love her and accepted him as her husband.In Sameera's home no one gave a glance to her and everyone ignored her and no one pampered her.Her mother was the one who pampered her and listened all her lies and swallowed it.

















Here no one gave a glance to her and now it had become her desire to have Maan at any cost.Sameera had always dreamt of a rich guy loving her and leaving with her like her slave and she had seen that quality in Maan.But Maan's wasnt like that he wanted a life partner who understand him and he understand her and lead the life peacefully.It was no compare to Maan's behaviour with Sameera's beahviour.But Sameera was feeling lust towards Maan not love and god never make the decisions of man to be fulfilled so easily.Sameera tried to come between Maaneet but god showed his wishes and destined Geet to Maan.

















Here Maan took Geet to their bedroom and made her to lie on the bed.Maan wanted to love her in his office only but resisted as no one will interrupt them in their house and now he was seeing his wifey with dark eyes.Desires were lapping up in his mind and his heart was beating rapidly seeing her beauty.Geet was blushing furiously and her blush was adding up her beauty which pierced Maan's soul.Maan moved his sleek fingers on Geet's bare waist and started making patterns while Geet moaned his name which drove him insane.Maan immediately hovered on her and was about to take her petal like lips when someone clapped sarcastically'..Maaneet looked up to see who is it when they both got the shock of their life.There stood Sameera spitting fire on Geet and clapping sarcastically".














Maan who dint see Sameera in garden was shocked seeing her there.Sameera stood there to play her game which she had wove in her mind.Sameera spoke to Geet harshly,"Waah'.kya behen mili hai mujhe'.sahi hai yeh kalyug sabko badal deti hai'.!"Maan shouted immediately,"Tumhe ander aane kisne diya?Security''.security'..!"Sameera said spitting the fire,"Chillane ki zaroorat nahin hai Maan'mein yahan khud aayi hoon kyunki yeh mere pati ka ghar hai'aur yeh Geet meri sautan hai'..!"Maan said immediately,"Kitni baar kahoon tum meri biwi nahin ho'.tumhe sharam nahin aati apne jiju ko apne pati bulaane ki'.!"Sameera said,"Jab tum apne saali ko apne biwi keh sakti ho'toh mein apne jiju ko pati nahin keh sakti'..!"Maan said angrily,"Band karo apni yeh bakwaas'Geet meri saali nahin hai meri biwi hai'..!"Sameera laughed sarcastically while Geet stood there saw their convo innocently and bewildered too.















Maan turned that side and said,"Sameera..tum kaise keh sakti ho ki mein tumhaari pati hoon'.tumne kabhi bhi mere saath saat phere liya hai agni ke saamne????"For that words Sameera was speechless and she dint had any answer.Maan continued,"Kya tumne mere saath apne grihasti shuru kiya hai?"Sameera's eyes once again widened with shock standing speechless.Maan asked,"Kya tumne mere saath apna sukh ya dukh baanta hai ya mere sukh ya dukh ko jaana hai?"Sameera was getting speechless with his every questions.Maan asked,"Jab tumne ye sab kuch kiya hi nahin toh tum Geet ko kaise keh sakti ho ki woh meri naajaayaz rishta hai?"Sameera said,"lekin mein kanoonnan aapki biwi hoon'..mein aapki dhaarmik patni nahin hoon fir bhi kaanoonan biwi hon'aap ek baar usse yaad keejiye'..woh papers'..jo aapne mujhe bheje the sign karne ke liye'..woh aap bhool gaye?"Geet stood there giving confused look and thought,"Di kaunse papers ke baare mein baat kar rahi hai?"



Precap-???????



Note-Precap nahin denewaali kyunki i dint get required likes and update is too short becoz am angry with u guys one who r not liking and commenting my ff...if u dont want PM from me then do tell me i wont send u but dont kill my patience sitting in silent mode...and dont ask me PM once again when u have no time to like and comment my ff...so when i get required likes and comments then am gonna give next ud's nahin toh be in cliff hanger reading the ud that what happens next...😡and am gonna update Shaitan Ki Pari tomorrow so if u r interested then do comment and like it or else ur wish but dont expect the friendly talk with me if u PM me for next update...😡




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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind blowing
maaneet moments were awesome
this sameera is a cheap still trying to trap maan for her lust and luxury
waiting for next to know about the papers
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
maan s questions making sameera speechless..
but what paper she is talking about..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update
yeh sam ki bachi kab jaegi in dono ke beech se😡
wanna to kill her😡
waiting for next
but yeh sam ne geet ko maan ki bhabhi ku kaha😕
ab precap nahi mila h toh thora sochna parega
waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update.ye sameera k kia chakar h biwi wala???
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesume update.sameera iz very cheap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb kya sameera sach keh rahi hai

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