ANOKHA BHANDAN maneet updated part-20 14/11 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
nice part...
Arjun is smart but hope he changes his job...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Maan came to know abt geet's info. Arjun's chasing fight was thrilling.
Very Interestg update 😃 loved it



thanks dear for loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

hi susmita first I will read this ff and thaen will comment as i was not following it.

so wait for me to comment



sure dear will wait for your comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet missing her father
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update di

geet missing her dad and arjun playing with his life its painful di
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Posted: 12 years ago

-PART-12

maan was staring at the photos which the detective have handed over him and there was report laying on the table 'so miss geet handa I will see how many days will dev will able to save from me .. but I remember I have seen you some where .. where..

Ha that day in the park.. so it is you were staring at me 'it will be my pleasure to meet you soon'

MAAN WAS STADING NEAR SMALL SHOP READING SOME NEWS PAPER, BUT HIS EYES WERE ON THE ROAD,

From the past half hour he was standing there waiting for the geet to come , with the information from the detective he came hear in search of geet house, it just looking like a small slum, lower middle class family are living there,

He just wants to catch hold of geet


The shop owner was looking at maan he was in little shock. Un til now he has never seen any person wearing a suit standing in his shop,

Sir do you want any thing to drink.. any cold,

Maan understood that that if he stand like this, he will get doubt

Ha

He passed one small cup of tea'

Maan who never saw like this before' was shocked

Ye kya hai

The person understood that, maan has never drinked like this

Sir ye chai hai

Muje pata hai, lekin I will not drink tea'

It is okay give this pepsi can

Maan eye are still on the road, but he did not observed that all other girls are drooling on him, who has never seen such handsome person in their area

At that same time a auto came and stopped on the road, a girl came out form the auto and started taking shopping bags from the auto and keeping one by one on the road

Geet' he saw the girl who was looking so slim and tall having nice features

She is having an argument with the driver

The driver was shouting very loudly and cursing her

Tum ne bathayatha ghar mandir ke pass hai lekin yeto mandir itna door hai..

Maine ne correct bataya tha jab tum theek se nahi suna , to vo meri galiti nahi hai

Theek hai meri galat hai , muje thoda extra 20 dedo

Kyu.. idhara mere pass paiso ko pauda hai

denekeliye

Hearing those arguments everyone gathered there

Maan was seeing all these arguments very curisiouly

At the same time paami came outside.. seeing all these aruguments

Geet why do not give him that extra money' why these arguments, see everyone are staring at us

Let them stare mami.. inlogo kam hai vo'

Iam not going him any extra money

The driver murmured something and left the place

Maan who saw everything, the way geet took fight with him for just 20 rs ,he is seeing the fight as if it is a movie , geet face is looking very red with anger , the eyes are fuming with anger ,she is looking so attractive in this nature

At the same time, he was thinking about the future.. if this marriage happen.. will geet can able to bear dev unnecessary expenditure, he knows how much dev spends

The other part of the city

Everyone gathered in the pub which was their permanent place for their meetings

Arjun you did nice job'

He saw the packets which are full of diamonds

Arjun take this saying that hethrowed one currency bundle towards him'.

..but itna

Okay take this saying that he thrrowed another 2 bundel'

Now you are satisfied

Shanker was fuming with anger'

Guru you are supporting him, but you are not thinking about the conseqnces , you are going face after this, he killed the right hand of that xyz gang

Arjun was quietly listening to all these,

Now they will plan very big , they will try to attack us

Ya it is true we should be care full and hide some where,

Do you think you can save your life by hiding

Hmm.then what your plans arjun

We will attack before they attack us

But it is very dangerous , our life will be at risk

Apne jindigi itne pyari hai to , why you entered in this field


precape: guys i know you are waiting for maan and geet meeting until now they saw each other, but they did not meet , finally they will meet but differently..

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
waiting for maaneet's meeting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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