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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
waiting for more of maaneet moments
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan hates Geet.
Geet dislikes Maan.
Wonder how would their married life be.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 13
nice part...
wow Maan and Geet meet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey thats an amazing part!
small but i loved each and every word of it
awesome
waiting to know what happens next
continue sooonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally mil toh gaye
waiting for their convo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update. Maaneet meet 😊 eagerly waitg for d twists 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamy4ever

Very nice update. Maaneet meet 😊 eagerly waitg for d twists 😃




thanks dear for loving it
will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-14

seeing maan before her ..she felt as if the whole world was crashed before.. she just from there.. but no I cannot go like this.. I have to face this situation .

.SHE IMMEDIATELY TRY THE HOLD HER HEARBEAT WHICH WERE GOING VERY FAST

Maan immediately called the bearer and ordered his black coffee..

Geet could not able understand maan intentions , even she taking her icecream, she could guess he is staring at her '

Iam maan singh khurnaa.. dev is brother 'he introduced himself'

Hmm.. I know..

How..

Vo.. dev ne door se dikhayatha apko

But dev has never told anything about you

Seeing his sarcastic tone' geet immediately tried to defend dev ..is it there is any rule that what ever dev does any work he has to tell you ..

Maan anger rosed ,at the same time bearer came and kept the coffee'

Taking the sip of coffee'

What is your father doing


He will not do anything,

Hearing those words, he immediately, raised his head'

Their eyes met.. at one second they lost in each other'.slowly maan came back to his senses.. he immediately turned his head

I want to meet your father'

Why

I have some work'

If your want to meet him.. you have to go to heaven

What'

You cannot understand that one also'.. it is mean that I do not have father..

Oh.. iam sorry.., it is looking as if it is a formality ,

Do you have any brother'

Yes one brother..

What he is doing..

Nothing '

What is his age'

Geet is getting irritation with his cross examination, but tried to control her anger. He is 25 years'.

What is he is doing.. any job..

I want to talk to him regarding your matter'

My matter.. what is there in it ..

You want to marry dev .. so I want to speak to elders .. but seeing you, id do not think so, you will listen to your elders'so if you are convinced with me, I will talk to you directly '..

Geet was playing with the spoon..

Maan was waiting for the answer..

At last she told.. who told you that we are marrying'

Maan was shocked with the answer'

If you are not interested in marrying why you wrote these letters, and why you send these photos to that dev father..i 'law..

Vo..i was just helping dev' from this forced marriage '

Other than this.. you do not have any personal ..feelings towards him

Personal.. even if is personal why you should I discuss to strangers'..

See dev is my brother.. iam his guardian' without my concert this marriage will not happen

Geet was feeling very irritated with this cross examination..

Where is this dev.. he left me in this lion den .. where he went she was cursing dev

I do not what dev told about this marriage..or he had promised but this marriage will not happen' to day I came here to tell this information'

Maan expected geet will shout at him and tell him that dev and she are loving and no one can stop to marry .. but here.. geet is so cool eating her icecream.,,

Seeing this behavior.. maan is getting irritation and angry

What is this girl attitude , what she is thinking .. ki dev is hers' and no one can stop her from marrying dev'he immediately he took one book from his coat.. he sign the check and throwed before her

See it is not new to me saving dev from clutches. of a women who are just behind his property ' if the amount in the check is not sufficient , this is my card come and meet me I will give more money .. and for that you have to give all the letters and photos'

Geet was not able understand what maan was talking.. she took the check and saw

'if I do not give the letter and photos


What do you mean by that..


It is simple.. mr maan iam not going to leave dev saying that she kept the check on the table

Maan was staring at the check and geet 'he was trying to control his raising anger'

But geet with out any fear was just staring at him ..


Maan suddenly bend towards her'

See why this drama I know you cannot marry dev.. you are only interested in his money .. for that you can go to any extent .. I understood that 'there is smirk in his eyes '

By the way what you will get in marrying dev' . you are beautiful try to trap other person.. you may get money from others also what do you say..it is a nice business

Geet could not bear these insults

If I do not agree to this what you will do

See I can go to any extent ..i can book you in any case and sent to prison, you will be humiliated


Hearing all these.. geet was seeing maan how could a man be become so low

See geet iam not that cruel'we can come to one understanding '

Before maan could continue his words.. geet responded

See mr.. dev is my best friend , I am not afraid of your dhamki ..

Ladki hokarbhi itni ghamand'

Aphi bahut batameez hai.. you do not know how to talk with ladies..

After seeing you I thought you are beautiful and intelligent but .. you are behaving like this'see you want to marry dev, you should marry not for the sake of property but seeing him,'you do not have minimum character to become wife of dev

see dev knows better' which type of wife he needs..so you need not be worry.. and you cannot force him to marry others..

maan at one second was staring at her ..there was silent prevailing between them , at last he spoke..

i just came here to tell you it is not good for you to eye on dev property.. but you are not listening me'but I know how to teach you a lesson.. I will release dev from your clutches ..

wish you good luck

hearing those words maan immediately turned

I know how save dev from your clutuches

Hearing those words from geet.. maan anger roses.. his fingers turned into fists'his eyes becomes blood red 'but seedenly his anger vansied.. a small smirk came on his lips..

Good..i cannot forget you in my life'

I forgot to tell you.. dev will not come now'you can go to your home'wish you best of luck.. saying that he immediately left the place '

Hearing those words' geet could felt relief at one second



precape; fighting goes on


Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
guys i have given big update please give me your comments and likes ..please there will be lots of twists coming up
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks dear for liking it

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