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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: jazzerette
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PLEASE continue your story...

Shika bolo na...

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She would pretty soon Avi. I got a little birdie from someone :)

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Originally posted by: TheBrat
She would pretty soon Avi. I got a little birdie from someone :)

Thank u... MPGD..🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

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where is the update, still waiting

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Posted: 12 years ago

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present teacher! me bookmarking teacher :D

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^ I was reading your OS that one where Geeta Mahalakshmi Pendyala was celebrating her anniversary. I have a stupid grin on my face. Chala chala bagundi OS ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: TheBrat
^ I was reading your OS that one where Geeta Mahalakshmi Pendyala was celebrating her anniversary. I have a stupid grin on my face. Chala chala bagundi OS ;)

oh god *trying to hide away* it was my first OS... in spite of it being close to my heart for the story the way i wrote it makes me cringe for childish writing... i hope i got a bit better by christmas present os 😆

but so glad u liked it! 🤗

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Are you kidding me? That was sweet. Simple and very much believable. When she came to propose him I pictured the scene from sillunu oru kadal. Oh man I now a days am listening to Munbe va at an alarming rate. Rofl. Btw m yet to read the epilogue. And haan i laughed out loud when she said 'gunduga' lmao.

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

Bhat is this?

How come I did not know about this😲

Apna dabba reservation karing

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Chapter 11

Finally got to commenting.😛

This update was totally 'Kammani'and what made it even more'Kammani', were your tranlations of the lyrics.😆

I am loving how the two friends are trying to bridge the gap between them.

Every relationship, has a honeymoon period. Be it friendship, or a romantic relationship. But once that period is over and your relationship faces trials and tribulations some relationships fall apart forever, but some take the time and effort to build a bridge of communication and eventually reach each other. That is a relationship that has matured under harsh and painful reality, and that is a relationship that surives a lifetime. The bond that Geet and Tweesha have now will probably not be the old one they shared, but they will definitely build a new, more mature lasting frienship I feel.

Ah what a beautifully captured moment of the son walking towards his mother for the first time and now the same son has walked so far away from her, even though it is mentally(wonder why though)

I can see Vivan is already standing on that bridge waiting for Tweesha, but she still has her prejudices to overcome before she can start ssing him clearly I think.

But the part that got me was the song and especially when I understood the lyrics and thought of him singing it to Tweesha, that outright declaration of his feelings for her, had me falling for him totally.

To me when I think of him with his mother, I think of him as Vicky, but with Tweesha I always think of him as Vivan.

AH! loved it totally and completely. I am always amazed by the beauty and perfection of the songs you select. They fit in so perfectly with the updates, just enhancing them beautifully.

"The music was alien to her but the voice, his voice and the every letter he uttered screamed magic, touching her soul...As they say unheard music is sweeter"

I concur totally with the above. I have an ecclectic collection of music from different countries and different languages. Some, I don't understand a word of, but the music speaks to my soul.😳

Bratty I am getting snared more and more into your Web Of Love everyday.

🤗

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago