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Posted: 12 years ago
PArt 53 - maan is angry on narendra...what he did to geet...now he will definately destoy him
Maan arranged bodyguards for geet's safety...
Rally naina is sorry for her acts or again she is playing with geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part dear

loved it

oh i think this time NT is upto something

i hope geet will be safe

please yaar do something

why geet is so naive cant she understand person like NT


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
good that geet told all to maan
precap... will naina be in danger thinking its geet or ulta😕
will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update & i think naina is doing all this according to narendra plan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank god Maan didn't MU Geet.. He will be always her protector.. Nice update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome. ..
but I think naina is playing dirty with the k
help of narendra. ..now if she exchange her dress with geet...she can easily fool maan's guards n geet will b kidnapped. ...

hope maan will act fast
Madhuri53 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read chp 53. Maan was feeling so miserable after hearing abt Geet's past. I think Naina's behaviour is fishy. I wonder what Maan has planned for that uncle. Looking forward to the next chp. Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago



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PART 54


Maan whole securities were on rush but could not find Narendra. Seemed he was well prepared of all this. The same night he had already escaped and so now it was little tough for them to find him. But of course not for the Maan Singh Khurana. He knew Narendra very well and his all activities were like a see through mirror for him. very easily he could guess Narendra evil minds' next move and so, he patiently waited.



Get was in car, going to KC. She was looking out from window. Car was stopped in traffic near a bus stop where people were struggling to catch bus. Suddenly crowd became explosive. People started fighting and screaming and there, Geet saw Naina, was struggling too, trying to come out from strife. She was highly terrified and seeming, was going to be faint any second due to her sick health. Geet heart melted seeing a girl struggling alone. She asked driver to go near Naina and requested her to come inside car. Naina first hesitated but then agreed looking no choice as strife was becoming aggressive. Geet asked for her address and they moved for it.


Car stopped in front of Naina house. It was very old looking one floor building at quite desolated place. Geet was awing. She had been thinking Naina lives in orphanage. Naina sensed her wonder and said she lives with her relatives, not in orphanage. Geet nodded. Naina was going to get down when she trembled and held car door for support.


"what happened?'' Geet asked worriedly


"Nothing Geet don't worry. Just feeling dizzy''


"Okay , should I call someone for help?''


"No, it's okay Geet. no one is inside as all have gone out for work''


"Um, then let me help you.'' Geet came out of car, told driver to wait and helped Naina to walk inside. They entered in a room and made Naina lay on bed. She started to leave when Naina forced her to take tea. Geet refused but seeing Naina guilt face she agreed. Naina went to kitchen and Geet helped her. They talked for while and became comfortable. Geet noticed Naina was looking her dress longingly.


"Naina what're you looking?'' Geet asked sipping her tea.


"Geet your dress is so beautiful'' Naina said touching her suit lovingly. Geet saw her eyes was wanting to say something else. She persuaded her to speak up freely.


"Umm Geet! can I borrow your dress for today. I promise will return tomorrow. You know na we can't afford this kind of dresses how much we wish'' she said meekly. Geet knew she was right. She knew how she had been felt seeing expensive dresses in shops and could not have even touched them once. Geet kept her bag on bed took Naina spare suit and went to washroom for change. She came out and handed over her dress to Naina. Naina hugged her saying thanks, happily. Promised her to return tomorrow on which Geet disapproved saying she can keep this as gift. Naina felt delighted. She requested Geet to stay for few minutes so could show her how she looks in her dress. Seeing her happiness Geet agreed. Naina took her to next room and said to wait there till she change and come. Geet casually agreed and settled on bed. She was roaming inside room when found someone was standing out of room . before she could go and check, the door had been locked from out. For very few second she was numb what exactly happened and when came to know, started thrashing door vastly terrified.

Here Naina wore Geet dress, tied hair same like her, took her bag and came out. As she reached to car , started coughing hard and kept her Duppata on mouth, tried to hide her face. Hastily, she sat inside and patted driver shoulder ordering him to leave, avoided any vocal contact with anyone. She was more then enough conscious that could not see, driver was on phone.


"Maan sir, she has come''


"Hmm! Let her come here and be careful, she should be knowing that we know, she was not Geet'' Maan kept receiver down and rushed to same house which was supposed to be Nainas' house.


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Driver reched at entrance of KC. Naina came out, staring around with thief-eyes. She entered inside hiding, waited driver to be disappear. As she saw driver gone , came out and started almost running when suddenly collided with a well built security guy and found herself surrounded by police men.


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Maan reached at place. He eyed some people who were roaming around casually. Those were securities guards who were in simple cloths, following Geet and now waiting for Maan order. They knew Geet was inside and may be Narendra too. Very concentratedly they entered inside along with Maan. They had every information from Naina, where should be found Geet. Every minute away from her, was like hell for Maan yet he had to compose his heart. He could not be weak . With thudding heart he opened the door of same room where Geet supposed to be found but it was empty. Maan frowned. He was sure Geet should be found here only then where she vanished. His heart started beating fast. He had searched whole house but she was no where. Maan was hell scared for her, where is she, when she must be here only. No one seen her going out then where she disappeared? He desperately wanted to see her, want her in his arm, filling his heart that she is safe. Police said house is empty. They started searching whole around. Maan reached at same room still hoping for some clue.


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In same room, in an dark small box sized attic, Geet was all tied, struggling for to be get free. She was scared near death. She could see Maan and police from small holes but could not call or shout as her mouth was all filled with cloths and tied as well even to move itself. She was so helpless to see Maan down, on floor but could not go there to sooth him. And then she saw, him going back...



Precap: "Where is she Narendra, tell me damnit!!!''

"You cant find her Maan, she would rather die there but you could not get her anymore'' Narendra laughed


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