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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 13:


Yeh le paise this was the money doctor returned me yesterday the whole amount!! she thrusted the money into geet's hand... teri maa ki maut ka jimmedaar main hoon geet na main tujhse yeh sab karwaati na yeh sab hota I am sorry


Geet sat in a corner of the room looking at the money for which she has turned herself into somebody's bed charm. She has lost her mother and couldnt see her for once, chamkeeli was even done with the funerals and here she was all lost in... geet couldn't even voice out the deed she was doing with maan when her mother was dying there. Little did she know the truth!!

Aatish-e-Ishq Tu Sab Kuch Jala De

The love she had for maan seemed so senseless, she indeed started to fall for him no not actually started to love him madly. She realized it long back but could accept it knowing the place from where maan got her from. Her love for maan has burnt everything, has burnt her mother


Meri Deewangi Ki Muj Ko Saza De

What punishment she deserves for the madness she had been with till now?? Mohabbat mein deewangi what was she thinking about even when she was loving maan?? She is in no match with him, not even a single aspect she is capable to get him


Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya

Maan looked at the papers which he will shove on dev's face the next day after he gets them signed. He smirked, bus ek aur din dev bhai phir toh sab kuch badal jayega aapki shaadi hoga lekin uske baad main bhi dekhonga kaha jayenge aap!!


Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya

Geet stood infront of the mirror looking at herself, even her image seemed to taunt her. She didn't know when she could cross all those limits and loved maan.


Mere Qatil Tu Mujh Ko Pyar Se Ghail Ker de
Zara Zara
Zara Zara

Her love has killed her mother!! Its true indeed, she fell down crying as her mother's painful screams reached her ears as if calling her to see her before she closed her eyes forever


Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya

The deal got finalized!! Maan is now on cloud9, god the things he wished to happen will happen in one more day!!


Kabhi Ishq Wafa

"I LOVE YOU GEET!!" yes I love you, tumne sikhaya mujhe pyar kya hota hai, wafa kya hota hai and now I will marry you he proudly said it to himself unaware of the cyclone awaiting them


Kabhi Ishq Saza

Kab ho gaya mama?? Kaise ho gaya?? Mera ishq sazaa ban gaya aapke liye!! Aapko bachaane chali aur ab kuch nahi raha na aap aur na ... she looked at the bed on which she is sleeping with maan and again closed her eyes tight


Kabhi Ishq Nasha

Maan took the bottle of wine into hands and gulped it, but it seemed the intoxication geet had on his senses is in no match with the wine


Kabhi Ishaq Maza

It is night again, had he been with geet he would have been deep inside her!! He is addicted to her like a drug and now he knew she is his!! Only his!!


Mera Ishq Hai Rab
Jo Hai Sab se Juda
Kabhi Isha Suna
Kabhi Ishq Dua

maan if u love sam so much y did u eva touch me?? aapne aapse poochiye maan kya aapne sach mein sam se pyar kiya?? Agar kiya hota toh u wud neva have touched me.

You are right geet I never loved sameera. It was you, just you in my life!! The love which maan had never expected to get he is indeed getting now.


Ishq mera Qatil Qatil
Ishq Mera Zalim Zalim
Ishq nahe Yeh Ghao Hai Maan Ka


I killed you mom I killed you, she looked at the newspaper and the head line MAAN SINGH KHURANA THREW A SUCCESS BASH!!! And the contents of it!!! Pictures of maan possessively holding geet and moving out of the hall of party at the end.

PART 7


It was this newspaper which geet's mom saw, she did not allow the doctors to operate as the truth of the pictures revealed. How can she live spoiling her daughter's life??


Ishq Meri Rooh ka Marham
Ban Ke Sham tu ban ke Apna Perwana ker de
Zara Zara
Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya
Piya Piya

Maan slept trying on the landline for endless times to talk to geet. Nobody lifted it, he wanted to tell her that he will arrive the next day but gave up finally thinking he would anyway tell her after he reaches home


Mere Qatil Tu Mujh Ko Pyar Se Ghail Ker de
Zara Zara
Zara Zara
Ishq Junoon Deewangi
Ishq Junoon Deewangi

Lighter was burning the newspaper while dev smirked watching it burn...I cant stop myself from leaving this house maan as I know nothing can be done with the financial crisis but the girl whom you brought home is much precious than this property for you haina??


Aatish-e-Ishq Tu Sab Kuch Jala De

Your love will burn everything maan, I promise!! Maine ghar choda toh uske baad jo hoga uska jimmedar sirf tum hoge, he said it to himself


Meri Deewangi Ki Muj Ko Saza De

The whole room was messed up by geet, she didn't know what is bugging her so much, but she cant be with maan anymore. She will leave him and go away. Her work is done!!


Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya
Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya
Mere Qatil Tu Mujh Ko Pyar Se Ghail Ker de
Zara Zara
Zara Zara

It had been a day geet did not bother eating anything, maan ke aane ka waqt ho gaya!! She looked at the clock and then she started her work, got dressed up the same way maan got her into this mansion, the same way chamkeeli got her dressed.


Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya
Ishq Wafa
Kabhi Ishq Saza
Kabhi Ishq Nasha
Kabhi Ishaq Maza
Mera Ishq Hai Rab
Jo Hai Sab se Juda
Kabi Isha Suna
Kabi Ishq Dua

She wore the same transparent saree, the same way. She took a red color nail polish and applied it and then she beautifully decorated her hair with gajra making it into a plat


Ishq mera Qatil Qatil
Ishq Mera Zalim Zalim
Ishq nahe Yeh Ghao Hai Maan Ka

She binned the strip of birth control pills, her thoughts drifted back to the day when her mother spoke those words


geet agar mujhe kuch hua bhi na toh tu chinta mat kar main wapas aaongi tere paas as ur kid. Ull give me birth again degi na bol??


I will get you back mom, jab tak tum wapas mujhe nahi mil jaati tab tak maan ke saath mujhe rehna padega she sunk on the floor crying


Ishq Meri Rooh ka Marham
Ban Ke Sham tu ban ke Apna Perwana ker de
Zara Zara
Tere Ishq Ki Chadar Orher Deewana Yaar Pukare
Piya Piya
Piya Piya
Mere Qatil Tu Mujh Ko Pyar Se Ghail Ker de
Zara Zara
Zara Zara
Ishq Junoon Deewangi
Ishq Junoon Deewangi

Geet sat on the bed thinking about the day when she will give birth to her mother again, dimming all the lights.



I am really upset this time!! Kya hua girls tum log aise kyun kar rahe ho?? aren't you interested in my work anymore?? Ek update peh likes kam gaye toh ill understand but the same with nasha and bkh too!! My most liked stories even mhh too!! Please hit a like atleast next update after 250 likes strictly


Teaser which I gave will come in the next update


Pyar karne lagi thi aapse socha agar maa ke baare mein aapko bataongi toh aapko bura lagega, lekin tab yeh nahi socha ki jis maa ke liye maine itna kuch kiya wahi maa mujhe chodke chali jayegi. I couldn't see her for once before she died meri kya galti thi maan?? she said she will come back to me as my kid ...I want her she shook him holding his collar... I want her back as my baby, boliye mujhe meri maa milegi na?? Make love to me so that I can get her back, I promise uske baad ill leave everything and go away. Main aapse koi haq nahi maangongi


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PART 12

NEXT PART:

PART 14
Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya likhu kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai
everythiing is messed up
geet lost her mom
nd she can't see her for the last time geet mother died bcoz she got to know the truth about her daughter
so she didn't allow doctor to operate her
but she didn't even once thought about geet
what will happen to her what will be going through
dev also coming up with some of his evil plan
nd now geet just want maan so that she can give birth to her mother again
but she also not even once thought about maan
when he will come to know that geet is going leave him
the girl whom he love whom is his life his world
just leaved him
but in whole update one thing was nice maan confessed his feeling to himself at least

precap
hope nothing will go wrong
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional update😭
geet in so much pain.😭😭
geet's mother saw the newspaper
maan is so happy and he realized his love for geet.
waiting for the next part
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


wow lovely painful update.. one was in pain and one was in love , oh god why u playing like tis with my maaneet, stop ur games, and let my maaneet live in peace, wat u get making them to drown in pain...te way geet crying thinking wen her mom is dieing here she is making love with my maan, oh god tis is te more painful moment for a daughter...te way my maan was so excited without knowing te storm enjoying his success.. my geet dont wory my maan is there for u, who will heal all ur wounds..i love te update so much
Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
maan too started to love geet
geet is in pain waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional n painful update

Geet is in guilt n regret tht becoz of her, her Mom died

Maan finally realized his feeling for Geet n wanted to confessed it

Dev is again making some evil plan
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
osuummm update...😛😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
this song was always my favourite and it suits the situation here.
maan realizes his love but geet is in guilt
update was tremendous
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum part dear 😊

geet is so much pain

maan fnaly realised hs feelngs fr geet

sumthng is cookng in dev's mind

plz yar i do nt want to bear thm pain
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Posted: 12 years ago
Painful update...
Poor geet lost her mother...
Thank god maan realized it's love...
Plzzz dev(il) ko geet ki ass pass v aane mat dena...
Hope maan'll understand her...
Loved it...

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