Pt7/8'Forbidden Fire' Thrd5 Pg1

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mila1

@mila1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Ok my perspective of d apple matched d first explanation

Loved it Annie🤗

I'm not judging d devil n will be patient i think his extreme rage will transform into intense love towards her the cause of his destruction😉...

Cant wait for d next update.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Congrats for the new thred

They already met 12 yrs back...he remebers her...but she doesnt...

He remembers her scared eyes...and he killed his father..his father had bad eyes on geet...!!! ...interesting...

TFP

You already reserved the places for next updates...changed your style...I liked it

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Hi congrats on the new thread! Thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Poor Geet! Well written!

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

amazing update...

as always loving this evil...no matter how harsh he is cant hate him...

poor geet...feeling sorry fr her...

waiting fr next part...

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Thoda thoda pata chal raha devil ke bareme want to know about tat 12 years ago wala history ...update next part soon dear

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Aminagatoen

@Aminagatoen

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Love this story. Beautiful written as always. Can't wait for next part. Thanks for PM.

Do continue.

😊😊😊

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

that was amazing. .. at last maan kissed geet in 7th part

maaneet has a FB n wow the glimpse itself sounds gr8...

so maan killed his father just for geet...then what will happen to anyone else if they try to scare geet or hit on her? ?...

...by the way I am missing rishi. .pooja. .adi. .in ur story

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

First and foremost congrats on new thread..

As for update loved it...

Aniee u write beautifully..

Waiting for next part..

Thanx for pm dear...

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Omg this devil is too dangerous nd scary

I really got scared today

He killed his own father cox of Geet.. Why

Ohh he scared me when he said how will she handle him