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nottyrain

@nottyrain

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

nice update loved it ... hope GEET try to understnd him .. n he giv her a chnce to cope up ... suspense .. ohh i lov suspense in lov striess.. as far as tht symbol of fire n apple was concernd ..srry yaar was abt to post my view bt smhw myu post wasnt being psoted .. nyway .. my thought were smwhr similar .. thnku fr the lovly update :) ❤️ 😊

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

amazing update

so dey both share a very deadly past

and d song selection was deadly gorgeous

each n every word depicts d emotions of dis devil

and ya congo for new thread

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Congratulations On The New Thread

Awesome Update

Continue Soon

Thank You So Much For The PM

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Atheeth mein aisa kya hua tha ki maan wants Geet?? but his desire is so full of concern too...

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Tinker ;)

@TinkerBella

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

[ahhh he looking so hot there uff this killer smirk i am dead🤢🤢🤢]

"Last time I saw you, your eyes, and the fear in your eyes, you know what I did? I killed my own father. And since that day, I am nothing but a devil. You are the reason for my destruction and now you get to suffer with me." He said as he kicked the bed in sheer anger and rage. At that moment he indeed looked like a devil. [ What he killed his own father 😲 i know i know there must me some reson 😕😕 behind it bcs i know my maan is not like this he can't kill his father without any reason thats way love him😳]

awsome update loved it😳

con..soon😃

Edited by SONOMAKTER1 - 12 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

omg amazing mindblowing update aniee.

i have no words yar SIMPLY BEST.muahhh

eagerly waiting for more.

and about love ur devil,ahhh i'm already in LOVE with DEVIL,u know na.hehehehehe.

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

GODDD ME TOTALY DEAD...

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

awesome update
m liking this devil though he has weird ways but something is deep within him
he met geet 12 yrs ago nd he killed his own father fr geet ??????? but y ????/
do cont soon
its very interesting

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

Awesome Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊😊

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

uff ...all the while i was anticipating what next ...:D
bye end for the 1st time ever i was breathless in any ff ACtual mien ...:D :D
Aniee di ...marwaana hai kya sachii mien ..:'(

aur yeh 12 yrs ka kiya chakar chala ..:O
n he killed his own father coz of her ...:D

mummmaaa me scratching my head what is this all yrr ...
unfold the mystery soon ...

mind blowing update ...

loved every bit of his devil-ness ...<3
awesom narration as always ...

plsss update soon ..plss plss plsss plsss

me waiting ...