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Posted: 12 years ago
My bad i was wrong... Loved it ..
Its time to talk...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Audiwalia

My bad i was wrong... Loved it ..
Its time to talk...


you are not bad,

you are you😊

and this is my story😆😉
give me 10-15 minutes and part 14 will be completed
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok given ...waiting waiting waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update. so all four are enjoying the party. finally maan and geet will have time to talk to each other and start their relation afresh now.

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Posted: 12 years ago
DIVORCE
part 14


so 😆 here are lastfew lines of part 14
I will keep adding in this only
keep track hopefully willl complete this part 2day ity self

comments needed

She shut the door and gathered the dishes and washed them, he came around and dried them with a cloth and stacked them.

She waited for him to say something but he did not.

She wondered now what she should do. She looked at the clock it was past midnight, she felt a little strange, he after stacking the dishes settled on the sofa and opened his office bag, and took out a file.

She wondered what was he up to, he looked at him and she knew he wanted that she should sit there next to him.

She went and sat on the sofa next to his.

He handed her the papers, they said that he has transferred all his shares in Savitri Devi's name; she was not surprised, it had to happen someday.

She gave them back after reading them.

He handed her the other file, she pulled a pen out thinking the papers to be of KM transfer rights

But she was surprised to read them

She looked at him with surprise

G: this!!!

M: so, will you marry me

G: yes, but

M: I don't want to delay things, the faster we apply the faster we get married

G: but

M: civil marriage is the fastest legal way, as we are legally divorced, civil marriage will be the best

G: but

M: once you sign them, I will submit them the first thing in the morning that ways we will be married within a month

G: Maan

M: do you not want to give me another chance

G: Maan, you are not getting it, there are complications

M: I will try to resolve them

G: how?

M: Geet, I can't live without you, I know Mother was always wrong, but this time I will not allow her to come between me and my family

G: she will not accept me in any case

M: I don't care, I didn't care all those years back, all u wanted is that you are the best for me, now it's my turn to be the best for you

I signed the papers, he studied them and then kept them in the bag, then he picked his mobile

G: Maan its very late to call someone

M: he knows I will call

G: you knew I will sign

M: I always know what you can do, you are an open book

He talked to the lawyer and asked him to collect the papers from my flat

It struck me that he was not leaving

G: Maan you are not going

M: no, but if you want I can go

G: it's ok

M: now let us say it a night, tomorrow we go to take the kids back

And he went to the bed room

I stood there watching him go, it this would have been some ordinary story, he would have pleaded to remarry, and here he was ordering me, he would have hugged me and kissed me, but this Maan is peculiar, he is way too mechanical, too perfect.

I followed her hoping someday he will tell me that he loves me

So girls do you want me to continue

Or shall I end this with en epilogue


Shruti
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Posted: 12 years ago
post ho gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes this maan is peculiar...too much straight forward ...but loved it...no complications...still had to face so much...
don't end it...we want another 30 -40 updates of this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...

plz cont...I dont want this to end itni jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

yes this maan is peculiar...too much straight forward ...but loved it...no complications...still had to face so much...

don't end it...we want another 30 -40 updates of this...


hey I have other one in my mind😭

I can maximum give 1-2 updates including an epilogue😕

this story is finished

just some romance to add😲😃😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

yes this maan is peculiar...too much straight forward ...but loved it...no complications...still had to face so much...

don't end it...we want another 30 -40 updates of this...


shall I post the prologue of he new one

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