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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: punam2712
WHAT A WONDERFUL UPDATE
SO FINALLY THEY BOTH MET AND DEV WAS RIGHT
MAAN JUMPED TO CONCLUSIONS AND BLASTED ON HER
BUT AM SO HAPPY TO SEE THAT SHE DID NOT LOSE HER COOL AND INFACT QUOTED KABIR
BUT DID IT HIT HIM SOMEWHERE
PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON

Thanks Punam.

Bekaar ka workout kiya Maan ne, inspite of his brothers advice, hai na?😆

Geet has faced a lot, she is not going to back down. Nope, she's going to give it good as she gets.😉

Kabir made an appearence as Mohinder is Hindi ke teacher.😆

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: gudmeet
Hey dear Nisha the update was indeed worth the wait
full of all emotions
Maan's anger
Miri's innocence ( trying to find the tail on his back was too good dear )
dev's suggestion on exercise was really very nice line
dadi's hiding and the song oh too too perfect for the situation
geet's chanting of not shedding tears in front of maan was really enlightening
😆😆 we can also try this trick of hers
and kabir ke dohe
wow yaar school ke din yaad aa gaye
kabirdas, rahimdad ke dohe rat rat kar hum book ke das ban gaye the
😆😆

but daadi is really smart she came at the right time
now she will handle her pota

superb update dear
but this update lacked one thing
ur personal touch ur narrative

will wait eagerly for the next

Hi Gudmeet,

Thanks for that awesome, awesome comment😃

I am so glad you enjoyed that update. I thought Kabir would be perfect touch when I read that Doha somewhere, it suits Maan perfectly. Coincidentally Mohinder is Hindi ke pradhyapak so thought he should be the one form whom Geet heard the doha.😃

As for the narrative, the update was already too long so I didn't add it.

The only thing I would have written in the narrative is that my friends daughter who is Miri's age adores that movie and Princess Merida is her hero. She was my inspiration for that part.😉

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Ekdum mast...full dhamakedar update aahe

Who stole the update...no dought ...its miri...omg too good ...poor gaild ...believing her mother and checking the tail on him with patting on his back...

Loved your description about his wanting for geet when he saw her laughing...

Are baap re ...he kaay kelas tu...gald that geet answered him back bravely rather not breaking down with his harsh words...

Abhi age kuch sochna nahi hai...waiting for next part

Thanks Madhuri

Chan vatata adhun madhun marathi aikun.😃

Kids innocence can lead them to do outrageous things without thinking twice😆

Usse yohmain aur tadpaungi. he deserves it for torturing poor Geet😈

Geet is a person who has alredy face too many harsh realities. She will not back down for anybody.

I am glad you liked Dev, as for Dadi, ti Geet tyanchya ayushyat yenya agodar agdi khachun geli hoti, atta kutha tichyat punha dhairya ala aahe. Give her some time, she will be full on Devi Bonaparte😉

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maansi25

@maansi25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

beautifully written update

hilarious comic sense

maan geet ke samne chup

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Updated my comment on page 84. 😊

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jenny

@ajenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

hi... I just read the story...(thx to Ritzy for recommending)

The story sounds really awesome and trilling to read.

Little Miri is so cute and adorable.. All the characters are perfect in their way.

Well I just hope you'll continue providing english translation, because I can't understand full and pure hindi long long paragraph

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doll9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

i will go with 2 3 times a week update chota wala(if possible big) as m greedy 4 update intejar nahi hota muzse par sab shayad bada wala pasand kare so sab jaisa chahe waisa.